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IN THE NAME OF THE MOON! WRITING COMPETITION? SCHOOLKID COMP!
Name: Serstine Silva Masters
Nicknames: Silva
Gender: male
Age: 17
School: Hillworth, he was busted for stealing a motorcycle outside of a bar. Well, actually, he wasn’t outside the bar when he was busted, he was four blocks away, with a crashed bike burning in a pile of destruction next to the wall he’d ran into. He was fourteen at the time, and juvie had already had him twice.
Fav. Food: cherries, steak, wine – the wine he tried when he was ten, about the same time his father’s job went down the drain and he turned to the bottle for solace. Of course, his father couldn’t afford it for long, and soon after Silva was caught for stealing a dirtbike from a neighbor in their trailer park. Yes, Silva is a redneck.
Hated Food: milk, fish, coconut
Virtues:
Fast & Coordinated – From running away from the cops, or his younger years with his professional stunt man father, Silva’s got speed like a snake. He’s been in fights before, and never hesitates when it comes to moving. It also comes in handy with his speed addiction, he knows when to dodge and when to jump off (most of the time). It isn’t just running in this case, his hands move at faster than average speed. It comes as even more of a surprise after watching him for a bit. Most of his regular movements are slow and calculated, almost lethargic.
Canny – So many years being tossed through the system has taught Silva how to deal with the situations at hand. It’s downright brutal, often enough. This has nothing to do with intelligence, and everything to do with street smarts.
Determined – This goes with the canny thing. He doesn’t let problems stop him. If he can’t slam through the problem in front of him, he’ll figure out a way to work around it. His mind gets set on a certain thing, and neither hell nor heaven will stop him from doing it. Or so he likes to think. The obsession with bikes is an excellent example of that. That’s actually related to his father, as well. His father broke his spine during a bike stunt, and it ended his career. Silva’s determined to prove that he’s better than his father ever was by mastering bike stunts. Only problem is, he needs a bike for that.
Caustic – He has a biting sense of humor. His words are aimed like barbs at weaknesses or faults, and he lacks the empathy to pull them or soften the blow. Sometimes it’s quite funny, but for the person he’s talking to, he often goes too far. That, of course, is if you can get him to stand still or pay attention long enough to talk to you.
Flaws:
Thrill Seeker – Motorcycles, which have already been mentioned, bikes, skateboards, he’s constantly scamming or borrowing people’s modes of transportation. Fighting is also one of his hobbies, even if he’s skinny as hell, he’s fast. Speed makes up for weight if you use it correctly. He wants to learn to surf, he wants to learn to snowboard. He’s even run off to the ocean a few times to try surfing. The adrenaline rush must make up for emotional ones, because he’s always chasing after it.
Inferiority/Father Complex – Before he broke his spine, Silva’s father was a famous stunt man. Not quite as big as Evil Kenieval, or anything, but big enough that people recognize the name Serstine Masters still, and always wonder whatever happened to the guy. When people compare him to his old man it makes Silva do stupid things. He’s out to prove he’s twice the man his old man was, and if it kills him along the way, oh well. He hates the fact that he carries the same name. One plot line I’d use is when Silva finds out that his father has committed suicide. It will cause him to do a lot more stupid things than usual, not because he mourns the old man, but because now he’ll never be able to compare, since you can’t really compare to a dead man.
Gullible – If it makes sense to him when you first explain it, he’ll believe it. He doesn’t tend to think too deeply into things, and as a result all that natural ability of his can easily be turned against him. He also tends to overestimate people by putting them at the same level as he puts himself, which makes him even more likely to believe when they say they can do something outrageous. It’s because he puts himself at a very high level, because he’s too stupid to back down when the challenge is outrageous. Even if he winds up with broken bones along the way, he will eventually accomplish it. Everyone else has had about the same time as he has to do it, right? So they’ve done the same thing. Or maybe better. That goes back to his inferiority/father complex.
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: narrow, yellow
Hair: Think redneck, silver with streaks of red, maybe?
Face: sharp, angles, long nose, full lips, thicker eyebrows, he isn’t to be considered “pretty” in any form of the word.
THE STORY ENTRY
There was a lot of weird a** s**t that went on in Destiny City. To be honest, when Silva had heard about a simple meteorite about to hit, he had figured it was just another day, hell, if they got hit and died it couldn’t be worse than things were already. Hillworth was as good as being in juvie. Actually, if you asked him, the food was better in juvie. But anything was better than being stuck with his old man.
He gripped the handle of his flashlight a bit tighter as he started up the hill. It was chilly out, but he ignored it. Sleep had failed to come and sneaking out of the dorms was always something he enjoyed, so the idea of going to see the meteorite before it killed them like Porky said it would seemed like a good way to waste the night. A rock slipped out from under his foot and he shifted to catch his balance, looking down at the ground to make sure where he was stepping was better than his last choice. This hill was practically falling apart after the last rain. All the dirt under the rocks had been washed away.
“Omph.” Something, or someone, heavy slammed into Silva’s chest, throwing him off balance completely and sending both him and his assailant backwards head first down the hill. The flashlight flew from his hand as his head hit the ground, rolling a bit before laying there, lighting up the dirt. For a moment Silva and the person on top of him just laid like that, both stunned by the impact.
“What the ********, man?” Silva said once he got his breath back. He shoved the person laying on top of him off, cursing as he reached up to rub the back of his head. That dirt was hard, damn it!
“Get… away,” the male said as he tried to push himself to his feet again.
“Porky?” Silva asked. “Porky, what in the hell is—“
“Get away, you—“
The ground trembled and the flashlight rolled a bit more, bumping against what looked to be a gigantic foot. Silva stared at the foot, slowly looking up to see what was connected to it. It was somewhat like a man, but far larger, with fur covered skin and strange clothing. It looked like something straight out of a B-rated movie, but it didn’t move like one. “What in the hell is that??” he asked, hating the way his voice went up with the question. But seriously, that thing was freaky!
“It’s why you need to go,” Porky said breathlessly, finally getting to his feet only to sway there. The solid as a rock male looked pathetically small in front of the monster, and for a second Silva enjoyed the sight. He and Porky hadn’t gotten along ever since that bike competition that Silva had been disqualified from because of the other boy.
“So I should leave while it kills you, huh?” Silva asked, still sitting there on the ground. He smelt something coppery in the air. “You bleeding?”
“Not as much as he is,” Porky said, reaching down and grabbing a metal pole. It gleamed with blood even in the moonlight, dripping to the ground in a fascinating display. But the hand holding it wasn’t doing too great of a job. It looked as if the pole would fall out of his fist at any moment.
“I could help, you know,” Silva said. “For a small fee.”
“******** off, Silva,” Porky said, grabbing the pole with his other hand as well and lifting it above his head. He let out a gargled bellow and raced forward, only to get slammed by a gigantic fist. The larger boy went flying, his pole dropping from his hand and bouncing twice with the sound of metal hitting rock.
Silva stood, glancing over at where Porky lay, inert. “I’ll collect my fee later,” he said, racing for the pole and skidding like a baseball player into home as the large fist came out once again. He twisted, aiming his blow for the side with the gash and earning a wail of pain in return as he stood.
“Hey!” he said, brandying the pole like a baseball bat. “You’re making me miss my ******** meteorite, you son of a b***h!” he snarled, dodging a blow from the furry hand of the monster. He came up with the pole, hitting the monster’s arm as hard as he could. The monster lashed out in return, slamming his other fist wildly at Silva’s head. Silva managed to duck, but the wild hand came back unexpectedly, hitting him upside the back of his head. He had never fought something with this long of a reach before, he thought as the pain slammed through him. Stupid.
As he fell, though, he saw the gaping wound in the monster’s side and took advantage, slamming the pole into the hole as hard as he could.
Its scream of agony was the last thing he heard as he fell unconscious to the ground.
Name: Serstine Silva Masters
Nicknames: Silva
Gender: male
Age: 17
School: Hillworth, he was busted for stealing a motorcycle outside of a bar. Well, actually, he wasn’t outside the bar when he was busted, he was four blocks away, with a crashed bike burning in a pile of destruction next to the wall he’d ran into. He was fourteen at the time, and juvie had already had him twice.
Fav. Food: cherries, steak, wine – the wine he tried when he was ten, about the same time his father’s job went down the drain and he turned to the bottle for solace. Of course, his father couldn’t afford it for long, and soon after Silva was caught for stealing a dirtbike from a neighbor in their trailer park. Yes, Silva is a redneck.
Hated Food: milk, fish, coconut
Virtues:
Fast & Coordinated – From running away from the cops, or his younger years with his professional stunt man father, Silva’s got speed like a snake. He’s been in fights before, and never hesitates when it comes to moving. It also comes in handy with his speed addiction, he knows when to dodge and when to jump off (most of the time). It isn’t just running in this case, his hands move at faster than average speed. It comes as even more of a surprise after watching him for a bit. Most of his regular movements are slow and calculated, almost lethargic.
Canny – So many years being tossed through the system has taught Silva how to deal with the situations at hand. It’s downright brutal, often enough. This has nothing to do with intelligence, and everything to do with street smarts.
Determined – This goes with the canny thing. He doesn’t let problems stop him. If he can’t slam through the problem in front of him, he’ll figure out a way to work around it. His mind gets set on a certain thing, and neither hell nor heaven will stop him from doing it. Or so he likes to think. The obsession with bikes is an excellent example of that. That’s actually related to his father, as well. His father broke his spine during a bike stunt, and it ended his career. Silva’s determined to prove that he’s better than his father ever was by mastering bike stunts. Only problem is, he needs a bike for that.
Caustic – He has a biting sense of humor. His words are aimed like barbs at weaknesses or faults, and he lacks the empathy to pull them or soften the blow. Sometimes it’s quite funny, but for the person he’s talking to, he often goes too far. That, of course, is if you can get him to stand still or pay attention long enough to talk to you.
Flaws:
Thrill Seeker – Motorcycles, which have already been mentioned, bikes, skateboards, he’s constantly scamming or borrowing people’s modes of transportation. Fighting is also one of his hobbies, even if he’s skinny as hell, he’s fast. Speed makes up for weight if you use it correctly. He wants to learn to surf, he wants to learn to snowboard. He’s even run off to the ocean a few times to try surfing. The adrenaline rush must make up for emotional ones, because he’s always chasing after it.
Inferiority/Father Complex – Before he broke his spine, Silva’s father was a famous stunt man. Not quite as big as Evil Kenieval, or anything, but big enough that people recognize the name Serstine Masters still, and always wonder whatever happened to the guy. When people compare him to his old man it makes Silva do stupid things. He’s out to prove he’s twice the man his old man was, and if it kills him along the way, oh well. He hates the fact that he carries the same name. One plot line I’d use is when Silva finds out that his father has committed suicide. It will cause him to do a lot more stupid things than usual, not because he mourns the old man, but because now he’ll never be able to compare, since you can’t really compare to a dead man.
Gullible – If it makes sense to him when you first explain it, he’ll believe it. He doesn’t tend to think too deeply into things, and as a result all that natural ability of his can easily be turned against him. He also tends to overestimate people by putting them at the same level as he puts himself, which makes him even more likely to believe when they say they can do something outrageous. It’s because he puts himself at a very high level, because he’s too stupid to back down when the challenge is outrageous. Even if he winds up with broken bones along the way, he will eventually accomplish it. Everyone else has had about the same time as he has to do it, right? So they’ve done the same thing. Or maybe better. That goes back to his inferiority/father complex.
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: narrow, yellow
Hair: Think redneck, silver with streaks of red, maybe?
Face: sharp, angles, long nose, full lips, thicker eyebrows, he isn’t to be considered “pretty” in any form of the word.
THE STORY ENTRY
There was a lot of weird a** s**t that went on in Destiny City. To be honest, when Silva had heard about a simple meteorite about to hit, he had figured it was just another day, hell, if they got hit and died it couldn’t be worse than things were already. Hillworth was as good as being in juvie. Actually, if you asked him, the food was better in juvie. But anything was better than being stuck with his old man.
He gripped the handle of his flashlight a bit tighter as he started up the hill. It was chilly out, but he ignored it. Sleep had failed to come and sneaking out of the dorms was always something he enjoyed, so the idea of going to see the meteorite before it killed them like Porky said it would seemed like a good way to waste the night. A rock slipped out from under his foot and he shifted to catch his balance, looking down at the ground to make sure where he was stepping was better than his last choice. This hill was practically falling apart after the last rain. All the dirt under the rocks had been washed away.
“Omph.” Something, or someone, heavy slammed into Silva’s chest, throwing him off balance completely and sending both him and his assailant backwards head first down the hill. The flashlight flew from his hand as his head hit the ground, rolling a bit before laying there, lighting up the dirt. For a moment Silva and the person on top of him just laid like that, both stunned by the impact.
“What the ********, man?” Silva said once he got his breath back. He shoved the person laying on top of him off, cursing as he reached up to rub the back of his head. That dirt was hard, damn it!
“Get… away,” the male said as he tried to push himself to his feet again.
“Porky?” Silva asked. “Porky, what in the hell is—“
“Get away, you—“
The ground trembled and the flashlight rolled a bit more, bumping against what looked to be a gigantic foot. Silva stared at the foot, slowly looking up to see what was connected to it. It was somewhat like a man, but far larger, with fur covered skin and strange clothing. It looked like something straight out of a B-rated movie, but it didn’t move like one. “What in the hell is that??” he asked, hating the way his voice went up with the question. But seriously, that thing was freaky!
“It’s why you need to go,” Porky said breathlessly, finally getting to his feet only to sway there. The solid as a rock male looked pathetically small in front of the monster, and for a second Silva enjoyed the sight. He and Porky hadn’t gotten along ever since that bike competition that Silva had been disqualified from because of the other boy.
“So I should leave while it kills you, huh?” Silva asked, still sitting there on the ground. He smelt something coppery in the air. “You bleeding?”
“Not as much as he is,” Porky said, reaching down and grabbing a metal pole. It gleamed with blood even in the moonlight, dripping to the ground in a fascinating display. But the hand holding it wasn’t doing too great of a job. It looked as if the pole would fall out of his fist at any moment.
“I could help, you know,” Silva said. “For a small fee.”
“******** off, Silva,” Porky said, grabbing the pole with his other hand as well and lifting it above his head. He let out a gargled bellow and raced forward, only to get slammed by a gigantic fist. The larger boy went flying, his pole dropping from his hand and bouncing twice with the sound of metal hitting rock.
Silva stood, glancing over at where Porky lay, inert. “I’ll collect my fee later,” he said, racing for the pole and skidding like a baseball player into home as the large fist came out once again. He twisted, aiming his blow for the side with the gash and earning a wail of pain in return as he stood.
“Hey!” he said, brandying the pole like a baseball bat. “You’re making me miss my ******** meteorite, you son of a b***h!” he snarled, dodging a blow from the furry hand of the monster. He came up with the pole, hitting the monster’s arm as hard as he could. The monster lashed out in return, slamming his other fist wildly at Silva’s head. Silva managed to duck, but the wild hand came back unexpectedly, hitting him upside the back of his head. He had never fought something with this long of a reach before, he thought as the pain slammed through him. Stupid.
As he fell, though, he saw the gaping wound in the monster’s side and took advantage, slamming the pole into the hole as hard as he could.
Its scream of agony was the last thing he heard as he fell unconscious to the ground.