Doing the Thing [fixing you]

[Tuesday Mournings]

Fashionable Insomniac

I would love some suggestions. I'm going for a really realistic looking avatar. I'm trying to find eyes that i like for the face, but i'm pretty picky. :drama llama: DO you have any suggestions?

crop top, heavy jacket, white jeans (assumptions), boots.
a lot of these things are not like the other.
Is it the winter season or the summer season.
i'll go with winter. don't go with a crop top. grab a sweater or at lease something warmer
Black leather belt
gimpi - stripped scarf, looks alright too.

[Pharaoh Misa]

☥ Behold Thy Pharaoh ☥
xxxxShe Speaks

❝*throws self onto you* I've been looking for you! emotion_0A0 I kinda made a mess that I think is cluttered and while I highly doubt I'm doing it wrong, is there anything you can suggest to make this...work. Ish. emotion_kirakira ❞

[TheHardcorePanda]

Third arm visibility is a negative sir, and I typically call it a "p***s" - but maybe that's just a size difference between you and I.

I hate group project members who hate group project members. Your move.

Hurry up and fix me, since you left me lying here, broken on the floor.

[Tuesday Mournings]

Pharaoh Misa

☥ Behold Thy Pharaoh ☥
xxxxShe Speaks

❝*throws self onto you* I've been looking for you! emotion_0A0 I kinda made a mess that I think is cluttered and while I highly doubt I'm doing it wrong, is there anything you can suggest to make this...work. Ish. emotion_kirakira ❞

those legs, super iffy. that mask, again super iffy.
change e'm
put some stockings on + daughter of snows, of first frost skin.

[Tuesday Mournings]

Torse

GET SOME PURPLE ON YO HEAD

do masquerade bangs stick out from under that headthing at all?

otherwise yo current is "daaayumnnn"

yeah, not really. wish they'd make a recolor for temptress. thing's too good.
thanks human. i'm impressed by your use of those really weird arms. cause you know. they're weird.

[Snowflake_xo]

I'm not entirely sure how to suggest anything about your avatar because quite frankly, it's not exactly a style I'm comfortable with critiquing. It looks fine, but I couldn't tell you how to possibly make it better. . .

And I don't see a third arm.

And I would like suggestions. : ))

Specifically in regards to the arms. They're just kinda. . . There?

[Tuesday Mournings]

TheHardcorePanda

Third arm visibility is a negative sir, and I typically call it a "p***s" - but maybe that's just a size difference between you and I.

I hate group project members who hate group project members. Your move.

Hurry up and fix me, since you left me lying here, broken on the floor.

aye your difference is a few inches short of mine.

well, i hate people who hate other people for hating group project members. thanks obama.

not much to do there. you could add Masquerade - dead eye + death whisper glowing red eye.
graffiti active - paint splatter?

[Tuesday Mournings]

Snowflake_xo

I'm not entirely sure how to suggest anything about your avatar because quite frankly, it's not exactly a style I'm comfortable with critiquing. It looks fine, but I couldn't tell you how to possibly make it better. . .

And I don't see a third arm.

And I would like suggestions. : ))

Specifically in regards to the arms. They're just kinda. . . There?

add doufu hua - muffler.
astra: hot cup of coffee
m's sketchbook - bag
grab some gloves

that'll do

[FKA Kuroi]

Tuesday Mournings

♦ They say... ♦

⇜ You have a third ARM!? eek
on point 4 I agree with you completely, ohmygod, why WHY do we have to do group projects?

hm, I'm not sure what you're aiming for with the avi, I adore the upper and lower part but the middle ... I'm not sure what's going on there. The purple feathers, the shade of those a are a bit off, otherwise the concept and the color scheme is very nice. I don't dislike it, I'm just not sure I understand it.

I'd try to coordinate the items a little better so the details become more visible.

Ok so my current avi is very unfinished. But I'll gladly accept suggestions! ♥
Edit: it is also mismatched, but uuh whatever ⇝

♦ it is just a matter of time ♦

[Silverlight Symphony]

From forum size, I can't really tell that you have a third arm. Looks more like arm armor, at least on my monitor. May be different with dressingroom size. But unless you are entering the arena with it, I suppose that doesn't even matter.

[Pharaoh Misa]

Tuesday Mournings

Pharaoh Misa

☥ Behold Thy Pharaoh ☥
xxxxShe Speaks

❝*throws self onto you* I've been looking for you! emotion_0A0 I kinda made a mess that I think is cluttered and while I highly doubt I'm doing it wrong, is there anything you can suggest to make this...work. Ish. emotion_kirakira ❞

those legs, super iffy. that mask, again super iffy.
change e'm
put some stockings on + daughter of snows, of first frost skin.

☥ Behold Thy Pharaoh ☥
xxxxShe Speaks

❝But, I have stockings on! emotion_0A0 But, I used the frost skin and a sheerer stocking. What might I do to change the mask. Before I had the face ask on the mouth and one eye patch but Dai thought the darker eye might've been bad so I put another one on. What might I do to fix it? emotion_kirakira ❞

[Tuesday Mournings]

Kuroi-dono

butterfly wing, no. Divine being - wing, yes.
its a waste for the skin to be black without make-up.
Dirge's serenade - face paint.
trilune's promise - mark

[Tuesday Mournings]

Silverlight Symphony

From forum size, I can't really tell that you have a third arm. Looks more like arm armor, at least on my monitor. May be different with dressingroom size. But unless you are entering the arena with it, I suppose that doesn't even matter.

well that's good to know, i was just concerned it would ruin the image.
exalted arc arm is underneath the barbarian arm, but is sort of covered by the hat. sort of.
but its good to know no one can see it.

as for helping you HA. no. maybe baronet mouth, but this thing's a beauty.

[Tuesday Mournings]

Pharaoh Misa

i'd call for a mouth, i think it'd look great. some white lips + baronet breath.
you could just get lazy and add a white dress to cover the legs.