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OOC: Would anyone mind if I start compiling this into some sort of coherent order which we will call chapter 1? I think we should start it before it gets too long. I copied and pasted it all to a word document exactly the way it is (but without gaps between the paragraphs) and we're already at seven pages. (My odd perfectionist mind is telling me to organize things again!)
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OOC: I wouldn't mind too much. I think it would definitely help. 3nodding
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OOC: I was gonna put the chapter together, since I was gonna put it in one of the reserved spaces. I think we should call it when we actually get to the House, so we have a definate starting point for the next chapter after that.
OOC: Actually, if you don't mind, Random-san, could you leave the spaces and when we're done send it to me? I have a rabid editing mind, as well as a little bit of control-freak. It would be weird to have things like Music tuning her violin, then Plague talking about Music turning her violin after Music talks about it.

IC: Ori blinked, drawn back from her daydream about motorcycles. "I want to hear you play!" She picked up on the conversation immediately.
Pyra, who has spent the day in a hotel room with the crack-headed seven year old, passed her the drawing pad.
Ori looked at it, then at Plague. "Woah." She tossed it to the lab-coated girl across the aisle.
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Music shook her head again. She was starting to feel slightly sick.
"L..look." She said, fighting to keep her voice steady. "C..can I play like this?" Extending her arm, she showed them all her trembling hand.
"I can't."
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Kuno saw a younger girl toss a sketchbook to Plague. When she looked at what was drawn, she was amazed. Her eyes widened and her jaw dropped. She'd never seen such an amazing drawing.

"Wow...That's really good," Kuno said, dumbstruck. "Who drew that?"
Vivi looked at the girl named music and sat cross legged in the seat. " Well if you can't play then you can't play. We want you to sound your best, Maybe when you warm up to us you'll play for us. It'll sound nice. I always liked the sound of a violin, sometimes I wish I could play it but the last time I tried it sounded like that cats that slept with me at night in the abanded school." Vivi's eye twitched then smiled again. "Oh i forgots to tell you all. I'm Vivi and this is my slient brother Neko." She pointed to the older teenager that had been asleep the whole time.
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Music smiled nervously at Vivi. "It's nice v...very to meet you both. And yes, I'll play l...later."
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Kuno gave a lopsided grin to Vivi and her brother. "Nice to meet you, Vivi."
Vivi pulls out the finger puppet that looks like Music and drew a smile on the face of the paper doll. " YAY now we are friends. Right?" She makes the finger puppet nod, and points it into Music's direction. " Right?" She grined almost like the cheshire cat. Vivi cocks her head to the side and Kuno and smiled with her head still in the same position. "Nice to meet you too."
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Music reached out, patting the puppet gently on the head. "I guess we can be friends," she said.
As she reached for the doll, she exposed her arm. Vivid pink scars crisscrossed up her pale skin, some disappearing under the sleeve of her overlarge T-shirt, only to reappear, snaking up her neck and cheek.
OOC: Everything up until I made my little note is now in my journal. I know Volital wanted to edit it, and I figured the rest of you did as well, so I figured the best place to post it would be my journal (you are the only three who can see it by the way). I edited it as well but I probably missed some things. I want all of you to read through it thoroughly because I had to rearrange things and I want to know if you agree with what I did.
Ori made a face that made her look almost as wide-eyed as an anime character. "WOAH."
Pyra looked at her. "What?"
"Naaaathinggggg..." Ori grinned. "Anyway, it's nice to meet you Vivi!"


OOC: I CLAIM MUSIC AS ORI'S DORM PARTNER. OR PLAGUE. YA, PLAGUE. PLAGUE IS NOW ORI'S PARTNER!!! biggrin
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OOC: Everything up until I made my little note is now in my journal. I know Volital wanted to edit it, and I figured the rest of you did as well, so I figured the best place to post it would be my journal (you are the only three who can see it by the way). I edited it as well but I probably missed some things. I want all of you to read through it thoroughly because I had to rearrange things and I want to know if you agree with what I did.


OOC: I've edited the whole thing to this point, and I'm gonna post it in one of our RESERVED spaces on the first page of the thread once we get to a good place to end the chapter.
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Music looked over at Plague, still holding the sketchbook, and craned her neck to see the picture inside.

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