iiHelloKitty_x3
Nineball Yamada
iiHelloKitty_x3
Nineball Yamada
Sure! Go ahead and post it, that way one of us can help you out if you need it. It's always a pain getting a "finished" picture that needs a dozen corrections.
WIP so I know I still need to fix the hair and the hand/finger proportions and sharpen the face shape some more, anything else?
That's a cute picture - and it's not bad aside from the stuff you mentioned, and perhaps fixing Ang's eye - but the pose just doesn't work for them. I dunno if you saw my big personality description a few posts up, but these girls are not romantic like that - they don't like each other, and if they ever did make out or get intimate it'd be a more angry affair with lots of squeezing and harassing. You might be better off starting over - it's your call...
How is this?
By the way, I tried to make it look like Ang is pulling her hair and she is scratching/squeezing her back....
I see where you're trying to go with it but I still think it doesn't look right. The kissing makes it look odd. If you're really trying to salvage this pic, maybe what you could do would be redraw the curve of their faces so they're, like, gritting their teeth at each other and just have their arms down at their sides, or clenched fists or something. It's a bit of a doozy but I think if you play up the comical aspect you might be able to pull it off.
Also, I'm gonna be driving home from work and running a couple errands so I might be on-and-off for an hour or so. But I'll still be around, don't worry!