Come rate 3 of my avatars. I rate back.

[Balentay]

They're all made by me, and there's something about all of them that has caused me to keep all of the items to them for some odd reason besides my SIN skin being soulbound of course.

Avis are listed from oldest to newest, with slight variations listed under them.

I would appreciate if you gave me a detailed critique, with what your first impression was of each avi, how they can each be improved, a number rating, what gender you thought it was at first and anything else you can think of. c:

I rate back.

1.

Alternative
I eventually want to get Vanessa's hair for this one.
Not much change, but it's definitely an expensive one.

2.

Alternative
I also eventually want to save up for Slender. I think
this looks pretty nice. What do you think?

3.

[Tcgirl24]

1. 7.5/10. I like the hair, it's a nice touch. The eyes are fine but the mouth is bothering me. I adore the shirt and the necklace was a nice touch. I'm not a big fan of the background.

2. 9/10. I adore this one. I love the theme of the avatar. I don't really have anything bad to say about it. Nice job (:

3. 4/10. I'm definitely not a fan, sorry. The hair isn't really matching with the rest of the avatar and I'm not a fan of the eyes or the lips. The eyebrows kind of ruin the eyes and the outfit looks a bit cluttered.

4. 9/10. I really enjoy this one. I love the hair, the eyes and the dress. Nice job.

Hope I was helpful...

[Balentay]

Tcgirl24

Thank you for the feed back. c:

For you, I think you need something to cover your thighs up with.
They look so bare compared to the rest of you.
I would give you a 7. There's room for improvement.

[AlmaFishslap]

1st: 8/10 Its overly nice, I like it, there's a color scheme and all that...But something bothers me on the face...can't put my finger on it.
2nd: 9/10...It would be perfect if you could find a black or red tail...This one doesn't fit, also don't go for the slender...really...it ruins it.
3rd: I'd rate the Alternative 7/10, it's good, maybe try the Scarlet Mist mouth. The chest looks kinda empty tho...But I can't think of some item to use there.
4th: 9/10 ...Its good, pretty color scheme, but I don't feel like the pink belongs here...

[iPlayWithDoh]

1. 10/10 : I love it. c: This avi was always my favorite. <3

2. 9/10 : I like it.. but as mentioned, the only thing that really needs changing is the tail.. o.e; Other then that I love the theme of it. <3

3. 2/10 : I really just.. don't like this avi. D: Nothing goes, nothing matches.. it's just.. no bueno with me. D:

4. 9/10 : I LOVE LOVE LOVE this one. <2 Try adding some pink on his head though to even the colors out. <3

[Balentay]

AlmaFishslap

1st: 8/10 Its overly nice, I like it, there's a color scheme and all that...But something bothers me on the face...can't put my finger on it.
2nd: 9/10...It would be perfect if you could find a black or red tail...This one doesn't fit, also don't go for the slender...really...it ruins it.
3rd: I'd rate the Alternative 7/10, it's good, maybe try the Scarlet Mist mouth. The chest looks kinda empty tho...But I can't think of some item to use there.
4th: 9/10 ...Its good, pretty color scheme, but I don't feel like the pink belongs here...

For the first one I have been told that the red necklace really pops out.
Before I ended up selling it, I had the Rock Angel necklace equipped. When I took off the field and the tree, the pink and black necklace blended nicely with my pants.

As for your avatar, I like the looks of it. However, I don't think the compass goes very well with it. With no other gold (on the other side of your avi, that is), it sticks out and is the first thing my eyes are drawn to.
I would give your avatar an 8.5. You've obviously spent some time on it. c:

[Balentay]

iPlayWithDoh

1. 10/10 : I love it. c: This avi was always my favorite. <3

2. 9/10 : I like it.. but as mentioned, the only thing that really needs changing is the tail.. o.e; Other then that I love the theme of it. <3

3. 2/10 : I really just.. don't like this avi. D: Nothing goes, nothing matches.. it's just.. no bueno with me. D:

4. 9/10 : I LOVE LOVE LOVE this one. <2 Try adding some pink on his head though to even the colors out. <3

No one ever likes my favorite designs xD The third one is one of my favorites of the 4.

As for yours...

So original! So amazing! Evidently you have spent hours upon hours of scouring the marketplace, tekteking away until you found the perfect color set. It really, truly shows. I love how your eyes contrast with your bottom half, it really... It adds a certain style, a certain flare to your avi that is just unforgettable. I honestly wish I had thought of that item combination first.
A definite 10/10, Doh.

[iPlayWithDoh]

Balentay

No one ever likes my favorite designs xD The third one is one of my favorites of the 4.

As for yours...

So original! So amazing! Evidently you have spent hours upon hours of scouring the marketplace, tekteking away until you found the perfect color set. It really, truly shows. I love how your eyes contrast with your bottom half, it really... It adds a certain style, a certain flare to your avi that is just unforgettable. I honestly wish I had thought of that item combination first.
A definite 10/10, Doh.

LOL, xD
Thanks. c:
It took me forever to get it. D:
heart
lol..

[AlmaFishslap]

Balentay

Thanks. c:
I've found some alternatives for the compass and a nice belt , but they're like 4 mill and I really can't afford it now... xD

[l rose l]

first -7/10 not liking the necklace
second -9/10 tail isnt right. try a devil tail? but the character is vary put together and i like it.
third -not liking it at all. all the others look put together,this feels random to me 0/10 change the hair and go with the colors of the mid section?
forth- 9/10 love the colors, and the brightness of it. only thing is i wish there was some pink in the top.


rate back?

[Balentay]

l rose l

first -7/10 not liking the necklace
second -9/10 tail isnt right. try a devil tail? but the character is vary put together and i like it.
third -not liking it at all. all the others look put together,this feels random to me 0/10 change the hair and go with the colors of the mid section?
forth- 9/10 love the colors, and the brightness of it. only thing is i wish there was some pink in the top.


rate back?

My favorite one is always the least liked. xD Oh well.
Taking it down for some serious re-tweaking. There's so much to do that I don't think it's worth salvaging.
As for number 4, my current... I wish I could find the right item for near the head. mad

For you, I think of a nouveau pirate. It's memorable, and I really like it. I just wish you had hair.

EDIT-

Whoops redface
Forgot to rate you.

8/10 c:

[l rose l]

Balentay

l rose l

first -7/10 not liking the necklace
second -9/10 tail isnt right. try a devil tail? but the character is vary put together and i like it.
third -not liking it at all. all the others look put together,this feels random to me 0/10 change the hair and go with the colors of the mid section?
forth- 9/10 love the colors, and the brightness of it. only thing is i wish there was some pink in the top.


rate back?

My favorite one is always the least liked. xD Oh well.
Taking it down for some serious re-tweaking. There's so much to do that I don't think it's worth salvaging.
As for number 4, my current... I wish I could find the right item for near the head. mad

For you, I think of a nouveau pirate. It's memorable, and I really like it. I just wish you had hair.

lol i had some but it wasn't right...ive been looking at some, but they are in the millions, the ones i like -.- and i really don't have that. any suggestions that are affordable would be nice.

[Balentay]

l rose l

Balentay

l rose l

first -7/10 not liking the necklace
second -9/10 tail isnt right. try a devil tail? but the character is vary put together and i like it.
third -not liking it at all. all the others look put together,this feels random to me 0/10 change the hair and go with the colors of the mid section?
forth- 9/10 love the colors, and the brightness of it. only thing is i wish there was some pink in the top.


rate back?

My favorite one is always the least liked. xD Oh well.
Taking it down for some serious re-tweaking. There's so much to do that I don't think it's worth salvaging.
As for number 4, my current... I wish I could find the right item for near the head. mad

For you, I think of a nouveau pirate. It's memorable, and I really like it. I just wish you had hair.

lol i had some but it wasn't right...ive been looking at some, but they are in the millions, the ones i like -.- and i really don't have that. any suggestions that are affordable would be nice.

Well, there's always Dexterous Marksman.... Or Deranged Surgeon.