Tell me if this sounds good to you. D: (Personally I think it sounds like crap, but that's just because it's my work and my writing is something I don't have a lot of confidence in anymore after I went on a writing hiatus and now I suck more than before. /rant. XD)
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Tremorous, frosted breaths distilled the immaculate black of the night. It was indeed a gelid night, but only under the guidance of moonlight could Tomoyo escape the village unseen. Inconspicuously as she could, she crossed the village square. The only thing to see her off were the dying embers lying in the pulpit where hours earlier they had flourished as a raging bonfire. With meloncholic eyes, she gave one last glance at her old home. She turned back, blinking away oncoming tears and tread into the forest before someone caught her alone in the dark.