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[Periphrasis]

Peri, Peri, quite contrary...

Okay, so basically I'm making an avatar on tektek I need help with.



I have a good base, I just feel like it's missing something.
If you have any other criticisms, they're welcome too.

If you try to help (or even just bump), I'll rate you!

[My Neighbor Miyazaki]

It's a bit darker than the hair, but the secret retreat overskirt makes the dress look a lot fuller, and helps balance out the shape of the wings ^^

[Periphrasis]

Le Avant Garde

It's a bit darker than the hair, but the secret retreat overskirt makes the dress look a lot fuller, and helps balance out the shape of the wings ^^

Peri, Peri, quite contrary...

I like the shape,
but both the fact that it covers up the gem dress detail and that the reds don't match just kill me.
Thank for trying though!

Your avi is adorable!
If I had to say change one think, I'd say switch the eyes to something brighter?
I think it would make a nicer balance between the bright and dull in the avi.
8/10

[Periphrasis]

Peri, Peri, quite contrary...

Bump!

[Periphrasis]

Peri, Peri, quite contrary...

Bump!

[Stinky_Pickles]

You can use Picolitrosso's Urn(pink over skirt), it doesn't hide the jewel detail at the bottom and it also match's the hair.

[poisonivy1219]

I'm not sure I like the sash.. but it is bringing more of that red colour down which is what the avi needs.. I'll keep looking however ^^

[Periphrasis]

Stinky_Pickles

You can use Picolitrosso's Urn(pink over skirt), it doesn't hide the jewel detail at the bottom and it also match's the hair.

Peri, Peri, quite contrary...

I think it's too cluttered in the middle then...
And the golds don't quite match.
But the red is the right idea, I think.

XD Your avi makes me laugh.
(In a good way.)
I love the a metal arm things.
But maybe pull some of the color of the wires down?
That, and maybe a slightly blacker cape.
7/10

[Pistol Kiss]

Total Value: 3,493,699 Gold
After Exclusions: 559,000 Gold
[Item Information]

Item List:
Little Lucie
Ice Queen
Rosamund's Revenge
Astra-XXIX: Royal Indigo Wings
Gold Tribal Right Arm Tattoo
Dappy Dandy
Mystery of the Stolen Sapphires

I did some editing to make the avatar look better over all. The red hair just looked off and wrong in This blue hair is nearly the same shape and adds a nice soft blue. Also I changed the face around because the other one looked flat/expressionless.

[Periphrasis]

poisonivy1219

I'm not sure I like the sash.. but it is bringing more of that red colour down which is what the avi needs.. I'll keep looking however ^^

Peri, Peri, quite contrary...

You're right.
On both counts.
The sash is not quite right, but the avi needs more red.

ADVENTURE TIME.
The episode where Finn was Marceline's servant? <3
I'm very biased. XD
9/10

[Stinky_Pickles]

Periphrasis

Stinky_Pickles

You can use Picolitrosso's Urn(pink over skirt), it doesn't hide the jewel detail at the bottom and it also match's the hair.

Peri, Peri, quite contrary...

I think it's too cluttered in the middle then...
And the golds don't quite match.
But the red is the right idea, I think.

XD Your avi makes me laugh.
(In a good way.)
I love the a metal arm things.
But maybe pull some of the color of the wires down?
That, and maybe a slightly blacker cape.
7/10

ok

[Periphrasis]

Pistol Kiss

Total Value: 3,493,699 Gold
After Exclusions: 559,000 Gold
[Item Information]

Item List:
Little Lucie
Ice Queen
Rosamund's Revenge
Astra-XXIX: Royal Indigo Wings
Gold Tribal Right Arm Tattoo
Dappy Dandy
Mystery of the Stolen Sapphires

I did some editing to make the avatar look better over all. The red hair just looked off and wrong in This blue hair is nearly the same shape and adds a nice soft blue. Also I changed the face around because the other one looked flat/expressionless.

Peri, Peri, quite contrary...

Sorry, I actually really love the hair. </3
And I don't really like the hair you changed it to.
I actually don't like any of your changes.

You avi reminds me of Rambo.
But younger, a young Rambo.
A younger, slightly effeminate Rambo.
With horns.
Maybe not so much Rambo.
5.5/10

I think we just have very different tastes.

[Nasyiri]

I think probably a small red handheld would make a big difference here. Or maybe try the hip bows from Red Velvet Queen of Cups? Or the petals from Rose Guardian?

[Pistol Kiss]

Periphrasis

Its cool. n,n

Any suggestions?

[Periphrasis]

Nasyiri

I think probably a small red handheld would make a big difference here. Or maybe try the hip bows from Red Velvet Queen of Cups? Or the petals from Rose Guardian?

Peri, Peri, quite contrary...

I don't know those items well enough to offer an opinion.

Super awesome avi.
For people who like clutter, probably 10/10.
For me, like 9/10.