Not loving the hair with this, because it's such an off shade of grey/white/blue.
Not loving the heels either- try one of the shoes from Shadowed Dancing Princesses?
One of those might look nice. C:
Cute though, I like the layering in the torso.
This is a tad cliche.
I have nothing against red and black color schemes, but it's a bit lacking in originality that would really step this avatar up a notch.
I'm not loving the hair, and the face is a bit weird.
It's expressionless- I think a more menacing face would work better with this.
I like that you used the leg mod, however~
I could be wrong, but it looks like you're using a set. >w<
I'm not sure where you're going with this avatar- it looks a bit messy and confused. C:
The hair is offputting, mainly because of how strange the shape and color is in comparison to the light pink, more detailed textures.
I like the colors on this, the blue/purple looks nice with the cream.
I don't like the head area though. Try changing the eyes, and maybe a hat or something.
Or just something on the head. It's quite bare up there, as it is.