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IN THE NAME OF THE MOON! WRITING COMPETITION? SCHOOLKID COMP!
Name: Adda Gao.
Nicknames: --
Age: 16.
Birthday: October 30, 1993.
Sign: Libra.
Blood Type: AB.
Fav. Food: Lentil Soup.
Hated Food: ANYTHING with onions, drinks with a watery or sour aftertaste.
School: Crystal Academy.
Hobbies:
Gymnastics! - The Olympic sport is her life. Since youth, Adda has had an uncontrollable obsession with the sport. Everyday, after school, she is with her trainer perfecting her performance on the blue mat.
Volunteering - Even though it is more of a forced activity from her parents, Adda participates in giving back to the community by going to volunteer events. She is not fond of the gesture but does enjoy seeing a smile sprawl out on a person's face due to her kindness.
Collecting Blue Undies - It is a weird...hobby but Adda adores the color blue. She expresses this adoration by collecting undies that are the stated color. From stripped knickers to undergarments a little move revealing, she has it all.
Gemstone: Opal.
Virtues:
We are going to have so much fun! - Adda is very optimistic. She always looks to the brighter side of things and believes that looking at the world through such a point of view is one secret to everlasting happiness.
I swear on my life, I will never tell! - Secrets are meant to be kept secret. Promises are never meant to be broken. If you ever have a secret to tell Adda, she will promise never to tell anyone.
Oh come here hunny! Everything will be alright! - Adda is a softy to sadness, especially to tears that are shed. She will hold your hand and tell you it is alright to cry.
You go, girl! - Adda can be anyone's personal cheerleader, cheering them on and telling them to go for the goal. She loves to encourage people and hope that they do their best.
Flaws:
Why does this have to be so haaaaaaarrd? - Unfortunately, Adda whines about things she cannot complete on her own. She gives up easily and has little determination. This is what causes her to become lazy with homework and projects.
Oops, I did it again! - Continuously, Adda will make mistakes in things she finds utterly difficult. She never seems to realize her mistakes no matter how many times she repeats them.
*&#%(*@$(*%(*#! - Make this girl mad and be ready to obtain a large lashing of vile words. When Adda gets pissed off, she releases it in a fury of curses and fits. She'll calm down eventually, after she gets the matter off her mind.
Unless there is cake involved... - Unfortunately, Adda believes in equivalent exchange. She will never truly help someone unless there is a material reward in return.
Physical Description:
Hair: Her hair is a mess of curls pulled back into a choppy bun. Part of her hair frames her face and her bangs square off at the touch of her eyebrows. Click for examples.
Eyes: Wide brown eyes that somewhat arch in appearance. Hiding them away are a pair of circular eye spectacles.
Face: A smooth jawline with a flat chin. It gives Adda a more boyish look. Her cheeks are very plump.
Body: Even though she has a petite waist, Adda has large curved thighs and somewhat bulky arms. Due to all her gymnastics training, her body is well muscled. Adda has a fair skin tone that can be compared to the tan of a sparrow's underbelly.
Fashion: Uniform - Adda does not change much of her school's uniform. She sports a pair of striped, powder blue shorts under the skirt. Upon her feet are simple penny loafers with some leg warmers. Adda wears a silver bracelet on her arm, decorated with star charms.
Everyday - Adda dresses for the season of the year. If it is cold, she sports heavy sweaters and her star speckled scarf. When the weather begins to warm up, she changes to a spotted tang top and a long flowing skirt and falls down to her ankles. Rarely, does her outfits ever stray away from the color blue.
THE STORY ENTRY
"Ugh, she didn't have to slap me..."
Rubbing her cheek that was stinging with pain, Adda blinked her eyes which were welling up with tears. "If she didn't like me, she could have said so!"
Another date, another rejection, another time walking down the streets with sorrow in her heart. Playing in the game of love was such a terrible thing. There was only a chance one would lose. It was all how one played their cards, but Adda kept on getting a total over twenty-one. The pain seemed to hurt more as it was after her birthday...What luck.
Trudging down the darkness of the streets, Adda's eyes cascaded over decorations of ghouls and ghosts. Halloween was always her favorite holiday, but there was always a chance to just stay home and hand out candy to the tiny tots that ring the doorbell. By now, the pain upon her cheek had diminished. She was feeling better now. She had to look ahead, she would find love eventually!
And then...there she laid. A petite female suited in a sailor fuku. Her 'costume' was ripped to shreds, causing her to bare a large amount of skin. Adda could have died. Tiptoeing up to the out cold female, Adda felt like a prince. There was a sleeping beauty in front of her. Well, she wasn't all beautiful considering she snored somewhat, but she was on the borderline of drop dead gorgeous.
"She looks hurt..." Adda muttered to herself in thought. "Heck yea! This is my chance!"
Slowly, Adda pushed away her bangs away and bent over the unconscious girl. Her lips were puckered as her face neared. Hell, it was horrible to take advantage of a female like so. But she wouldn't know right...right? As Adda neared her mouth to the other, the Sailor Senshi's eyes shot open. Immediately, she pushed Adda away and took a battle stance. Adda blinked, a bewildered look on her face.
"Look, I wasn't trying to do something, I swear-" she bellowed towards the other, but was cut short as the Sailor Senshi disappeared into a sparkling tornado of light.
Remembering a public broadcast seen on the television speaking of citizens who see such embodiments, Adda picked up her phone. Dialing 911, an operator spoke.
"Yes, may I help you?"
"Operator, please contact the cops." she said.
The operator gave a 'hmmph'. "Yes miss, what is your location and what did they take?" the operator said in a mundane tone.
Oblivious to the statement, Adda felt her heart flutter. "Ma'am, please call the cops...I think I just had my heart stolen!"
(418 words.)
Name: Adda Gao.
Nicknames: --
Age: 16.
Birthday: October 30, 1993.
Sign: Libra.
Blood Type: AB.
Fav. Food: Lentil Soup.
Hated Food: ANYTHING with onions, drinks with a watery or sour aftertaste.
School: Crystal Academy.
Hobbies:
Gymnastics! - The Olympic sport is her life. Since youth, Adda has had an uncontrollable obsession with the sport. Everyday, after school, she is with her trainer perfecting her performance on the blue mat.
Volunteering - Even though it is more of a forced activity from her parents, Adda participates in giving back to the community by going to volunteer events. She is not fond of the gesture but does enjoy seeing a smile sprawl out on a person's face due to her kindness.
Collecting Blue Undies - It is a weird...hobby but Adda adores the color blue. She expresses this adoration by collecting undies that are the stated color. From stripped knickers to undergarments a little move revealing, she has it all.
Gemstone: Opal.
Virtues:
We are going to have so much fun! - Adda is very optimistic. She always looks to the brighter side of things and believes that looking at the world through such a point of view is one secret to everlasting happiness.
I swear on my life, I will never tell! - Secrets are meant to be kept secret. Promises are never meant to be broken. If you ever have a secret to tell Adda, she will promise never to tell anyone.
Oh come here hunny! Everything will be alright! - Adda is a softy to sadness, especially to tears that are shed. She will hold your hand and tell you it is alright to cry.
You go, girl! - Adda can be anyone's personal cheerleader, cheering them on and telling them to go for the goal. She loves to encourage people and hope that they do their best.
Flaws:
Why does this have to be so haaaaaaarrd? - Unfortunately, Adda whines about things she cannot complete on her own. She gives up easily and has little determination. This is what causes her to become lazy with homework and projects.
Oops, I did it again! - Continuously, Adda will make mistakes in things she finds utterly difficult. She never seems to realize her mistakes no matter how many times she repeats them.
*&#%(*@$(*%(*#! - Make this girl mad and be ready to obtain a large lashing of vile words. When Adda gets pissed off, she releases it in a fury of curses and fits. She'll calm down eventually, after she gets the matter off her mind.
Unless there is cake involved... - Unfortunately, Adda believes in equivalent exchange. She will never truly help someone unless there is a material reward in return.
Physical Description:
Hair: Her hair is a mess of curls pulled back into a choppy bun. Part of her hair frames her face and her bangs square off at the touch of her eyebrows. Click for examples.
Eyes: Wide brown eyes that somewhat arch in appearance. Hiding them away are a pair of circular eye spectacles.
Face: A smooth jawline with a flat chin. It gives Adda a more boyish look. Her cheeks are very plump.
Body: Even though she has a petite waist, Adda has large curved thighs and somewhat bulky arms. Due to all her gymnastics training, her body is well muscled. Adda has a fair skin tone that can be compared to the tan of a sparrow's underbelly.
Fashion: Uniform - Adda does not change much of her school's uniform. She sports a pair of striped, powder blue shorts under the skirt. Upon her feet are simple penny loafers with some leg warmers. Adda wears a silver bracelet on her arm, decorated with star charms.
Everyday - Adda dresses for the season of the year. If it is cold, she sports heavy sweaters and her star speckled scarf. When the weather begins to warm up, she changes to a spotted tang top and a long flowing skirt and falls down to her ankles. Rarely, does her outfits ever stray away from the color blue.
THE STORY ENTRY
"Ugh, she didn't have to slap me..."
Rubbing her cheek that was stinging with pain, Adda blinked her eyes which were welling up with tears. "If she didn't like me, she could have said so!"
Another date, another rejection, another time walking down the streets with sorrow in her heart. Playing in the game of love was such a terrible thing. There was only a chance one would lose. It was all how one played their cards, but Adda kept on getting a total over twenty-one. The pain seemed to hurt more as it was after her birthday...What luck.
Trudging down the darkness of the streets, Adda's eyes cascaded over decorations of ghouls and ghosts. Halloween was always her favorite holiday, but there was always a chance to just stay home and hand out candy to the tiny tots that ring the doorbell. By now, the pain upon her cheek had diminished. She was feeling better now. She had to look ahead, she would find love eventually!
And then...there she laid. A petite female suited in a sailor fuku. Her 'costume' was ripped to shreds, causing her to bare a large amount of skin. Adda could have died. Tiptoeing up to the out cold female, Adda felt like a prince. There was a sleeping beauty in front of her. Well, she wasn't all beautiful considering she snored somewhat, but she was on the borderline of drop dead gorgeous.
"She looks hurt..." Adda muttered to herself in thought. "Heck yea! This is my chance!"
Slowly, Adda pushed away her bangs away and bent over the unconscious girl. Her lips were puckered as her face neared. Hell, it was horrible to take advantage of a female like so. But she wouldn't know right...right? As Adda neared her mouth to the other, the Sailor Senshi's eyes shot open. Immediately, she pushed Adda away and took a battle stance. Adda blinked, a bewildered look on her face.
"Look, I wasn't trying to do something, I swear-" she bellowed towards the other, but was cut short as the Sailor Senshi disappeared into a sparkling tornado of light.
Remembering a public broadcast seen on the television speaking of citizens who see such embodiments, Adda picked up her phone. Dialing 911, an operator spoke.
"Yes, may I help you?"
"Operator, please contact the cops." she said.
The operator gave a 'hmmph'. "Yes miss, what is your location and what did they take?" the operator said in a mundane tone.
Oblivious to the statement, Adda felt her heart flutter. "Ma'am, please call the cops...I think I just had my heart stolen!"
(418 words.)
