DEE!
Rage - You forgot a couple things:
1) An annoying blurb somewhere talking about your latest quest, how much gold you have, out of how much gold you need, the item you're questing for and how donations are not expected but you really really want them
2) Another blurb talking about your birthday, when it is, what you want, how you're so OLD despite only turning like 18 or something, how people should give you presents even if they are complete strangers
which leads back into the blurb about what you're questing for
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OH you need a GIANT header with some sort of decorative frame, with avi/OC art and your username as if we can't read it already.
THEN a HUGE space between it and your actual post, which by the way has to be in size 9 font or smaller, anything else is too big and way too easy to read.
Those are very important elements!