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IN THE NAME OF THE MOON! WRITING COMPETITION? SCHOOLKID COMP!
Name: Jackie Riggs
Nicknames: Jack
Gender: Female
Age: 16
School: Meadowview ~ 8D
Fav. Food: Ham Burgers, Fruit and McDonalds Milkshake
Hated Food: Fish, potato's and most vegetables.
Virtues:
No Pushover - Jack is not a girl who will let someone walk all over her, she stands up for herself. No matter how big the bully she will fight back, harder they fall right? Growing up with 5 older brothers sure teaches a girl how to defend herself, learn to throw fists or live with buggers in your ears and farts in your face.
Keeps her word - If she promises you something, have no doubt she will do it, or die trying. This applies to bets whilst gambling, she promised her oldest brother she would shave her head if he beat her in a arm wrestle... BEST THING SHE EVER DID SHE LOVES LIFE WITH OUT THE HASSLE OF HAIR! 8D
Fighting Spirit - When she has set herself a goal she is suddenly fuelled with the energy from 1000 suns. Seriously, she gets hyperactive, she gets louder and she gives it 100%. If you are kicked down get back up and spit in the face of defeat!
Fun - She is a laugh to be around, she usually hangs around boys so she seems to have a mans sense of humour. She loves to play fight and tell jokes. Even maybe get up to some trouble. She likes practical jokes and parties!
Flaws:
[Weakness] Easily tricked - People might call her... dim... Its not too hard to get her to do what you want, most of the time she wont even know she is being used. She is not the smartest spanner in the box, however if she finds out she has been tricked she will go mad!
Zero Empathy - What does that word mean? really, putting herself into someone's else's shoes is not something she can do. She is not a shoulder to cry on because you will get no sympathy just get told how pathetic you are being... which can seriously piss someone off, then she will get angry because she wont know what she's done wrong.
Blinded By Rage - Jack is a angry person at the best of times, but sometimes when she is ticked over that level she is like a crazy person, any object in her way will be kicked, every person in the way will get abuse. Sometimes she can just wake up in this mood and its total danger zone. She wont stop until she has hurt herself or gets pinned down. There is no reasoning with her.
A total slob - She is gross, seriously, she wears dirty clothes, believes wearing underwear inside out gives them more use, she stinks of smoke, she burps and even picks her nose and wipes it on her pants. She does not see anything wrong with it. Personal hygiene level = zero.
DO NOT MISS OUT THE ABOVE BECAUSE YOU'RE C&PING FROM YOUR QUEST OR WE WILL BE MAD
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: A scary yellow as in cat eye horror movie yellow.
Hair: None, she is bald. Haha. No seriously she shaved it...
Face: Round, Feminine, Gothic, make up, red lips, dark around the eyes. Cheek piercings [x] and maybe one in the middle of her lip, a small black star painted just under her eye? She would be a pretty girl if she wanted to be.
THE STORY ENTRY
There was meant to be something awesome happening tonight... something about a comet and everyone was making a big hooha about it. So her and some friends decided to meet in the park with a couple of bottles of vodka and get pissed. Typical night out. What else is there to do Saturday nights? Her hands in her pockets on her baggy hoodie she walked through the tree's in the park. Eyes set on the sky to see if she could spot what all this fuss was about. Personally if this thing was not going to come down and crash into her school, she did not care, that retard of a science teacher was at the point of killing her for that essay that was due in a month ago. Did she not promise to do that tonight? oh well ******** him! stupid old man. He should go get laid might loosen him up. Now what excuse... she was in the park getting pissed? that would do! At least she SHOULD get points for telling the truth. Meh whatever.
All of a sudden she heard something nearby. Curious she wondered over hiding behind a tree so she was not seen by whoever. It sounded like some REALLY kinky sex (maybe the science teacher took her advise) or maybe more realistically someone getting mugged, which she had always had a morbid curiosity to watch. Or get some pointers because she really was low on cash since her tard of a brother stole her purse. She froze... some kind of monster was attacking someone! What the hell? was this a joke? was some movie getting filmed? WHAT THE ********! She froze, for once the 'tough chick' was just frozen. She was expecting the hidden camra's to come out and say. Ha fooled you! She was actually hoping for it. This was not real no way... how much weed has she smoked today?... that must have been some good s**t.
On closer looking, the kid getting beat up by this THING was the part who spat in her coffee last week, bang out of order, she only ran over his cat by accident.... ignorant c**t, a broken let is not the end of the world. Even though she would love to see his a** get handed to him by some alien/monster/whatever the hell it was, she decided this had nothing to do with her. I mean tough luck, his problem not hers right? She knew the creature was already hurt, however why should she risk her a** for his? No... this was nothing to do with her. She quietly moved away, when she was back on the path she started to run. THIS WAS INSANE! for some reason though.... it was so epic! THAT MONSTER WAS SO COOL LOOKING! man... what a weird dream... maybe she should start going to see that psychiatrist she is meant to see... or find a better dealer. Then again she should do that anyway... to say her current one was her brother and he charged too much. Wait is that why he stole her purse? God! why was she thinking about this now? Shock... it does odd things to people. WHERE WERE THEY WITH HER DAMN VODKA!
She heard something... she had been followed, darting around she saw that thing coming for her! she was sure she had been quiet! OH GOD! HOLY CRAP! She screamed, no point being quiet I mean. What the hell would being quiet do! NOT LIKE SHE WAS NOT ALREADY DEAD SMACK WHERE IT WAS HEADING. She turned and did all that should could think. Leg the ******** out of there! However after only a few seconds she kind of realized... it was faster than her. She looked around for something anything, she was dead she was so ******** dead! In a few seconds if she did not pull herself together. Oh man! Then she had a bright idea. She spun around. This thing was just like a bully! and she knew what she did to bullies. "COME ON YOU UGLY f**! BEING IT!" Tough words for someone who was crapping themselves.
The creature pounced on the side of her, tackling her to the ground its claw like thing sticking into her arm. She screamed once more, it was the most painful thing ever. Before she could even thing it hit her again. It was now or never dude! She had to, funny thing how much she moved and what you could do when your life was in danger. She gritted her teeth and with her other hand punched the beast in its wound, it was time to make this son of a b***h scream! Her hand went into the cut she she thought it was time to tug away at this things insides. After a LONG struggle the beast was down and injured. Bleeding, seeing this as her chance to run, she did so. HOME HERE SHE CAME! NO MORE WEED! EVER!
Name: Jackie Riggs
Nicknames: Jack
Gender: Female
Age: 16
School: Meadowview ~ 8D
Fav. Food: Ham Burgers, Fruit and McDonalds Milkshake
Hated Food: Fish, potato's and most vegetables.
Virtues:
No Pushover - Jack is not a girl who will let someone walk all over her, she stands up for herself. No matter how big the bully she will fight back, harder they fall right? Growing up with 5 older brothers sure teaches a girl how to defend herself, learn to throw fists or live with buggers in your ears and farts in your face.
Keeps her word - If she promises you something, have no doubt she will do it, or die trying. This applies to bets whilst gambling, she promised her oldest brother she would shave her head if he beat her in a arm wrestle... BEST THING SHE EVER DID SHE LOVES LIFE WITH OUT THE HASSLE OF HAIR! 8D
Fighting Spirit - When she has set herself a goal she is suddenly fuelled with the energy from 1000 suns. Seriously, she gets hyperactive, she gets louder and she gives it 100%. If you are kicked down get back up and spit in the face of defeat!
Fun - She is a laugh to be around, she usually hangs around boys so she seems to have a mans sense of humour. She loves to play fight and tell jokes. Even maybe get up to some trouble. She likes practical jokes and parties!
Flaws:
[Weakness] Easily tricked - People might call her... dim... Its not too hard to get her to do what you want, most of the time she wont even know she is being used. She is not the smartest spanner in the box, however if she finds out she has been tricked she will go mad!
Zero Empathy - What does that word mean? really, putting herself into someone's else's shoes is not something she can do. She is not a shoulder to cry on because you will get no sympathy just get told how pathetic you are being... which can seriously piss someone off, then she will get angry because she wont know what she's done wrong.
Blinded By Rage - Jack is a angry person at the best of times, but sometimes when she is ticked over that level she is like a crazy person, any object in her way will be kicked, every person in the way will get abuse. Sometimes she can just wake up in this mood and its total danger zone. She wont stop until she has hurt herself or gets pinned down. There is no reasoning with her.
A total slob - She is gross, seriously, she wears dirty clothes, believes wearing underwear inside out gives them more use, she stinks of smoke, she burps and even picks her nose and wipes it on her pants. She does not see anything wrong with it. Personal hygiene level = zero.
DO NOT MISS OUT THE ABOVE BECAUSE YOU'RE C&PING FROM YOUR QUEST OR WE WILL BE MAD
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: A scary yellow as in cat eye horror movie yellow.
Hair: None, she is bald. Haha. No seriously she shaved it...
Face: Round, Feminine, Gothic, make up, red lips, dark around the eyes. Cheek piercings [x] and maybe one in the middle of her lip, a small black star painted just under her eye? She would be a pretty girl if she wanted to be.
THE STORY ENTRY
There was meant to be something awesome happening tonight... something about a comet and everyone was making a big hooha about it. So her and some friends decided to meet in the park with a couple of bottles of vodka and get pissed. Typical night out. What else is there to do Saturday nights? Her hands in her pockets on her baggy hoodie she walked through the tree's in the park. Eyes set on the sky to see if she could spot what all this fuss was about. Personally if this thing was not going to come down and crash into her school, she did not care, that retard of a science teacher was at the point of killing her for that essay that was due in a month ago. Did she not promise to do that tonight? oh well ******** him! stupid old man. He should go get laid might loosen him up. Now what excuse... she was in the park getting pissed? that would do! At least she SHOULD get points for telling the truth. Meh whatever.
All of a sudden she heard something nearby. Curious she wondered over hiding behind a tree so she was not seen by whoever. It sounded like some REALLY kinky sex (maybe the science teacher took her advise) or maybe more realistically someone getting mugged, which she had always had a morbid curiosity to watch. Or get some pointers because she really was low on cash since her tard of a brother stole her purse. She froze... some kind of monster was attacking someone! What the hell? was this a joke? was some movie getting filmed? WHAT THE ********! She froze, for once the 'tough chick' was just frozen. She was expecting the hidden camra's to come out and say. Ha fooled you! She was actually hoping for it. This was not real no way... how much weed has she smoked today?... that must have been some good s**t.
On closer looking, the kid getting beat up by this THING was the part who spat in her coffee last week, bang out of order, she only ran over his cat by accident.... ignorant c**t, a broken let is not the end of the world. Even though she would love to see his a** get handed to him by some alien/monster/whatever the hell it was, she decided this had nothing to do with her. I mean tough luck, his problem not hers right? She knew the creature was already hurt, however why should she risk her a** for his? No... this was nothing to do with her. She quietly moved away, when she was back on the path she started to run. THIS WAS INSANE! for some reason though.... it was so epic! THAT MONSTER WAS SO COOL LOOKING! man... what a weird dream... maybe she should start going to see that psychiatrist she is meant to see... or find a better dealer. Then again she should do that anyway... to say her current one was her brother and he charged too much. Wait is that why he stole her purse? God! why was she thinking about this now? Shock... it does odd things to people. WHERE WERE THEY WITH HER DAMN VODKA!
She heard something... she had been followed, darting around she saw that thing coming for her! she was sure she had been quiet! OH GOD! HOLY CRAP! She screamed, no point being quiet I mean. What the hell would being quiet do! NOT LIKE SHE WAS NOT ALREADY DEAD SMACK WHERE IT WAS HEADING. She turned and did all that should could think. Leg the ******** out of there! However after only a few seconds she kind of realized... it was faster than her. She looked around for something anything, she was dead she was so ******** dead! In a few seconds if she did not pull herself together. Oh man! Then she had a bright idea. She spun around. This thing was just like a bully! and she knew what she did to bullies. "COME ON YOU UGLY f**! BEING IT!" Tough words for someone who was crapping themselves.
The creature pounced on the side of her, tackling her to the ground its claw like thing sticking into her arm. She screamed once more, it was the most painful thing ever. Before she could even thing it hit her again. It was now or never dude! She had to, funny thing how much she moved and what you could do when your life was in danger. She gritted her teeth and with her other hand punched the beast in its wound, it was time to make this son of a b***h scream! Her hand went into the cut she she thought it was time to tug away at this things insides. After a LONG struggle the beast was down and injured. Bleeding, seeing this as her chance to run, she did so. HOME HERE SHE CAME! NO MORE WEED! EVER!