Heavenly Knightess
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well it not necessary the character that the problem..meh...don't worry i'll figure something out.
So what seems to be the problem then?
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supremeviva
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well it not necessary the character that the problem..meh...don't worry i'll figure something out.
So what seems to be the problem then?
Well Cloud and Squall had much more serious roles in their games but they managed to work out in the end.
So come on, tell us more about this character that way we can start figuring out how to adjust properly.
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lol you really want me to show you the full profile for him?
sure but remeber you asked for it..
give me a few minute to get everything in a post.
sure but remeber you asked for it..
give me a few minute to get everything in a post.
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here a copy of the profile form one of my main guilds along with relevant data please note this version isn't a watered down version but a more full complete one disigned for massive combat any version i would use would be a smaller weaker variant of some sorts.
Name: Korlon Andromeda Vellor
Alias: Dante Fisher, Devastator, Viva
Age:25 ((Due to his Ancient DNA he looks 20 no matter how old he really is.))
Race:Human/Ancient aka Edenain
Appearance 1
Weight
Human: 200 lbs
Ancient: Around 550
Ascendant: 2056
Height:
Human:6'0
Ancient:10'
Ascendant: about 15 feet
Head.
Human: Viva's hair and eyes change color though out the year. During the Spring and Summer his hair is a medium shade of blond with deep solemn blue green eyes. During the Fall and winter is hair takes on a light brownish look and so do his eyes. A long thin scar runs down the right side of his face from his eyebrow down to his chin.
Ancient.(same as above with slight changes) His hair turns a a midnight black with a red highlights near the roots of his hair and hangs down to his shoulder. His eyes take on a Ice blue or grayish color to them
Ascendant (same as above with slight changes) His black and red streaked hair falls down to his shoulder blades His hair seeming is constantly waving as if in a never ending breezes. His eyes have lost all color and are nothing more but two pure white orbs that radiate a soft light. The skin on the outside corner of his eyes has small cracks in it that glow with a soft white light
Body:
Human: viva is more muscular due to a life of constant training. He sports shoulders and arms capable of even making a black smith jealous. He could almost be called lanky because of his long legs but his sheer mass seems to hide that fact. His body is scared for countless battles though they seem to fit him and only increase the deadly air that surrounds him. his most noticeable scars are the one on his face, a jagged one on his shoulder , a thin scar winding up his left calf, three slanting scars on his back running form under his left shoulder blade down to right above his right hip., and a faint 8point star burst scar taking up most of his left pec. This scar is called a clan mark. Basically is a symbol branded onto a newborn Ancient to identity his or her clan.
Ancient; (same as above with changes) He stands around 10 feet tall with muscles in proportion. The scar on his chest starts to glow softly with a white light and the veins in his fore arms pulse with a white light
Ascendant (same as before with changes) He now stands at 15 feet tall with the rest of his body in proportion. He massive size usually scares off most enemies seeing how a man only comes up to his knees. and with hands wide enough to pick one up by the middle. The pluseing light in his forearms. spread up to his shoulders and becomes a steady glow.
Clothes. Viva tends to wear dark color clothing or armor. his usual attire are black fingerless gloves a black t shirt that doesn't hide his muscles well, black jeans, and a long black jacket with the tail hanging near his ankles.
Appearance 2:((Fanart done by [~skyeprints~]))
Weapons.
he is known to use a wide selection of weapons from many different time periods. From swords and bows to assault rifles and grenades to the energy swords and pulse rifles of the Ancients
hand to hand:Viva hand to hand skills rely on mainly targeting the neck and spine of the enemy. Due to unrepairable damage, he cannot kick above waist level, but instead prefers to throw a knee. His attacks are strong enough to pulverize bone and shred organs with a single hit. Though most of his attacks are intended to stun his target long enough for him to get into position to break their neck.
Main weapons: Viva halberd is best described to look something like a trident. Though the outside prongs are curved to the inside like horns and are serrated on the outside edge with a angular axe head placed below the bottom of the prong. While the middle prong is longer and widens then narrows into a diamond like shape at the tip.
He also has strapped to his right bicep at most time a jeweled dagger. He usually wields this dagger inverted in his right hand
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The blades on the both weapons are made form the rare element Isolonium. A indestructible element that can also amplify energy directed into it.
Weapons style: Being born in the military society of Talonron, he is skilled in all weapon use, but prefers polearms ((spear, glaives, halberds.)) or swords. He is surprising agile and flexible for someone his size often taking his opponents off guard with his skill with his halberd. His dagger is also balanced making it a excellent throwing weapon.
Powers and abilities: He is very skilled in magic and combat. Due to his mastery of the elements of Fire, Water, and Lava he has gained complete control of these elements and due feats such as using rain as a weapon. He can also use other elements, but he is weaker in those fields.
In human form he is capable of dead lifting 10 tons, and reaching speeds of 45 mph. He also has a enhance sense of smell. Along with better eyesight and hearing than most humans.
In his Ancient form, his ability level jumps drastically allowing for him to lift over 125 tons and runs at speed over 85 mph.
In his final Ascendant form it is unknown just how strong or how fast it is. This mainly due to the fact that he has only done combat in his Ascendant form two times, but it is thought to be far superior than a Ancient.
He has several psychic powers such as telepathy and telekinesis but is generally weak in those areas.
He can regenerate any severed limbs and heal his wounds instantly but as a huge cost of energy leaving him weak, and has limited immortality due to his Ancient DNA.
He absorbs the spiritual energy of those he kills adding on to his power. He can use this energy like a reserve. The more enemies he kill the bigger the reserve. The downside to this is that his body can only hold so many souls before transcending to the next plane of existence ((Note this doesn't mean dieing.))
Another natural ability is the bend space on itself allowing him to teleport to areas where he has been before.
Known spells:
Infurnace: the Ancient word for fire. Capable of controlling fire. Mainly used to make enemies instantly catch on fire.
Inferni: A more advanced form of Infunace. This spell ignites the atmosphere around a group of enemies engulfing them in a raging inferno.
Aquas: The Ancient command word for water. It most common combat use is for turning the air inside the lungs into water, drowning enemies.
Aquatus: A advanced form of Aquas. This spell allows Viva to adjust the water pressure inside a enemy's body. For example. He could increase the pressure of someone's cerebral-spinal fluid and crush someone's brain form the inside, or cause a limb to swell up and exploded.
Magmus: The Ancient word for Lava or Magma. This spell causes jets of lava to erupt form the ground under enemies feet.
Magnami: A advanced version of Magmus. causes a curtain of lava to erupt around a group of enemies encircling them before collapsing inwards and burning them in a sea of lava.
Edea Inferi Draco: Inferi Zar're This the basic form of the "Flame Strike" technique. The first phrase cause blue and white fire to engulf his arm. Near the his hand the flames will flare up to the shape of a dragons head made of white fire with two blues eyes. The second phrase of this attack causes the "dragon" to release a jet of intense flame. The jet will practically burn though whatever is in its path till it reaches a predetermined spot when it will explode into a mild inferno hot enough to vaporise most organic things.
Edea Bisor Inferi Draco: Bisor Inferi Zar're This is a advanced form of the "Flame Strike". The first phrase acts the same as the basic spell expect it happens on the other arm as well. The second phrase cause the dragon head on each hand to let out a jet of flame as the same time. These jets can be controlled mentally unlike the basic form. They still will burn though till they reach the required spot before detonating. The heat form this blast is hot enough to slag ((partly melt)) most metal. This uses up alot more energy than the basic form
Edea Trigor Inferi Draco: Trigor Inferi Zar're ti sor Ragour'rou This if the most advance form of the "Flame Strike" technique. The first phrase appears exactly identical to the advanced form, causing both arms to ignite and flames to form into dragon heads on each hand. What isn't seen in the channeling of energy to the lungs and the throat of the user. The second phase require the user to intake a large amount of oxygen. When exhaled, a third jet of flame escapes form the mouth of the user along with the two flames form the arms. Only the arm jets can be mentally controlled . The one form the mouth flies straight. When they reach their target the jets converge causing a massive explosion capable of melting even the hardest stone in mere seconds. This spell takes a large chunk of energy out of the user.
Edea Bisor Aquatus Draco: Sargi ti sor Aquai This is the advanced "Tide Dragons" technique . The first phrase cause the ground to rupture, allowing two pillars of water shaped like dragons to explode up. The Dragons often intertwining and engulfing any enemy hurled up in the air. The second phrase cause the dragons to plummet into the ground dousing the area in a tidal wave of water. This uses up a decent amount of energy
Edea Bisor Magmusor Draco: Draco Riou'lou'bis This is the advanced form of the "Volcano Dragons" technique. The first phrase cause the ground the target to crumble away and lava to rise to surface stranding the target. The second phrase cause the moat of lava to rocket into the air forming a curtain. From the curtain two dragons will randomly rise out from in the the curtain and let out a jet of molten rock at the target. This spell doesn't use as much as the others but can add up when held for some time.
Bisor Draco ti sor Inferi, Bisor Draco ti sor Aquat, Bisor Draco ti sor Magmus, Bisro Draco ti sor Sol. Kiour saga'ru'ti ti sor Oran Sai Avi. Toragon! Edea Draco Hari: Eletour Os'sig'or'ran This is easliy Viva second most powerful attack next to the Solairis. This is three stage attack. The first stage summons the elemental embodiment of the twin dragons of fire, water, lava and light. The second stage is a variant of the technique used by the very first Sai Avi. This stage allows the user to gain mental dominance over the dragons bending them to the user will often sending them in into a frenzy. The third stage cause the dragons to merge causing a unstable vortex of energy in the sky. At the user command the vortex explodes releasing tremendous amounts of energy. This spell can wipe entire armies away. The downside to this spell is that it takes awhile to unleash, along with the fact that it drains all of viva's magical energy out of him.
Special abilities: Enhancement- In human form he can, for a short period of time, enhance his strength, speed, agility or whatever beyond his normal human limits. *Note* rarely does this due to the strain on his body.
Infection- In his Ancient form he has a strange attack that transfers his DNA into a victim. This attack rewrites the host's dna and ends in a rather unpleasant and extremely painful death; there is no cure for this attack. This is extremely effective against dark forces. The Infection is actually one of the ways Anceints can reproduce...by "enlisting" other...rewrtie their dna and if the host is strong enough to survive they become a half Ancient..but when used on evil it always ends in death....
Absorption- Unlike his other two forms where he must kill a enemy to absorb its spiritual power , in Ascendant form he can just suck it out of the enemy absorbing their power directly.
Solairis: This is a attack limited to members of the Kal-le-mar clan. This is easily viva strongest attack. When using this attack viva draws in so much light that even during a bright sunny day the sky will turn black and stars will be visible even though the sun can still be seem. Viva channels and amplifies all the light he can mixing it with his reserve of spiritual energy. He generally has to drop to one knee to brace for this attack. When unleashed a massive beam of light covering usually as far as the eye can see lances form his hands obliterating anything in his path. This attack can level entire mountain ranges. Though this attack is one of a last resort. When using this attack it completely drains all of viva reserve energy as well as takes a tremendous toll on his own life energy. The last and only time viva used this attack he was sent into a coma for two weeks. This attack is weaker in his human form, only big enough to level a entire city, and he fear to use it in his Ascendant form; afraid of the damage it could do.
As a Former Dragon Knight he also sports abilities of motion. Capable of making force fields, and controlling a object's speed. It is also rumored that he has the ability to set events into motion too. As time goes on though these abilities grow weaker and weaker.
The last ability he has is a limited state of immortality. meaning he will never die of old age, and is hard to kill, with a habit of not staying dead for long.
History1 ((account of his time in the Western Front)):
Early Childhood:
Viva was born four miles outside of Talonron. His parents were Telemacil Gemini Vellor, and Diana Kai Vellor of The Talonronian House Kai. His father had Ascended three months before he was born. As Diana was returning back to Talonron ,only having giving birth to viva three days ago, with a entourage of three Talonron soldiers she was ambushed by 30 demons. She herself killed 7 of them with only her ruby hilted dagger before she and her guards succumbed to the demon and were killed. It is unknown why they left Korlon alive. It it rumored that they most likely didn't even see him. Anyway the 11 remaining demons fled when a Elite Guard patrol showed up led by the current Supreme Commander , Dagar Fisher. Dagar was a family friend of Diana and had studied under Telemacil. He took Korlon and decided to raise him as his own. He also renamed him to keep his Ancient identify hidden. As the newly named Dante grew up he found out he possesses abnormal strength and intellect. Dagar told him he was gifted and Viva was content with that. At the age of three Dante was submitted to the Academy to train to be a soldier as every citizen was required to by law. Viva excelled at it. He could beat every student at any completion except one. Unknown to Viva there was one more half-Ancient in his mist. Azor Draco Sarill. He was the son of Tiri Virgo Sarill, a survivor of the Millena war who had Ascended four years ago. The two unknowingly Ancients soon became close friends. At the age of Seven the two were granted official rank in the Talonronain military. Two years later at the age of Nine they were apprenticed to the leader of the Elite Guard, Dimitri Kai. They were the youngest in Talonronian history to complete initial training and be admitted into the Elite Guard.
Ages 9- 12
Dante and Azor trained hard against each other and soon were granted full rank in The Elite Guard at Age 10. At around this time Viva first met Xi. Xiandria had taken a trip with the delegates of Durani to view a recent treaty with Demora. Viva was assigned as her personal body guard for her stay. During their time together they became friends and could often be found on the Eastern wall overlook the massive river butting Talonron, talking. Three month later Xi left back to Durani and viva went back to being a soldier. For two years Viva and Xi had several encounters as the two nations engaged in various political concepts. Two months after Viva's 12th birthday though the two nations broke diplomatic talk to focus on a new threat.
Ages 12-13:
This was probably the one of the most traumatic times of Viva's life. Out of Demora a new force had arisen. A large Demon and vampire army led by a Vampiric General named Sayuri. They were blazing ahead though the countryside to the far north attacking Elven settlements. The Durani and the Western Front Military Alliance ((WFMA)) mobilized their forces and engaged Sayuri. They held them for nearly a year before one day after breaking camp Sayuri's forces were no where to be found. Out of fear for a attack on the Capital The Durani sent Xi to Talonron for safe keeping thinking that Sayuri would think twice at attack such a fortified nation. Viva was overjoyed at learning of her trip and was eager to see his friend again. As the day of her arrival came Viva was ordered on guard duty at the main gate. Angry at not having gotten his usual assignment of bodyguard he pleaded with Azor , who had the day off to fill in for him so he could see Xi. Azor consented. As Viva slipped away through the city trying to catch up with Xi's convoy the main alarm sounded. Hurrying back towards the gate he discover that Sayuri had indeed directed her forces towards Talonron and was assaulting the Main Gate. Viva hurried back toward the battle he arrived in time to see Azor fall to the Sayuri herself. Enraged at the lost of his best friend and at his own selfishness he snapped. He transformed into his Ancient form for the first time and flung himself into the battle with his nothing but his bare hands. Sayuri's forces, caught by surprise at a Ancient and by his furious onslaught were soon routed and retreated into the nearby woods. During the aftermath Viva searched for Azor's body but couldn't find it. Still racked with grief he abandoned his post and left wandering Ker'sara ((Anceint for western front.)) for two years trying to focus his new power.
Ages !4-16:
Not much is known about this time. Viva spent his time wondering around often visiting the remains of Ancient cities. It was somewhere during this time that he learned magic and masters Water, Fire and Lava. Also around this time Xi ran away form Durani and traveled across the Eastern ocean to the lands surrounding Twilight Star Village. Viva remained on the move killing demons where he could find them and sighting were spread far and wide. He didn't step back into the peoples eye until the 4th Great War broke out.
Ages 16-17:
Having been united once again the nation of Demora set out form their northern wastelands attacking the other nations in the name of Sayuri. The WFMA were mobilized at first to combat the threat, but they were soon defeated soundly. Concerned at the new threat the nations of Durani and Talonron engaged the enemy. But due to Xi going missing the Durani were unable to mobilize no more than 1/4 of their army needing the other 3/4 to maintain peace . While Talonron mustered their whole army. After several months of war the Durani started to falter under the sheer numbers of the demon while only being supported by a few Talonronian heavy calvary, The main Talornon forces were a month away form the front lines. But while the major Demoran forces were engaged with the Durani and the bulk of Talonron's forces on the move away form their city, a western demon army descended form the mountains on the west of the land mass making their way towards the unprotected city. 12 miles short on the rolling plains of the human kingdom of Mourngal they encountered something unexpected. A lone man encamped on the plains. As they approached Viva sprang into action. For 2 days he was able to hold off the army by himself using everything he had. On the third day things were diffent. Tired of battle and weak from many wounds viva used the Solairis. He destroyed the army and much of the plains in the massive explosion, but due to his actions he collapsed on the point of death. It wasn't long though before he was found. During the time he held them. The Talonronians had arrived and with their Elven allies crushed the Demons. He was found by a Durani patrol and was taken to their capital. Apparently the destruction of the Western Army hadn't gone unnoticed. During the battle rumor got to the Demoran Army of a being they referred as the Devas'tor. Three weeks later Viva awoke and was promoted to Supreme Commander. After serving for two months trying to get his war-torn home back together he took a leave of absence and promoted his predecessor, Old Dagar to take his place in his absence. He cross the Eastern ocean. At arriving on the shore he spotted a decrypted old mansion under the care of the Vampric Lord Galvatron. He was enlisted due to his fighting capability and served for three months. After awhile though he grew angry at Galvatron's actions and with a few other members, the healer Magik, the dragon Turr, and the demon Kage, they defected towards a nearby village where Turr and Magik had friends. Upon arriving at the village of Twilight Star they made it their new home. Only a month after they rebelled they soon drifted apart. Viva maintained a close friendship with Magik and Turr even after they left the village. Viva remained their and soon was befriended by a human-dragon hybrid known as Aleiah. Though her he got in touch with Xi. They soon were married and Xi gave birth to Viva's son Robert Taurus Vellor.
ages 17- present: Viva was content with life for two years before a large Demonic force threatened the Village, Viva, Aleiah, Xi and a small force of Talonronian soldiers engaged the force led by none other but Azor, who had been turned into a Clanlord. Viva and Aleiah were able to push back the first assault, and viva beat back another wave by himself, but in the process he Ascended. Soon after Aleiah and Xi were then guided toward the Ancient Capital of Kel'lor to retrieve Viva's body. Viva returned to the mortal plane more powerful than ever. The organized their forces and engaged Azors forces one more time. During this battle Viva finally brought down Azor but he had to turn Ascendant to do so. Having beat Azor, torn again by the death of his friend and complications with his marriage with Xi, he left again for distant lands. Before finally making his way back to the Western Front.
History2 (detailed account of after he left the Western front)): Viva was once the most powerful warrior in the strip on land Known as the Western Front. Supreme Commander of the Western Front Military Alliance, but he gave that up for Xi. He came to the village as part of a rebellion at The CotPC. With Turr, Kage, Magik, The Rebels eventually drifted there own way, but before life could settle down a demon named Mephisto attacked the village. There Viva befriended a human female with dragon-esque abilties and looks. Though her he got in contact with his childhood friend Xiandria. Shortly after a Clanlord appeared. This Clanlord turned out to be no other than his best friend Azor who was thought to be dead when he fell to Sayuri's forces in the War of Mourngal. The two former friends waged war upon each other. and during this time viva fell in love and eventally married Xi. Before the war could be ended though Viva succumbed to all the souls he absorbed in his countless campaigns against the Demons, and Ascended to a higher plane of existence. Though it was not known till later that he did this on purpose to gain the power of a Ascendant Warrior, the only creature powerful enough to take one of the Clanlord. The War came to a point at the Final Battle where Viva, Dragon, Vierty, and Xi with the help of the Western Front Army, defeated Azor once and for all leaving nothing behind except for a Scarred Battlefeild. After the War viva settled down with Xi. But something happened between them which is still not really clear as to what, but the outcome is. viva left everything behind and traveled to distance lands.
Strengths: In the sense of hand to hand combat he has no known weakness. But he is far form invincible. In the sense of magic he is one of the greatest in the area of Fire, Water, Lava, and the light side of Divine magic.
Weakness:But he is weak in all other elements. Even though he boasts several mental powers, there are .....feeble at best. One of his major weakness is a dark sinister creature in him. Ancients being often thought of as beings of Light and good have a dark side to them. Darkness and light must co-resided in every creature including Ancients. But these dark personality were often kept suppressed and only vented out in battle. The problem came though with half-breeds. Apparently not being a full ancient weakens the control over this sinister power causing it to emerge under certain circumstances. This "personality" is only known as a Asha'Kahn. The circumstances in viva's case is a moonless light. He also is weak to dark magic or magic that absorbs light. He is weaker to gunshot wound rather than stabbing wound finding the gunshot wound harder to heal. In his Ancient form he highly damaged by spiritual attacks.
Personality:Viva is a kind hearted person, even in battle he will often give his opponents several chance to surrender before attacking. In battle he his ferocious. He is extreamly loyal to those who have earned his trust, and will fight to till he can't no more to protect those close to him.
((profiles for Xi and Dagar soon to come ))
The Edenains aka Ancients.
due to requests I’m officially posting all there is to Edenains
Update: I believe I have finished. so feel free to read and post comments and questions if any thanks!
General background:
The Edenains are what as known as a Guardian race. Their purpose is to protect life and guard over the new races at Creation.
Appearance: The Ancients have the same physiology and anatomy as humans do, for the most part except they are giants the stand around eight to twelve feet tall and have exotic hair and eyes colors due to traits of their clans. There are a few differences between male and female Edenains.
Females: The womenfolk of the Edenains look exactly as a human female does. The only difference is their size of course they stand form 7 to 9 feet tall, their hair and eyes, they are all quite beautiful, and a dull white aura surrounds them.
Males: The males of the race are all heavily muscular, and tend to stand for 8 to 12 feet tall. They have the same hair and eyes as the females, but instead of having a aura , the posses light producing cells surrounding the veins in their forearms that pulse with a white light.
Powers: The Edenains are masters of Magic and can command the Elements by simply speaking the name of the element. Though all Ancient vary in power to different elements but they all excel at Light and Life magic. They posses enhanced strength, speed, intellect and agility superior to most races. They also absorb the life-force of those they kill and use it as power. They can also infect a enemy with their DNA. this rapidly destroys the host's dna and rewrites it with its own element forming a new being, but when used on a truly evil person it will cause a horrible painful death. They can naturally generate light and control it. Mainly using it as a a intense beam of energy. They are fully in tune with their bodies and are capable of controlling their body down to a cellular level. They can regenerate wounds and limbs at a huge drain to their energy.
Lifecycle: A newborn Ancient ages at the same pace that humans due till the ancient reaches around twenty years of age. From then the ancient’s body will stop aging all together. Ancient while immortal , can still die of injury and sickness, but they will revive completely healed and cures at most of 48 hours. Though a ancient can die in a sense. After absorbing enough souls, the ancient will shed his physical form and exist as pure energy. Only the members of the Kal-le-mar Clan can return back to the mortal plane.
Technology: The Edenains use what are know as Sai crystals as a power source. These are crystalline bushes that grow form the ground. These crystals harness pure energy, but it takes a being of intense power to use and harness these crystals. Their cities are grown form pure marble and are often made with precious stones. for examples their streets and roads are over made of huge slabs of emerald and their building often have veins of gold or silver ore running though them. Their buildings take on a more Greek appearance with large sculpted columns and geometric shapes. They favor rectangle and circles in their construction. though most of these buildings have no formal doors. The only way of a entrance is usually a one foot by one foot crystal panel. Upon touch of this panel the marble wall will open. As for their weapons, the Ancients used a wide arsenal of weapons. The Ancients used mostly energy based weapons, beam rifles, energy swords, and such other weapons. But Master weapons were also forged made of a strange metal known as Isoloium. These weapons remained forever sharp and had the interesting quality of remembering their owners. Meaning that the weapon wouldn't change it density and weight so the weapon couldn't be lifted except by a worthy warrior.
Society: The Edenains were separated by Clans or groups sharing similar genetic material. Members of different clans were told apart due to eye and hair color, along with Clan marks.
Clan marks: A symbol branded onto the flesh of a newborn Ancient marking his or her clan. For the males its was on the left side of the chest, for females on the left shoulder. It was on the left side seeing how most Ancients were left handed.
Politics: Each Clan had a representative serving the clan as a whole during important Council matters. Their are five main clans. The Har-kor, the Sal-or-gor, the Keri-ly, and the Kal-le-mar. The grand council was the main governing body of the Ancients. Each of the main clans were represented except for the Kal-le-mar. The Kal-le-mar or the Royal Clan were a militaristic clan and was in charge in the military. The Kal-le-mar were ruled by the Sai-Avi or the High king. A member of the Kal-le-mar. usually a member of the Vellor family.
The Clans:
The Har-kor: The Har-kor were the largest clan maintaing over 200,000 members during the time before the Millina war. These Ancient excelled and different skill trades. Most Ancients technology was forged as the hands of these Ancients. The Har-kor had dark green hair with blue roots, and yellow eyes. They preferred to have their cities surrounded by forests. Their Symbol was a red hourglass suspended by three dark blue chains.
The Sal-or-gor: The Sal-or-gor were the smartest of the Clans. Their intellect was well known throughout the world. Most of the Edenains greatest inventions were thought up by the Sal-or-gor. The Sal-or-gor were often found intermingled with Har-kor and marriages between the two clans were very common. The Sal-or-gor were the second biggest Clan. At their highest they had about 150,000 members. Like the Har-kor the Sal-or-gor like to live in heavily wooded regions. The Sal-or-gor had white hair with black roots, and deep violet eyes. Their Clan Symbol was three revolving red comets with yellow tails.
The Keri-ly: The Keri-ly were the merchants an sailors of the Edenains. They were often found near the waterways of the world. Their fishing skill was so legendary that it was said that if you could get a Keri-ly to whistle then fish would flock to your nets. Due to their impressive bargaining skills some of the best Ancient diplomats were Keri-ly. The Keri-ly were a small sized Clan only numbering 45,000, and due to the fact the marriages out of Clan was frowned upon in Keri-ly society their secrets remained with them. The Keri-ly had red hair with grey roots and heavy dark blue eyes. Their symbol was that of a teardrop of water surround by a circle of fire.
The Kal-le-mar: The Kal-le-mar were maybe the best known of the Clans. The Kal-le-mar were the Warriors of the Edenains. The Kal-le-mar were often the biggest of Edenains. It was not uncommon to see a Kal-le-mar standing 12 feet tall. The Kal-le-mar were often found in their mountain strongholds on the forefront of Ancient territory neighboring demonic infested lands. The Kal-le-mar was called the Royal Clan since a vast majority of the Sai-Avis were Kal-le-mar. To be more accurate the Vellor family. The Kal-le-mar produced 387 of the 400 Sai-Avis in Edenains history. 356 of them form the Vellor family alone. This was the smallest clan only numbering around 5,000. The Kal-le-mar had jet black hair with crimson root and pale ice blue or grey eyes. Their Symbol was a Golden eight point starburst on a field of navy blue.
Three notable facts about the Kal-le-mar, the Eden-Draco alliance , Ascendants, Solaris.
Eden-Draco alliance: About 129 million years ago the then weak Dragons seeked refuge in the Kal-le-mar strongholds. They had been driven form their lairs by a massive infestation of demons. The Sai-Avi at the time , Lintiou Scorpio Vellor, upon hearing of the Dragons' plight led 2000 Kal-le-mar warriors and routing the demons. After such the Dragon clans forged a close alliance with the Edenains. A alliance that held for 127 million years until the fall of the Edenains as the end of the Milliena War.
Ascendants: While most Ancients life-cycle ended with shedding their bodies, the Kal-le-mar were unusual in the fact that they could retake a new physical form. These Edenains were known as Ascendants. These were consider a sub-species and had no Clan holdings. The Ascendants stood around 13-15 feet tall, their Clan marks often shining very brightly and was encircled in Edenain runes, Their hair was jet black and had red streaks shooting though. They had no iris or pupils but were far form blind. On the males the pulsing light in their lower arms and spreaded up to encompass the veins up their arms and to their shoulder and glowed steadily instead of pulsed. The Ascendants were by far the strongest and most powerful of the Edenains. They were often assigned to the Guard of the White Tiger, the Sai-Avi's personal bodyguards. Even though they were powerful their numbers were very few only numbering 350 at most.
Solaris: The Kal-le-mar were often said the best at harnessing light. This is shown though a special attack that only the Kal-le-mar could pull off. A massive beam ranging form 100 yards to a 1/4 of a mile wide beam of intense light capable of leveling cities. This attack was the Eden trump card, but such a blast often drained a Kal-le-mar to exhaustion rendering them unable to fight.
History:
The Ancients have a long long history spanning several hundred million years. This history will cover the most important events mainly in the last 5 million years of the Ancients history. To be more precise the Millennia War. About five million years ago during the time of Sai-Avi ,Ri'lintus Ursa Vellor, a half-Edenain half-dark angel was born. Not much is known about her past but as for the events she caused, they have lasting effects on the world for eons to come. Her name was Ara.
History of Ara: Those familiar with modern Vampire culture should be familiar with the name. She was often known as the Mother of the modern vampire. Ancients, while powerful had a flaw. Like all living things they had a good side and a dark side. While a full blooded Ancient could keep this dark side under control, a half blood on the other hand had to have a method of venting this evilness before it engulfed them. Ara did not even try. She was soon engulfed and twisted into a completely new being. She soon grew resentful of the Ancients. Why should they possess all of the power, and hold the fate of all races in their hands? She looked for a way to strike back, and she found it. She drifted form the protected land of the Edenains and gathered a small band of vampires. They soon wait in ambush at a common crossroads. They soon set upon the first ancient and quickly brought him down. As they started to leave the scene the course of history was forever altered. The evil long suppressed in the Edenain surfaced and twisted into and new creature now know as a Clan lord.
Clan lord: A Clan lord is basically a Dark Ancient. their powers remain generally the same with the exception of that of instead like a regular Ancient , they destroy the souls of those they kill feeding off of the agony and death. Because of this they cannot ascend. Their appearance differed slightly form their former forms. The pulse of white light in their arms or the white aura around them if female, changes to a black light. their skin pales greatly, their hair and eyes invert their colors, and their four canine teeth grow into 4 inch long fangs.
The Milliena War: Ara soon gathered several Clan lords under her command each with several legions of demons and vampires. With her forces they launched a assault on the Ancients. At first Ara's forces didn't stand a chance. The Dragons and Ancients butchered the demon forces quite easily. For the first two million years of the war, the dragons ruled the skies, also with the Ancients still the superior ground force, and with Ara's only advantage was a army of 300 million demons and vampires, along with a handful of clan lords, she had no hope of defeating them in any major battle. Though over time , one by one Ancients were turned into clan lords until the tides turn and the demons forced them into a stalemate. After being at war for 3 million years Ara unleashed her secret weapon. While the demons and vampires vastly outnumbered the Ancients, the ancients had technology, firepower, and greater physical abilities leading to defeat after defeat. The only ones capable of holding their own were the Clan lords. But due to their being only around 200 clan lords after three million years of nonstop warfare she needed needed a new plan. She came up with a creature capable of holding off a Ancient in hand-to hand and capable of defeating one if assisted by two to three others. These creatures were called Bloodguard, which were genetically engineered by combing certain traits of different demons and vampires. The end result was a seven to eight foot tall artificial Clan lord. While they were weaker when compared to the real thing they still had all the traits and powers of one. After Ara introduced the Bloodguard into battle things started to fall apart for the Edenains. The first blow was the withdraw of the dragons. Lacking the immortality of their counterparts these mythical beasts eventually began taking very heavy losses and risked extinction. With heavy hearts they informed the new and last Sai-Avi Kai Leo Vellor that they must withdraw form the Alliance or face utter destruction. Then soon after several Ancients began Ascending due to the constant warfare. The Edenains now without allies and a highly dimished Kal-le-mar Clan, were finally pushed back. For the next two million years the war raged with more and more Ancients Ascending, they were pushed back to their cities. As the first urban warfare began the Sai-Avi mobilized the Guard of the White Tiger. With the Ascendant Warriors in battle they managed to hold their outpost cities for about 25,000 years, but the rapid Ascension of the defenders soon left, leaving only the small Guard defending against the ever growing armies. For another 5,000 years the Guard of the White Tiger held the now deserted cities from Ara. But soon the small Guard of only 100 scattered members were ordered to retreat. And so the war fell into a cycle. The Guard would retreat to the nearest cities, Ara would lay siege and in time as the Defenders ascend the Guard would fall back to the next strongholds. After several thousands of years of this happening the Edenains were pushed back to the Capital on the edge of Elutra. As the Clan lord’s armies soon landed near the small quite coastal village of Twilight Star, buried deep beneath the near by mountains in the majestic city of Kel'lor the Edenains prepared for one final assault.
Battle of Twilight Star Village:
They waited for the Clan lord’s forces to advance into the forest separating the mountains form the village, then they attack. It would be a battle talked about for thousands of years to come. The fourth night after the landing the armies were awoken to the screams of their sentries, before they knew it the demon forces consisting of 5 million demons and vampires, 3,000 clan lords, and 250,000 Bloodguard were under attack form a massive Ancient force. The Ancients had deployed the entire population of the Capital, around 300,000 Ancients, men women and child, along with 4000 Heavy Assault drone, and heavily artillery. Soon the demon armies were thrown in chaos as Ancient and drone barged though the camp slaughtering all they came across. But it wasn't long before the Ara's forced organized and stopped the advance. They eventually began to push the Ancients back but for every foot gain was paid in the lives of thousands of demons per minute. At this point the second wave launched their assault. Form the left flank 300 Kal-le-mar attacked supported by 89 Ascendants. Of them 67 of them were the elite Guard of the White Tiger , led personally by the Sai-Avi Kai Leo Vellor , and his son Telemacil Gemini Vellor. Caught by surprise Ara's forces broke and scattered into large groups which, under the assault of the fresh troops were soon routed by the Kal-le-mar. As the battle raged, Kai , and Telemacil Vellor broke though Ara's personal bodyguards and engaged her directly. Ara was soon overwhelmed by the Sai Avi's assault was trapped into a pendant for her crimes not letting her soul find peace in death, but in her imprisonment, with the last of her strength she latched onto Kai's soul and destroyed it as she was locked away.
The Aftermath: After the battle was over their were only a handful of Ancient’s left standing. Most of the Drones had been crippled and the all of the Ascendants were to badly injured to remain in mortal phase. Leaderless the surving twenty Edenains spread out across the world to serve out the Eons isolated before finally ascending. Telemacil survied the battle and headed back to backed to Andrinel where he built the city of Talonron for the local humans, which had risen to be the dominate force in the region. He served as a advisor to the Talonronians for several years before he himself Ascended around twenty year ago. As so with his passing the legacy of the Edenains faded away into the history books. It has been twenty years since the last Ancient walked the planet but rumors have surfaced that a half-blood still walks carrying out the duties of a Guardian as his ancestors had for millions of year. Maybe these are just rumors told over at the local tavern, but then again maybe, just maybe there might be some truth. Only time will tell.....
Name: Korlon Andromeda Vellor
Alias: Dante Fisher, Devastator, Viva
Age:25 ((Due to his Ancient DNA he looks 20 no matter how old he really is.))
Race:Human/Ancient aka Edenain
Appearance 1
Weight
Human: 200 lbs
Ancient: Around 550
Ascendant: 2056
Height:
Human:6'0
Ancient:10'
Ascendant: about 15 feet
Head.
Human: Viva's hair and eyes change color though out the year. During the Spring and Summer his hair is a medium shade of blond with deep solemn blue green eyes. During the Fall and winter is hair takes on a light brownish look and so do his eyes. A long thin scar runs down the right side of his face from his eyebrow down to his chin.
Ancient.(same as above with slight changes) His hair turns a a midnight black with a red highlights near the roots of his hair and hangs down to his shoulder. His eyes take on a Ice blue or grayish color to them
Ascendant (same as above with slight changes) His black and red streaked hair falls down to his shoulder blades His hair seeming is constantly waving as if in a never ending breezes. His eyes have lost all color and are nothing more but two pure white orbs that radiate a soft light. The skin on the outside corner of his eyes has small cracks in it that glow with a soft white light
Body:
Human: viva is more muscular due to a life of constant training. He sports shoulders and arms capable of even making a black smith jealous. He could almost be called lanky because of his long legs but his sheer mass seems to hide that fact. His body is scared for countless battles though they seem to fit him and only increase the deadly air that surrounds him. his most noticeable scars are the one on his face, a jagged one on his shoulder , a thin scar winding up his left calf, three slanting scars on his back running form under his left shoulder blade down to right above his right hip., and a faint 8point star burst scar taking up most of his left pec. This scar is called a clan mark. Basically is a symbol branded onto a newborn Ancient to identity his or her clan.
Ancient; (same as above with changes) He stands around 10 feet tall with muscles in proportion. The scar on his chest starts to glow softly with a white light and the veins in his fore arms pulse with a white light
Ascendant (same as before with changes) He now stands at 15 feet tall with the rest of his body in proportion. He massive size usually scares off most enemies seeing how a man only comes up to his knees. and with hands wide enough to pick one up by the middle. The pluseing light in his forearms. spread up to his shoulders and becomes a steady glow.
Clothes. Viva tends to wear dark color clothing or armor. his usual attire are black fingerless gloves a black t shirt that doesn't hide his muscles well, black jeans, and a long black jacket with the tail hanging near his ankles.
Appearance 2:((Fanart done by [~skyeprints~]))

Weapons.
he is known to use a wide selection of weapons from many different time periods. From swords and bows to assault rifles and grenades to the energy swords and pulse rifles of the Ancients
hand to hand:Viva hand to hand skills rely on mainly targeting the neck and spine of the enemy. Due to unrepairable damage, he cannot kick above waist level, but instead prefers to throw a knee. His attacks are strong enough to pulverize bone and shred organs with a single hit. Though most of his attacks are intended to stun his target long enough for him to get into position to break their neck.
Main weapons: Viva halberd is best described to look something like a trident. Though the outside prongs are curved to the inside like horns and are serrated on the outside edge with a angular axe head placed below the bottom of the prong. While the middle prong is longer and widens then narrows into a diamond like shape at the tip.
He also has strapped to his right bicep at most time a jeweled dagger. He usually wields this dagger inverted in his right hand
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The blades on the both weapons are made form the rare element Isolonium. A indestructible element that can also amplify energy directed into it.
Weapons style: Being born in the military society of Talonron, he is skilled in all weapon use, but prefers polearms ((spear, glaives, halberds.)) or swords. He is surprising agile and flexible for someone his size often taking his opponents off guard with his skill with his halberd. His dagger is also balanced making it a excellent throwing weapon.
Powers and abilities: He is very skilled in magic and combat. Due to his mastery of the elements of Fire, Water, and Lava he has gained complete control of these elements and due feats such as using rain as a weapon. He can also use other elements, but he is weaker in those fields.
In human form he is capable of dead lifting 10 tons, and reaching speeds of 45 mph. He also has a enhance sense of smell. Along with better eyesight and hearing than most humans.
In his Ancient form, his ability level jumps drastically allowing for him to lift over 125 tons and runs at speed over 85 mph.
In his final Ascendant form it is unknown just how strong or how fast it is. This mainly due to the fact that he has only done combat in his Ascendant form two times, but it is thought to be far superior than a Ancient.
He has several psychic powers such as telepathy and telekinesis but is generally weak in those areas.
He can regenerate any severed limbs and heal his wounds instantly but as a huge cost of energy leaving him weak, and has limited immortality due to his Ancient DNA.
He absorbs the spiritual energy of those he kills adding on to his power. He can use this energy like a reserve. The more enemies he kill the bigger the reserve. The downside to this is that his body can only hold so many souls before transcending to the next plane of existence ((Note this doesn't mean dieing.))
Another natural ability is the bend space on itself allowing him to teleport to areas where he has been before.
Known spells:
Infurnace: the Ancient word for fire. Capable of controlling fire. Mainly used to make enemies instantly catch on fire.
Inferni: A more advanced form of Infunace. This spell ignites the atmosphere around a group of enemies engulfing them in a raging inferno.
Aquas: The Ancient command word for water. It most common combat use is for turning the air inside the lungs into water, drowning enemies.
Aquatus: A advanced form of Aquas. This spell allows Viva to adjust the water pressure inside a enemy's body. For example. He could increase the pressure of someone's cerebral-spinal fluid and crush someone's brain form the inside, or cause a limb to swell up and exploded.
Magmus: The Ancient word for Lava or Magma. This spell causes jets of lava to erupt form the ground under enemies feet.
Magnami: A advanced version of Magmus. causes a curtain of lava to erupt around a group of enemies encircling them before collapsing inwards and burning them in a sea of lava.
Edea Inferi Draco: Inferi Zar're This the basic form of the "Flame Strike" technique. The first phrase cause blue and white fire to engulf his arm. Near the his hand the flames will flare up to the shape of a dragons head made of white fire with two blues eyes. The second phrase of this attack causes the "dragon" to release a jet of intense flame. The jet will practically burn though whatever is in its path till it reaches a predetermined spot when it will explode into a mild inferno hot enough to vaporise most organic things.
Edea Bisor Inferi Draco: Bisor Inferi Zar're This is a advanced form of the "Flame Strike". The first phrase acts the same as the basic spell expect it happens on the other arm as well. The second phrase cause the dragon head on each hand to let out a jet of flame as the same time. These jets can be controlled mentally unlike the basic form. They still will burn though till they reach the required spot before detonating. The heat form this blast is hot enough to slag ((partly melt)) most metal. This uses up alot more energy than the basic form
Edea Trigor Inferi Draco: Trigor Inferi Zar're ti sor Ragour'rou This if the most advance form of the "Flame Strike" technique. The first phrase appears exactly identical to the advanced form, causing both arms to ignite and flames to form into dragon heads on each hand. What isn't seen in the channeling of energy to the lungs and the throat of the user. The second phase require the user to intake a large amount of oxygen. When exhaled, a third jet of flame escapes form the mouth of the user along with the two flames form the arms. Only the arm jets can be mentally controlled . The one form the mouth flies straight. When they reach their target the jets converge causing a massive explosion capable of melting even the hardest stone in mere seconds. This spell takes a large chunk of energy out of the user.
Edea Bisor Aquatus Draco: Sargi ti sor Aquai This is the advanced "Tide Dragons" technique . The first phrase cause the ground to rupture, allowing two pillars of water shaped like dragons to explode up. The Dragons often intertwining and engulfing any enemy hurled up in the air. The second phrase cause the dragons to plummet into the ground dousing the area in a tidal wave of water. This uses up a decent amount of energy
Edea Bisor Magmusor Draco: Draco Riou'lou'bis This is the advanced form of the "Volcano Dragons" technique. The first phrase cause the ground the target to crumble away and lava to rise to surface stranding the target. The second phrase cause the moat of lava to rocket into the air forming a curtain. From the curtain two dragons will randomly rise out from in the the curtain and let out a jet of molten rock at the target. This spell doesn't use as much as the others but can add up when held for some time.
Bisor Draco ti sor Inferi, Bisor Draco ti sor Aquat, Bisor Draco ti sor Magmus, Bisro Draco ti sor Sol. Kiour saga'ru'ti ti sor Oran Sai Avi. Toragon! Edea Draco Hari: Eletour Os'sig'or'ran This is easliy Viva second most powerful attack next to the Solairis. This is three stage attack. The first stage summons the elemental embodiment of the twin dragons of fire, water, lava and light. The second stage is a variant of the technique used by the very first Sai Avi. This stage allows the user to gain mental dominance over the dragons bending them to the user will often sending them in into a frenzy. The third stage cause the dragons to merge causing a unstable vortex of energy in the sky. At the user command the vortex explodes releasing tremendous amounts of energy. This spell can wipe entire armies away. The downside to this spell is that it takes awhile to unleash, along with the fact that it drains all of viva's magical energy out of him.
Special abilities: Enhancement- In human form he can, for a short period of time, enhance his strength, speed, agility or whatever beyond his normal human limits. *Note* rarely does this due to the strain on his body.
Infection- In his Ancient form he has a strange attack that transfers his DNA into a victim. This attack rewrites the host's dna and ends in a rather unpleasant and extremely painful death; there is no cure for this attack. This is extremely effective against dark forces. The Infection is actually one of the ways Anceints can reproduce...by "enlisting" other...rewrtie their dna and if the host is strong enough to survive they become a half Ancient..but when used on evil it always ends in death....
Absorption- Unlike his other two forms where he must kill a enemy to absorb its spiritual power , in Ascendant form he can just suck it out of the enemy absorbing their power directly.
Solairis: This is a attack limited to members of the Kal-le-mar clan. This is easily viva strongest attack. When using this attack viva draws in so much light that even during a bright sunny day the sky will turn black and stars will be visible even though the sun can still be seem. Viva channels and amplifies all the light he can mixing it with his reserve of spiritual energy. He generally has to drop to one knee to brace for this attack. When unleashed a massive beam of light covering usually as far as the eye can see lances form his hands obliterating anything in his path. This attack can level entire mountain ranges. Though this attack is one of a last resort. When using this attack it completely drains all of viva reserve energy as well as takes a tremendous toll on his own life energy. The last and only time viva used this attack he was sent into a coma for two weeks. This attack is weaker in his human form, only big enough to level a entire city, and he fear to use it in his Ascendant form; afraid of the damage it could do.
As a Former Dragon Knight he also sports abilities of motion. Capable of making force fields, and controlling a object's speed. It is also rumored that he has the ability to set events into motion too. As time goes on though these abilities grow weaker and weaker.
The last ability he has is a limited state of immortality. meaning he will never die of old age, and is hard to kill, with a habit of not staying dead for long.
History1 ((account of his time in the Western Front)):
Early Childhood:
Viva was born four miles outside of Talonron. His parents were Telemacil Gemini Vellor, and Diana Kai Vellor of The Talonronian House Kai. His father had Ascended three months before he was born. As Diana was returning back to Talonron ,only having giving birth to viva three days ago, with a entourage of three Talonron soldiers she was ambushed by 30 demons. She herself killed 7 of them with only her ruby hilted dagger before she and her guards succumbed to the demon and were killed. It is unknown why they left Korlon alive. It it rumored that they most likely didn't even see him. Anyway the 11 remaining demons fled when a Elite Guard patrol showed up led by the current Supreme Commander , Dagar Fisher. Dagar was a family friend of Diana and had studied under Telemacil. He took Korlon and decided to raise him as his own. He also renamed him to keep his Ancient identify hidden. As the newly named Dante grew up he found out he possesses abnormal strength and intellect. Dagar told him he was gifted and Viva was content with that. At the age of three Dante was submitted to the Academy to train to be a soldier as every citizen was required to by law. Viva excelled at it. He could beat every student at any completion except one. Unknown to Viva there was one more half-Ancient in his mist. Azor Draco Sarill. He was the son of Tiri Virgo Sarill, a survivor of the Millena war who had Ascended four years ago. The two unknowingly Ancients soon became close friends. At the age of Seven the two were granted official rank in the Talonronain military. Two years later at the age of Nine they were apprenticed to the leader of the Elite Guard, Dimitri Kai. They were the youngest in Talonronian history to complete initial training and be admitted into the Elite Guard.
Ages 9- 12
Dante and Azor trained hard against each other and soon were granted full rank in The Elite Guard at Age 10. At around this time Viva first met Xi. Xiandria had taken a trip with the delegates of Durani to view a recent treaty with Demora. Viva was assigned as her personal body guard for her stay. During their time together they became friends and could often be found on the Eastern wall overlook the massive river butting Talonron, talking. Three month later Xi left back to Durani and viva went back to being a soldier. For two years Viva and Xi had several encounters as the two nations engaged in various political concepts. Two months after Viva's 12th birthday though the two nations broke diplomatic talk to focus on a new threat.
Ages 12-13:
This was probably the one of the most traumatic times of Viva's life. Out of Demora a new force had arisen. A large Demon and vampire army led by a Vampiric General named Sayuri. They were blazing ahead though the countryside to the far north attacking Elven settlements. The Durani and the Western Front Military Alliance ((WFMA)) mobilized their forces and engaged Sayuri. They held them for nearly a year before one day after breaking camp Sayuri's forces were no where to be found. Out of fear for a attack on the Capital The Durani sent Xi to Talonron for safe keeping thinking that Sayuri would think twice at attack such a fortified nation. Viva was overjoyed at learning of her trip and was eager to see his friend again. As the day of her arrival came Viva was ordered on guard duty at the main gate. Angry at not having gotten his usual assignment of bodyguard he pleaded with Azor , who had the day off to fill in for him so he could see Xi. Azor consented. As Viva slipped away through the city trying to catch up with Xi's convoy the main alarm sounded. Hurrying back towards the gate he discover that Sayuri had indeed directed her forces towards Talonron and was assaulting the Main Gate. Viva hurried back toward the battle he arrived in time to see Azor fall to the Sayuri herself. Enraged at the lost of his best friend and at his own selfishness he snapped. He transformed into his Ancient form for the first time and flung himself into the battle with his nothing but his bare hands. Sayuri's forces, caught by surprise at a Ancient and by his furious onslaught were soon routed and retreated into the nearby woods. During the aftermath Viva searched for Azor's body but couldn't find it. Still racked with grief he abandoned his post and left wandering Ker'sara ((Anceint for western front.)) for two years trying to focus his new power.
Ages !4-16:
Not much is known about this time. Viva spent his time wondering around often visiting the remains of Ancient cities. It was somewhere during this time that he learned magic and masters Water, Fire and Lava. Also around this time Xi ran away form Durani and traveled across the Eastern ocean to the lands surrounding Twilight Star Village. Viva remained on the move killing demons where he could find them and sighting were spread far and wide. He didn't step back into the peoples eye until the 4th Great War broke out.
Ages 16-17:
Having been united once again the nation of Demora set out form their northern wastelands attacking the other nations in the name of Sayuri. The WFMA were mobilized at first to combat the threat, but they were soon defeated soundly. Concerned at the new threat the nations of Durani and Talonron engaged the enemy. But due to Xi going missing the Durani were unable to mobilize no more than 1/4 of their army needing the other 3/4 to maintain peace . While Talonron mustered their whole army. After several months of war the Durani started to falter under the sheer numbers of the demon while only being supported by a few Talonronian heavy calvary, The main Talornon forces were a month away form the front lines. But while the major Demoran forces were engaged with the Durani and the bulk of Talonron's forces on the move away form their city, a western demon army descended form the mountains on the west of the land mass making their way towards the unprotected city. 12 miles short on the rolling plains of the human kingdom of Mourngal they encountered something unexpected. A lone man encamped on the plains. As they approached Viva sprang into action. For 2 days he was able to hold off the army by himself using everything he had. On the third day things were diffent. Tired of battle and weak from many wounds viva used the Solairis. He destroyed the army and much of the plains in the massive explosion, but due to his actions he collapsed on the point of death. It wasn't long though before he was found. During the time he held them. The Talonronians had arrived and with their Elven allies crushed the Demons. He was found by a Durani patrol and was taken to their capital. Apparently the destruction of the Western Army hadn't gone unnoticed. During the battle rumor got to the Demoran Army of a being they referred as the Devas'tor. Three weeks later Viva awoke and was promoted to Supreme Commander. After serving for two months trying to get his war-torn home back together he took a leave of absence and promoted his predecessor, Old Dagar to take his place in his absence. He cross the Eastern ocean. At arriving on the shore he spotted a decrypted old mansion under the care of the Vampric Lord Galvatron. He was enlisted due to his fighting capability and served for three months. After awhile though he grew angry at Galvatron's actions and with a few other members, the healer Magik, the dragon Turr, and the demon Kage, they defected towards a nearby village where Turr and Magik had friends. Upon arriving at the village of Twilight Star they made it their new home. Only a month after they rebelled they soon drifted apart. Viva maintained a close friendship with Magik and Turr even after they left the village. Viva remained their and soon was befriended by a human-dragon hybrid known as Aleiah. Though her he got in touch with Xi. They soon were married and Xi gave birth to Viva's son Robert Taurus Vellor.
ages 17- present: Viva was content with life for two years before a large Demonic force threatened the Village, Viva, Aleiah, Xi and a small force of Talonronian soldiers engaged the force led by none other but Azor, who had been turned into a Clanlord. Viva and Aleiah were able to push back the first assault, and viva beat back another wave by himself, but in the process he Ascended. Soon after Aleiah and Xi were then guided toward the Ancient Capital of Kel'lor to retrieve Viva's body. Viva returned to the mortal plane more powerful than ever. The organized their forces and engaged Azors forces one more time. During this battle Viva finally brought down Azor but he had to turn Ascendant to do so. Having beat Azor, torn again by the death of his friend and complications with his marriage with Xi, he left again for distant lands. Before finally making his way back to the Western Front.
History2 (detailed account of after he left the Western front)): Viva was once the most powerful warrior in the strip on land Known as the Western Front. Supreme Commander of the Western Front Military Alliance, but he gave that up for Xi. He came to the village as part of a rebellion at The CotPC. With Turr, Kage, Magik, The Rebels eventually drifted there own way, but before life could settle down a demon named Mephisto attacked the village. There Viva befriended a human female with dragon-esque abilties and looks. Though her he got in contact with his childhood friend Xiandria. Shortly after a Clanlord appeared. This Clanlord turned out to be no other than his best friend Azor who was thought to be dead when he fell to Sayuri's forces in the War of Mourngal. The two former friends waged war upon each other. and during this time viva fell in love and eventally married Xi. Before the war could be ended though Viva succumbed to all the souls he absorbed in his countless campaigns against the Demons, and Ascended to a higher plane of existence. Though it was not known till later that he did this on purpose to gain the power of a Ascendant Warrior, the only creature powerful enough to take one of the Clanlord. The War came to a point at the Final Battle where Viva, Dragon, Vierty, and Xi with the help of the Western Front Army, defeated Azor once and for all leaving nothing behind except for a Scarred Battlefeild. After the War viva settled down with Xi. But something happened between them which is still not really clear as to what, but the outcome is. viva left everything behind and traveled to distance lands.
Strengths: In the sense of hand to hand combat he has no known weakness. But he is far form invincible. In the sense of magic he is one of the greatest in the area of Fire, Water, Lava, and the light side of Divine magic.
Weakness:But he is weak in all other elements. Even though he boasts several mental powers, there are .....feeble at best. One of his major weakness is a dark sinister creature in him. Ancients being often thought of as beings of Light and good have a dark side to them. Darkness and light must co-resided in every creature including Ancients. But these dark personality were often kept suppressed and only vented out in battle. The problem came though with half-breeds. Apparently not being a full ancient weakens the control over this sinister power causing it to emerge under certain circumstances. This "personality" is only known as a Asha'Kahn. The circumstances in viva's case is a moonless light. He also is weak to dark magic or magic that absorbs light. He is weaker to gunshot wound rather than stabbing wound finding the gunshot wound harder to heal. In his Ancient form he highly damaged by spiritual attacks.
Personality:Viva is a kind hearted person, even in battle he will often give his opponents several chance to surrender before attacking. In battle he his ferocious. He is extreamly loyal to those who have earned his trust, and will fight to till he can't no more to protect those close to him.
((profiles for Xi and Dagar soon to come ))
The Edenains aka Ancients.
due to requests I’m officially posting all there is to Edenains
Update: I believe I have finished. so feel free to read and post comments and questions if any thanks!
General background:
The Edenains are what as known as a Guardian race. Their purpose is to protect life and guard over the new races at Creation.
Appearance: The Ancients have the same physiology and anatomy as humans do, for the most part except they are giants the stand around eight to twelve feet tall and have exotic hair and eyes colors due to traits of their clans. There are a few differences between male and female Edenains.
Females: The womenfolk of the Edenains look exactly as a human female does. The only difference is their size of course they stand form 7 to 9 feet tall, their hair and eyes, they are all quite beautiful, and a dull white aura surrounds them.
Males: The males of the race are all heavily muscular, and tend to stand for 8 to 12 feet tall. They have the same hair and eyes as the females, but instead of having a aura , the posses light producing cells surrounding the veins in their forearms that pulse with a white light.
Powers: The Edenains are masters of Magic and can command the Elements by simply speaking the name of the element. Though all Ancient vary in power to different elements but they all excel at Light and Life magic. They posses enhanced strength, speed, intellect and agility superior to most races. They also absorb the life-force of those they kill and use it as power. They can also infect a enemy with their DNA. this rapidly destroys the host's dna and rewrites it with its own element forming a new being, but when used on a truly evil person it will cause a horrible painful death. They can naturally generate light and control it. Mainly using it as a a intense beam of energy. They are fully in tune with their bodies and are capable of controlling their body down to a cellular level. They can regenerate wounds and limbs at a huge drain to their energy.
Lifecycle: A newborn Ancient ages at the same pace that humans due till the ancient reaches around twenty years of age. From then the ancient’s body will stop aging all together. Ancient while immortal , can still die of injury and sickness, but they will revive completely healed and cures at most of 48 hours. Though a ancient can die in a sense. After absorbing enough souls, the ancient will shed his physical form and exist as pure energy. Only the members of the Kal-le-mar Clan can return back to the mortal plane.
Technology: The Edenains use what are know as Sai crystals as a power source. These are crystalline bushes that grow form the ground. These crystals harness pure energy, but it takes a being of intense power to use and harness these crystals. Their cities are grown form pure marble and are often made with precious stones. for examples their streets and roads are over made of huge slabs of emerald and their building often have veins of gold or silver ore running though them. Their buildings take on a more Greek appearance with large sculpted columns and geometric shapes. They favor rectangle and circles in their construction. though most of these buildings have no formal doors. The only way of a entrance is usually a one foot by one foot crystal panel. Upon touch of this panel the marble wall will open. As for their weapons, the Ancients used a wide arsenal of weapons. The Ancients used mostly energy based weapons, beam rifles, energy swords, and such other weapons. But Master weapons were also forged made of a strange metal known as Isoloium. These weapons remained forever sharp and had the interesting quality of remembering their owners. Meaning that the weapon wouldn't change it density and weight so the weapon couldn't be lifted except by a worthy warrior.
Society: The Edenains were separated by Clans or groups sharing similar genetic material. Members of different clans were told apart due to eye and hair color, along with Clan marks.
Clan marks: A symbol branded onto the flesh of a newborn Ancient marking his or her clan. For the males its was on the left side of the chest, for females on the left shoulder. It was on the left side seeing how most Ancients were left handed.
Politics: Each Clan had a representative serving the clan as a whole during important Council matters. Their are five main clans. The Har-kor, the Sal-or-gor, the Keri-ly, and the Kal-le-mar. The grand council was the main governing body of the Ancients. Each of the main clans were represented except for the Kal-le-mar. The Kal-le-mar or the Royal Clan were a militaristic clan and was in charge in the military. The Kal-le-mar were ruled by the Sai-Avi or the High king. A member of the Kal-le-mar. usually a member of the Vellor family.
The Clans:
The Har-kor: The Har-kor were the largest clan maintaing over 200,000 members during the time before the Millina war. These Ancient excelled and different skill trades. Most Ancients technology was forged as the hands of these Ancients. The Har-kor had dark green hair with blue roots, and yellow eyes. They preferred to have their cities surrounded by forests. Their Symbol was a red hourglass suspended by three dark blue chains.
The Sal-or-gor: The Sal-or-gor were the smartest of the Clans. Their intellect was well known throughout the world. Most of the Edenains greatest inventions were thought up by the Sal-or-gor. The Sal-or-gor were often found intermingled with Har-kor and marriages between the two clans were very common. The Sal-or-gor were the second biggest Clan. At their highest they had about 150,000 members. Like the Har-kor the Sal-or-gor like to live in heavily wooded regions. The Sal-or-gor had white hair with black roots, and deep violet eyes. Their Clan Symbol was three revolving red comets with yellow tails.
The Keri-ly: The Keri-ly were the merchants an sailors of the Edenains. They were often found near the waterways of the world. Their fishing skill was so legendary that it was said that if you could get a Keri-ly to whistle then fish would flock to your nets. Due to their impressive bargaining skills some of the best Ancient diplomats were Keri-ly. The Keri-ly were a small sized Clan only numbering 45,000, and due to the fact the marriages out of Clan was frowned upon in Keri-ly society their secrets remained with them. The Keri-ly had red hair with grey roots and heavy dark blue eyes. Their symbol was that of a teardrop of water surround by a circle of fire.
The Kal-le-mar: The Kal-le-mar were maybe the best known of the Clans. The Kal-le-mar were the Warriors of the Edenains. The Kal-le-mar were often the biggest of Edenains. It was not uncommon to see a Kal-le-mar standing 12 feet tall. The Kal-le-mar were often found in their mountain strongholds on the forefront of Ancient territory neighboring demonic infested lands. The Kal-le-mar was called the Royal Clan since a vast majority of the Sai-Avis were Kal-le-mar. To be more accurate the Vellor family. The Kal-le-mar produced 387 of the 400 Sai-Avis in Edenains history. 356 of them form the Vellor family alone. This was the smallest clan only numbering around 5,000. The Kal-le-mar had jet black hair with crimson root and pale ice blue or grey eyes. Their Symbol was a Golden eight point starburst on a field of navy blue.
Three notable facts about the Kal-le-mar, the Eden-Draco alliance , Ascendants, Solaris.
Eden-Draco alliance: About 129 million years ago the then weak Dragons seeked refuge in the Kal-le-mar strongholds. They had been driven form their lairs by a massive infestation of demons. The Sai-Avi at the time , Lintiou Scorpio Vellor, upon hearing of the Dragons' plight led 2000 Kal-le-mar warriors and routing the demons. After such the Dragon clans forged a close alliance with the Edenains. A alliance that held for 127 million years until the fall of the Edenains as the end of the Milliena War.
Ascendants: While most Ancients life-cycle ended with shedding their bodies, the Kal-le-mar were unusual in the fact that they could retake a new physical form. These Edenains were known as Ascendants. These were consider a sub-species and had no Clan holdings. The Ascendants stood around 13-15 feet tall, their Clan marks often shining very brightly and was encircled in Edenain runes, Their hair was jet black and had red streaks shooting though. They had no iris or pupils but were far form blind. On the males the pulsing light in their lower arms and spreaded up to encompass the veins up their arms and to their shoulder and glowed steadily instead of pulsed. The Ascendants were by far the strongest and most powerful of the Edenains. They were often assigned to the Guard of the White Tiger, the Sai-Avi's personal bodyguards. Even though they were powerful their numbers were very few only numbering 350 at most.
Solaris: The Kal-le-mar were often said the best at harnessing light. This is shown though a special attack that only the Kal-le-mar could pull off. A massive beam ranging form 100 yards to a 1/4 of a mile wide beam of intense light capable of leveling cities. This attack was the Eden trump card, but such a blast often drained a Kal-le-mar to exhaustion rendering them unable to fight.
History:
The Ancients have a long long history spanning several hundred million years. This history will cover the most important events mainly in the last 5 million years of the Ancients history. To be more precise the Millennia War. About five million years ago during the time of Sai-Avi ,Ri'lintus Ursa Vellor, a half-Edenain half-dark angel was born. Not much is known about her past but as for the events she caused, they have lasting effects on the world for eons to come. Her name was Ara.
History of Ara: Those familiar with modern Vampire culture should be familiar with the name. She was often known as the Mother of the modern vampire. Ancients, while powerful had a flaw. Like all living things they had a good side and a dark side. While a full blooded Ancient could keep this dark side under control, a half blood on the other hand had to have a method of venting this evilness before it engulfed them. Ara did not even try. She was soon engulfed and twisted into a completely new being. She soon grew resentful of the Ancients. Why should they possess all of the power, and hold the fate of all races in their hands? She looked for a way to strike back, and she found it. She drifted form the protected land of the Edenains and gathered a small band of vampires. They soon wait in ambush at a common crossroads. They soon set upon the first ancient and quickly brought him down. As they started to leave the scene the course of history was forever altered. The evil long suppressed in the Edenain surfaced and twisted into and new creature now know as a Clan lord.
Clan lord: A Clan lord is basically a Dark Ancient. their powers remain generally the same with the exception of that of instead like a regular Ancient , they destroy the souls of those they kill feeding off of the agony and death. Because of this they cannot ascend. Their appearance differed slightly form their former forms. The pulse of white light in their arms or the white aura around them if female, changes to a black light. their skin pales greatly, their hair and eyes invert their colors, and their four canine teeth grow into 4 inch long fangs.
The Milliena War: Ara soon gathered several Clan lords under her command each with several legions of demons and vampires. With her forces they launched a assault on the Ancients. At first Ara's forces didn't stand a chance. The Dragons and Ancients butchered the demon forces quite easily. For the first two million years of the war, the dragons ruled the skies, also with the Ancients still the superior ground force, and with Ara's only advantage was a army of 300 million demons and vampires, along with a handful of clan lords, she had no hope of defeating them in any major battle. Though over time , one by one Ancients were turned into clan lords until the tides turn and the demons forced them into a stalemate. After being at war for 3 million years Ara unleashed her secret weapon. While the demons and vampires vastly outnumbered the Ancients, the ancients had technology, firepower, and greater physical abilities leading to defeat after defeat. The only ones capable of holding their own were the Clan lords. But due to their being only around 200 clan lords after three million years of nonstop warfare she needed needed a new plan. She came up with a creature capable of holding off a Ancient in hand-to hand and capable of defeating one if assisted by two to three others. These creatures were called Bloodguard, which were genetically engineered by combing certain traits of different demons and vampires. The end result was a seven to eight foot tall artificial Clan lord. While they were weaker when compared to the real thing they still had all the traits and powers of one. After Ara introduced the Bloodguard into battle things started to fall apart for the Edenains. The first blow was the withdraw of the dragons. Lacking the immortality of their counterparts these mythical beasts eventually began taking very heavy losses and risked extinction. With heavy hearts they informed the new and last Sai-Avi Kai Leo Vellor that they must withdraw form the Alliance or face utter destruction. Then soon after several Ancients began Ascending due to the constant warfare. The Edenains now without allies and a highly dimished Kal-le-mar Clan, were finally pushed back. For the next two million years the war raged with more and more Ancients Ascending, they were pushed back to their cities. As the first urban warfare began the Sai-Avi mobilized the Guard of the White Tiger. With the Ascendant Warriors in battle they managed to hold their outpost cities for about 25,000 years, but the rapid Ascension of the defenders soon left, leaving only the small Guard defending against the ever growing armies. For another 5,000 years the Guard of the White Tiger held the now deserted cities from Ara. But soon the small Guard of only 100 scattered members were ordered to retreat. And so the war fell into a cycle. The Guard would retreat to the nearest cities, Ara would lay siege and in time as the Defenders ascend the Guard would fall back to the next strongholds. After several thousands of years of this happening the Edenains were pushed back to the Capital on the edge of Elutra. As the Clan lord’s armies soon landed near the small quite coastal village of Twilight Star, buried deep beneath the near by mountains in the majestic city of Kel'lor the Edenains prepared for one final assault.
Battle of Twilight Star Village:
They waited for the Clan lord’s forces to advance into the forest separating the mountains form the village, then they attack. It would be a battle talked about for thousands of years to come. The fourth night after the landing the armies were awoken to the screams of their sentries, before they knew it the demon forces consisting of 5 million demons and vampires, 3,000 clan lords, and 250,000 Bloodguard were under attack form a massive Ancient force. The Ancients had deployed the entire population of the Capital, around 300,000 Ancients, men women and child, along with 4000 Heavy Assault drone, and heavily artillery. Soon the demon armies were thrown in chaos as Ancient and drone barged though the camp slaughtering all they came across. But it wasn't long before the Ara's forced organized and stopped the advance. They eventually began to push the Ancients back but for every foot gain was paid in the lives of thousands of demons per minute. At this point the second wave launched their assault. Form the left flank 300 Kal-le-mar attacked supported by 89 Ascendants. Of them 67 of them were the elite Guard of the White Tiger , led personally by the Sai-Avi Kai Leo Vellor , and his son Telemacil Gemini Vellor. Caught by surprise Ara's forces broke and scattered into large groups which, under the assault of the fresh troops were soon routed by the Kal-le-mar. As the battle raged, Kai , and Telemacil Vellor broke though Ara's personal bodyguards and engaged her directly. Ara was soon overwhelmed by the Sai Avi's assault was trapped into a pendant for her crimes not letting her soul find peace in death, but in her imprisonment, with the last of her strength she latched onto Kai's soul and destroyed it as she was locked away.
The Aftermath: After the battle was over their were only a handful of Ancient’s left standing. Most of the Drones had been crippled and the all of the Ascendants were to badly injured to remain in mortal phase. Leaderless the surving twenty Edenains spread out across the world to serve out the Eons isolated before finally ascending. Telemacil survied the battle and headed back to backed to Andrinel where he built the city of Talonron for the local humans, which had risen to be the dominate force in the region. He served as a advisor to the Talonronians for several years before he himself Ascended around twenty year ago. As so with his passing the legacy of the Edenains faded away into the history books. It has been twenty years since the last Ancient walked the planet but rumors have surfaced that a half-blood still walks carrying out the duties of a Guardian as his ancestors had for millions of year. Maybe these are just rumors told over at the local tavern, but then again maybe, just maybe there might be some truth. Only time will tell.....
Heavenly Knightess
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- Posted: Sun, 13 Dec 2009 04:12:51 +0000
Holy mother of...
You get my famus eyes of well..Dizzness.
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You get my famus eyes of well..Dizzness.
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supremeviva
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- Posted: Sun, 13 Dec 2009 04:14:45 +0000
Heavenly Knightess
Holy mother of...
You get my famus eyes of well..Dizzness.
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You get my famus eyes of well..Dizzness.
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i warned him >_>
Heavenly Knightess
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- Posted: Sun, 13 Dec 2009 04:17:07 +0000
yeah you sure did. o_o
supremeviva
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- Posted: Sun, 13 Dec 2009 04:18:19 +0000
thats still a smaller version. >_> that about five years of work on gaia.
Heavenly Knightess
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- Posted: Sun, 13 Dec 2009 04:22:08 +0000
Oh dear lord. x_X
Now, I am afraid. Deeply afraid.
Now, I am afraid. Deeply afraid.
Heavenly Knightess
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- Posted: Sun, 13 Dec 2009 04:26:57 +0000
No, you're fine. I am just afraid of getting my rp skills handed to me again on a platter deep fired.
I had a few users on here come in (another rp thats ruind) and try to walk all over me because I am lacking in certen..umm..skills in the regard of role playing.
All of you see is well..self taught.
...Forgive the spelling errors. I am just bad at spelling.
I had a few users on here come in (another rp thats ruind) and try to walk all over me because I am lacking in certen..umm..skills in the regard of role playing.
All of you see is well..self taught.
...Forgive the spelling errors. I am just bad at spelling.
Silver Chaotix
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- Posted: Sun, 13 Dec 2009 04:30:48 +0000
Overcompensation much? XD
Okay so I admit I didn't read it all...cuz frankly it kinda scared me and its a little late so my attention span is way, way low.
Okay so looking at what my eyes and mind allowed me to capture. Yes it will be difficult trying to adapt this sort of character into such an RP. However I am noticing just how unnecisarily powerful this character is. He's got forms which make him larger, stronger and overall more power but let's think for a moment. It's like looking at Sonic the Hedgehog, Goliath, Dumbledore, and Superman, all in one body basically.
It's much too focused on growing stronger and larger and using powerful magics despite it's so called mediocre ability to other types and elements. Running as fast a basically an average car and being able to lift one in normal form(?) seems like your character rely a little, if not, quite a bit on brute force. I mean yeah Sora does do a lot of crazy stuff but correct me if I'm wrong but it's usually during the final battles and most other times he simply holds back.
That's what I was able to gather in a nutshell.
Okay so I admit I didn't read it all...cuz frankly it kinda scared me and its a little late so my attention span is way, way low.
Okay so looking at what my eyes and mind allowed me to capture. Yes it will be difficult trying to adapt this sort of character into such an RP. However I am noticing just how unnecisarily powerful this character is. He's got forms which make him larger, stronger and overall more power but let's think for a moment. It's like looking at Sonic the Hedgehog, Goliath, Dumbledore, and Superman, all in one body basically.
It's much too focused on growing stronger and larger and using powerful magics despite it's so called mediocre ability to other types and elements. Running as fast a basically an average car and being able to lift one in normal form(?) seems like your character rely a little, if not, quite a bit on brute force. I mean yeah Sora does do a lot of crazy stuff but correct me if I'm wrong but it's usually during the final battles and most other times he simply holds back.
That's what I was able to gather in a nutshell.
supremeviva
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- Posted: Sun, 13 Dec 2009 04:31:19 +0000
same here. I'm completely self taught as well. My regualr posts might not be massive paragraphs only just a handful of sentences, but i excell at combat posts and i think that it fits the character fine, since he's really a simple guy quiet guy.
Puggle and Pip
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- Posted: Sun, 13 Dec 2009 04:33:47 +0000
it's like 4:30AM so I have no attention span apart from typing @_@ crying And i'm self taught as well beleive it or not xd but I can adjust my roleplay ability depending what i'm in....as long as they're not asking for novels lol