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ok i'm back
ive got four of you right? -w-
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Chevalerie
Joshua84
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Rate please? : D

9.5/10
i cant exaclt point out the issue here
i guess some items dont exactly go well in this, but i cant seem to point them out
(especially since theyre all like back-to-back) its ok i guess, it got a high score!
color distribution is good o.o hmm pretty neat
there is a few things that bothers me though
(but its really just persoanl issues, dont worry about it TOO much)
the shoes. its a little odd compared to the rest of the avi
in terms of the yellow and kinda with the rest of the avi
but i really cant recommend anything else, so we'll try keep it
i'd say try putting something of the same yellow/orange towards the top a little
that cape thing is a little weird but i'll let you keep it
the face is also a little simple, but i dont want you to do anything you dont want
so i'll just give you a simple suggestion, more orange to the top.
(zodiacal - leo might help you, especially just that little collar thing)
quote again for specific help or more smile (why is your one so long? -w-" wink
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11th day
Joshua84


    do me again, please emotion_kirakira

it looks great, i cant give you an exact rate because im not entirely sure what youre aiming for
but it looks better in my opinion
there is some room for improvement (but i'd really hate to bother you again,
especially since its nice and good enough as it seems)
i like how you made the face look more epic XD
and how the clothes look a little more flowy (as in they work well toether)
and it has matching colors! XD (possibly the best thing i can mark on)
anyway i hope you like my help smile
it was fun working with you, if you still want help and suggestions for another one
or for this one (i honestly dont know what to put on it though)
quote back smile (my opinion? your avi is 9/10!, but i cant really help you any further...
im no good with avis like yours, i like it anyway, id stick with it - because i cant make it any better T^T)
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[ White ] .Rabbit.
Joshua84
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Every fairy tale needs a good, old-fashioned villain


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hmmm ive been seeing a lot of these recently, to be honest its not as great as some
but you sure are able to do some pretty neat tricks!

8/10
hmm not exaclty quite as sure what youre going for as the theme
the reds are a smit off (but this isnt very important,
ofcourse if youre someone like me, i would noticed and care for quite a lot)
its a little important expecially if the core subject of your avatar is color matching
but its fine i guess...
the main point thats disturbing me... is that cream.
theyre all quite different....
from browny-yellow, to orangey-white, to yellow-white
try stick to around two i guess (so we dont have to change too many things) and keep them consistent
like i said i'm not exactly sure what the theme is,
its pretty mixed of multiple items that kinda contradict....
it definitely has room to improve
just remember.... you dont have to listen to me, rates are opinions and you get your own ;3
quote back if you need more help and sugestions!
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[“I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, It's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, And that enables you to laugh at life's realities.”]
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It's all good, I'm in no rush. :3

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ooh youre avatar is looking a little more.... uhh i kind find words.... uhhhmmm....
the point is its better now i guess and a little easier to judge maybe? XD

9/10
ive never seen quite an avatar like yours
its made of completely random (yet beautiful some how) items thats color matching ._.
its actually quite inexplainable and its kinda hard to criticize
i'd say don't remove anything
but maybe add...a dash of pink..... into it.... around the body area?
maybe the cherry blossom collar (or is that too cute...? - spring rose could help too but...
i dont think anything in it could really do much...)
and possibly a bit of black on the hair/head ouo
you COULD also add a teeny tiny gold somewhere between the coco and slips
maybe the gold promise ring?
besides that it looks cool in random way :3
i quite like it smile quote again for more help!
Joshua84


If you're still awake, I'd love to hear your opinion on this. The lower half feels a little sparse to me, but I don't know what - if anything - I should add.
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Joshua84


ooh youre avatar is looking a little more.... uhh i kind find words.... uhhhmmm....
the point is its better now i guess and a little easier to judge maybe? XD

9/10
ive never seen quite an avatar like yours
its made of completely random (yet beautiful some how) items thats color matching ._.
its actually quite inexplainable and its kinda hard to criticize
i'd say don't remove anything
but maybe add...a dash of pink..... into it.... around the body area?
maybe the cherry blossom collar (or is that too cute...? - spring rose could help too but...
i dont think anything in it could really do much...)
and possibly a bit of black on the hair/head ouo
you COULD also add a teeny tiny gold somewhere between the coco and slips
maybe the gold promise ring?
besides that it looks cool in random way :3
i quite like it smile quote again for more help!


[“I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, It's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, And that enables you to laugh at life's realities.”]
++DR SUESS++


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I was actually thinking about getting the Cherry blossom for the BG. Would the BG be okay with this avatar, do you think? I've never seen what the collar would look like. I'll go try it on, if I like, I'll go ahead and splurge for it. ^_^
And I'll also check out the Spring Rose.
Should I remove the sacred leaf and maybe put a black headband in it's place?
And I have a gold promise ring! :3
Thanks for the rate. <3

Btw. I love your avatar. ^_^
It looks amazing. O_O

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>.>;;
Like Junk, Trash, Inks, Etc. Click the banner in my signature to learn more!

&& also, I'm questing Art & Signs. :3
Care to help?
PM me.
I tip. <3
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Joshua84

I would love a rate, comments, and suggestions if you have any.
Joshua84
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I would like a rate, please
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Joshua84
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Hi!
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I would love a rate :3
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Joshua84
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Rate and maybe some comments?
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Robo_iBenny
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ooh youre avatar is looking a little more.... uhh i kind find words.... uhhhmmm....
the point is its better now i guess and a little easier to judge maybe? XD

9/10
ive never seen quite an avatar like yours
its made of completely random (yet beautiful some how) items thats color matching ._.
its actually quite inexplainable and its kinda hard to criticize
i'd say don't remove anything
but maybe add...a dash of pink..... into it.... around the body area?
maybe the cherry blossom collar (or is that too cute...? - spring rose could help too but...
i dont think anything in it could really do much...)
and possibly a bit of black on the hair/head ouo
you COULD also add a teeny tiny gold somewhere between the coco and slips
maybe the gold promise ring?
besides that it looks cool in random way :3
i quite like it smile quote again for more help!


[“I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, It's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, And that enables you to laugh at life's realities.”]
++DR SUESS++


~

I was actually thinking about getting the Cherry blossom for the BG. Would the BG be okay with this avatar, do you think? I've never seen what the collar would look like. I'll go try it on, if I like, I'll go ahead and splurge for it. ^_^
And I'll also check out the Spring Rose.
Should I remove the sacred leaf and maybe put a black headband in it's place?
And I have a gold promise ring! :3
Thanks for the rate. <3

Btw. I love your avatar. ^_^
It looks amazing. O_O

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I'm questing stuff.
>.>;;
Like Junk, Trash, Inks, Etc. Click the banner in my signature to learn more!

&& also, I'm questing Art & Signs. :3
Care to help?
PM me.
I tip. <3

the leaf was good, some headbands should be able to layer under the leaf
but yeah, if not, it should be fine (but really there should be something!
theres like 5 layerings on the head that doesnt include hair!)
i was worried the tree might cover too much of the background, but im not entirely sure
it looks amazing anyway, go with what you want!
quote again for some more suggestions (or opinions smile
(thankyou!~ ^_^)
Lunae Astris
Joshua84
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Hi!

hey! want a rate? X3
(if so i'd have to do so tomorrow, was busy again ono wink
(then again, i really doubt it needs one... its sooo amazing ouo)
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everyone! im sorry but ill have to do yours all tomorrow!
im was so busy today im sorry!
i can already see its amazingness leaking in my thread!
please dont change them til i rate them c:
(that is unless you want me to rate something else)
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