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Do you think that this art is good enough to sell? It's prep work for the comic my friend and I are starting. You can read the first 2 pages at my WWW link. C&C is always appreciated.

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The boy on the right...looks...odd... 0.o Like there's something wrong with his neck and head...I dunno how to explain it 0.o
Such lovely soft lines...not to mention the content.

I think you could easilysell your work. The head of the boy on the right is at a bit of an extreme angle, it would be possible, but it is a little awkward looking.
I like the softness, but yeah, redraw the guy on the right, he's very awkward
Thankies all, I will try to improve my pose and body structure ^^.

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really good but like they said fix the guy on the right, mayb adjust the angle of his body and adjust his face a lil too ^^-

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It looks good save for the face of the guy on the right. Since his face is tilted upwards, his eyes would be aligned differently than it is in the pic.
i think what is wrong is the sholder closest to us. it seems to low . try brining it up, very good though
wow! thats great!

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