I like the layering!
I wish you could use Lovely Lucie with the eyes, BUT! I know is kind of EXPENSIVE, so... sweatdrop If you can add a background, it will be great too. I suggest to go without the Little Lucie empty eyes, because it makes the eyes looks dead.
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Is boring! gonk
Without mouth, kind of naked, anklets looks bad and do not match the outfit, the owl-snow flakes looks rather random and blush is too much. I suggest for a more clean makeup and a better elaborate outfit, one that could match the avatar in theme and colors(optional!).
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This one is what I call 'cluterred-kawaii', with a bunch of girly-pink stuff and a pet... it is common on Gaia, but is up to the Gaian to make it better and original, I think you did it... I THINK! confused I suggest Sainte Ciel: Agape, so you can cut the curly hair and make it look more clean and less bulky on the back, also the hard pink emanating from it, is a little too much.
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I like this! I suggest for you to quit the blue snowflake on the forehead and try adding something with that kind of green from the anklets... Peisinoe's Discant (Crown of the Muses)? Try adding a nose to the face or change the face for a more elaborate one. Why?~, because the items have that 'pirate' theme, which a good face could help you in creating a personality on the character.
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