Xennik
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- Posted: Sun, 30 Mar 2008 03:05:59 +0000
Eviemira
hurray! ~<3
aww superhero nerd-dad. biggrin That's awesome.
YES and I LOVE IT. Aaaaah it's so cute! She really is so pretty and fun and quirky in all the good ways. She feels like she's very comfortable to be around. How did they meet eachother?
Oh my gosh, first person from everyone's point of view would be like *brain explosion* for you and for the readers. We are not accustomed to being telephatic and getting in everyone's head would be too hard to follow, even if you made the writing very distinct. But first person, especially for the youngest of the group who might otherwise get overlooked, and who will also have a more unique perspective on the situation than the older characters, is very good and draws people in. ^_^ Because of his personality, you might be able to write Demiko's from first person too, but I'm not sure if that would seem out of place. But for some people, most people actually, you just need third person. If I had to write all of Tephra's weird bitter suddenly passionately in love then back to rage thoughts I'd have a heart attack.
*I have a PM from you I need to go read! biggrin *
She and Kaden? She worked as an assistant for his therapist while she was in school. She would just never go away after that. XD
Poisonwood is written like that, but it confuses me sometimes because I get too into the story and don't check who's narrating the chapter, and then I get all confused. XD But if I wrote for Demiko from first person, I'd feel inclined to write Romni or Terryne or Aran from first person, as well, and then Kaden or Arika, so I'd have someone from every storyline, and that would be even MORE confusing, so no. I'll stick with just Vael and Lyndsey, and then write the other characters from third person. 3nodding
*Yay*