And no, don't start crying about people picking on you cause we all get nipped in the butt for one or more things we ALL do, including me, Zeke, and even the mods.
But even the most lazy of rpers manage good grammar and sentence stucture even if it's one line. I shouldn't have to make an example but since you'll outcry someone's targeting you, Zane is a prime example of how much grammar, punctuation, vocabulary, and sentence stucture can improve considering he was no worse off than you. This comes back to the same 'posting in detail' thing that I already had to n** you about.
And dont think its a personal vendetta by anyone either as even the admin, Zeke has warned you multiple times about onelining and grammar.
Everyone's victim to a little writer's block, but repeating the same word over and over is ridiculous. No one expects you to write a novel, but a lot of effort went into making this rp some effort should atleast be reciprocaed back.