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Dhaunolil Auvryndar's avatar

Dapper Lunatic

So yeah,
I just created this outfit out of mere boredom.
And I'd like some hints and tips, perhaps a few secrets,
that you people could share with me,
so that I can improve it.
I was actually hoping the Hazardous Drummer Face Mask
would work with this outfit, sadly, it takes away the fur collar.
So, that's out of the question, because it would look pretty naked.

Perhaps a tip on some better shoes, because I feel like they are
out of synch with the rest of the outfit. So share your thoughts and,
perhaps you guys will help me with creating a better outfit.

And as the title says, you can rate me aswell ofcourse. (:
I'll rate you back. :U
peroxids's avatar

Loverboy

11,150 Points
  • Risky Lifestyle 100
  • Lavish Tipper 200
  • Full closet 200
{{ Yeah those shoes look pretty terrible. I also don't like how stoic your pose is compared to the arc of those flames... let me dig around tektek for a moment and see if I can figure out any suggestions... }}
pistoIs's avatar

Chatty Spirit

          ✖ i prefer male avatars to have leg mods
          it's better that way.
          the shoes are too light for the rest of the avatar
          and the face needs more detail to me
          but it's nice.
          7/10
i actually like the shoes.
it looks "out of synch" because you have no white throughtout the avatar.
Add more, it will be more dynamic with a new color. imo.
for example, braceletes, arm bands, better gloves, etc.
The tail, i don't like, and he needs a better expression, perhaps a smirk , some cuts/bruises.
and i think it would look better if he fashioned a weapon instead of a cig. or both.
peroxids's avatar

Loverboy

11,150 Points
  • Risky Lifestyle 100
  • Lavish Tipper 200
  • Full closet 200
{{ Maybe the Golden Gumshoe legs? And I'm not too fond of the brown hair, maybe Captain Syrma hair will match? I agree with what was said about the expression, too. Maybe Mathematical Knight or Modus Operandi? And if you still want him smoking, a Gold Kiseru will look much better than the Cig. }}
VJ MORPH's avatar

King Shapeshifter

Dhaunolil Auvryndar
So yeah,
I just created this outfit out of mere boredom.
And I'd like some hints and tips, perhaps a few secrets,
that you people could share with me,
so that I can improve it.
I was actually hoping the Hazardous Drummer Face Mask
would work with this outfit, sadly, it takes away the fur collar.
So, that's out of the question, because it would look pretty naked.

Perhaps a tip on some better shoes, because I feel like they are
out of synch with the rest of the outfit. So share your thoughts and,
perhaps you guys will help me with creating a better outfit.

And as the title says, you can rate me aswell ofcourse. (:
I'll rate you back. :U
It takes practice to make a nice avatar, but as long as you like (love) it, that is all that matters... You kind of get a nack for doing it, i think, and seeing others avis gives you ideas and you work from there, i like your avi, just as it is, but i have a very vivid imagination too... Nice job!

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