[H E L P] Roleplay Mentoring - We're here for you!

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[FaeMelody]

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[Hikari Yuuhi]

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[FaeMelody]

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[Gentle Cynic]

Username; xXGippalXx
Years Roleplaying; 4
Literacy Rating: Semi Literate to Literate
Literacy level you’d like to be: n/a
Area/s you want mentoring in: Everywhere
Roleplaying sample Covenant plasma fire splashed overhead as the three remaining Spartans of Blue Team dove for cover. John, Fred and Kelly. They returned fire, and tossed a grenade each. The plasma fire stopped. Coming out of cover Fred searched the area, and was instantly pushed out of the way of a plasma beam that pierced Kelly's right shoulder. She didn't scream, but wanted to. John instantly got between the fire and his teammates, he fired three short bursts of his battle rifle and silenced the Jackal that had caused the conflict. "Are you alright?" John asked Kelly. "Yeah," she started, "I'm fine.." She looked up to them. "Thanks Kelly." Fred said as he helped her up. Just then a sqaud of Marines arrived at the scene. They all spread out to secure the area. "Master Chief!" a Marine called out, "You gotta see this..." he sounded amazed with a hint of fright.

John made his way to the hill, and reached the top. On the field in front of hum were thousands of covenant forces. Frontline Grunts, then Elites and Jackals, and more Jackals in the rear. Banshee's flew overhead, there were Wraith Plasma Tanks in the rear and many Ghosts around the battalion. "Chief?" Cortana was wondering if he was considering retreat. "It's still not enough.." John said as he slapped a new clip in his Assault Rifle. The other two joined his side and the marines followed. In truth there was no real retreat, they were on a cliffside, to the rear ocean, with jagged rocks, to each side, was land, but eventually led to ocean, and then the threat staring into their faces.Fred spoke to John, "When are our reinforcements coming?" he asked. "I don't know.." John said, he hoped that they had not run into trouble on the way over. "Hey over here!" A marine called out, "I found an underground bunker!" John looked over to the old metallic structure. It looked sturdy enough, and well if it came down to it, they would have to fall back inside. John hoped that the Reinforcements made it.

Then the unmistakable roar of a Brute Chieftan was heard, John and the others turned right and saw a mass of Brutes and Brutes in Choppers, riding in tight circles, as if waiting for something. John was at about 59% health, his HUD indicated many health issues such as broken bones and internal bleeding, a severe concussion. He was sure that the others had similar problems. They had been out for weeks and were awaiting extraction, but the last transport was attacked and thus killed the rest of the SPARTAN-IIIs. "s**t!" A marine said as he backed up, he was losing it. "I don't wanna die!" he screamed, "Calm yourself soldier!" Kelly demanded. She then turned to John, "Why haven't they attacked?" she asked. "I don't know.." John replied, "but it can't be good."

Favorite Genre: most
Availability online: daily, mornings pst

[Catuirca]

Username; Catuirca
Years Roleplaying; 3
Literacy Rating: Semi
Literacy level you’d like to be: Literate +
Area/s you want mentoring in: Detailing, Combat
Roleplaying sample (( its a post from one of the bar rp's I'm in ))
Madeline nodded. "Sorry I couldn't move you on to the couch. I wasn't strong enough to lift you." She thought about what he said, she didn't really want to talk about it, but then again it might help. It was either this or allow Jamie into her head. She bit her lip as she thought before looking up at him. "I suppose I could tell you, I don't normally like talking about it, my dream."

She sighed and then started. "Just to tell you I don't remember much of my nightmare when I wake up. When I first started having I couldn't remember anything all I remember was this feeling of fear. Since then I've been remembering more of my dream. The only things I remember though is that there was a lot of blood and screaming." She stopped and looked down at her hands. "Recently there has been more, theres this girls voice telling someone named Katherine to run. After the person says this theres this dark evil chuckle." She sighed and looked back up at him. "Thats all I remember."
Favorite Genre: romance
Availability online: daily, during the afternoons.

[FaeMelody]

Thank you for applying to [HELP]!

Your Mentors are as followed,
xXGippalXx Seraph is going to be you guide on this learning adventure, with a little help from those in their specialities as you reach them.

Catuirca, I'm going to help you with detailing and combat, with some examples and input from the esteemed FlamingHeart.

The link to your private classrooms should reach you shortly!

[Cassy666]

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