banicula
42rd
The facial expression look ukky, I'd use the second smallest version of those lips, or SDPlus Cassiopeia lips, but the eyes look fine. I'm personally not fond of the innocent expression, but it works. You're using 3 Heart x Mind, and the sparkle tack-ify the entire avatar, but otherwise it looks fine, even though it doesn't exactly ooze 'never been done before'.
I'm actually only using two heart x mind, and as for the smile, yes it's got to go lol although the sparkles I think do give the avi the magical/angelic look no?
Ah, sorry, I thought the wing-y belt thing was part of the....whatever that is.
The sparkles do give the avatar a 'magical' look, but the color is a bit off and they look large and akward. Try the butterfly dust thing from Dreamer's Dust?