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Okay so the image on the right is the edited version. Please critique it!

Thanks!!!


Also, I'm tipping everybody who helps.
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It's a good start, however there's a few things I suggest...

1. The Expression--It's blank. I'd like to see you work with it a little more than just closing the eyes--make your avi convey some emotion.

2. The Hairpins--You need black on the head, but I suggest using something else. Try looking on tek tek.

3. The Arms--They're awful bare. Look into some gloves and/or bracelets.

Lastly, look at the black leather belt, or something to put some more detail around the waist.
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It's a good start, however there's a few things I suggest...

1. The Expression--It's blank. I'd like to see you work with it a little more than just closing the eyes--make your avi convey some emotion.

2. The Hairpins--You need black on the head, but I suggest using something else. Try looking on tek tek.

3. The Arms--They're awful bare. Look into some gloves and/or bracelets.

Lastly, look at the black leather belt, or something to put some more detail around the waist.


Thanks much for the tips! Is this better?

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I'm not sure if the horns in place of the hairpins is any better, but it was the only thing I could find that I had or was in my price range. (Of course, this was something that I already had) Does it work? Or do you have any other suggestions? Is that enough emotion? (I'm not changing the eyes because those are the only ones I have that look good and won't mess up the colors)
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I love the edited one you did!!! The horns make it stand out even more! 10/10. 4laugh
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I love the edited one you did!!! The horns make it stand out even more! 10/10. 4laugh


Thank you very much! >w< Any thoughts on my current avatar?
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Thank you very much! >w< Any thoughts on my current avatar?


The arms look a bit bare. Perhaps put on some bracelets?
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Thank you very much! >w< Any thoughts on my current avatar?


The arms look a bit bare. Perhaps put on some bracelets?


Yeah, I thought that might be the case. I'll take a look but it's hard to find matches! Maybe I can find something with the rusty red color.
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It's not bad for a simplistic matching avatar. The horns definitely improve it.

I'd probably think about a different mouth, not one of the regular ones. Some sort of grimace perhaps?
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It's not bad for a simplistic matching avatar. The horns definitely improve it.

I'd probably think about a different mouth, not one of the regular ones. Some sort of grimace perhaps?


Hrrm. Mouths are expensive. But I also can't find a good one. I don't really see any grimace mouths out there, expensive or not. The only other mouth I own is the Hidden Ace one, and I really don't think that one is better. Even for full expressions, Anesidora's Woe seems to be the only one that fits and I might be willing to buy.

Idk, I probably won't even keep this avatar for long once I get it. I'm super ADD about my avatars. But thanks for your help!

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