What's missing? >.>

[xoxbrokenxox]

What's missing apart from shadeing? sweatdrop

[NasuOni]

Her head seems to small, width wise. Like she has no where to put her brain. Um...Other than that, it's a good start.

[Tanyquil]

Yeah. Her head should be a bit more rounded at the back. And the front of her face...this might be personal preference, but it looks a bit squashed in, which might just be her nose. But it's not a bad picture. With some refinement, it could be quite good!

[Sketched]

the head and the nose as stated. but it seems weird to me that there are lips but no mouth/mouth line.
also the anatomy for the neck/shoulders/chest aread seems squashed and small.

[xoxbrokenxox]

Is this any better? I redid the nose/head
And as for the small shoulders and chest..it's hard to explain but it's the angel I was trying to draw her that did that sweatdrop

[Haru1294]

the last pic is definetly better!! biggrin

[xoxbrokenxox]

lizzie1

the last pic is definetly better!! biggrin

Thanks 3nodding

[Tanyquil]

It definetly looks better now! It's nice to see someone who can take constructive criticisms and use them to improve their work. It's a rare commodity indeed.

The back of the head is just right, I think. The nose I'm still a tidge iffy on. But I might just be uber picky at this point. smile

[Miss. Belle]

Cool, maybe you could add a bit more Hair lines?

[Kilarra]

The second pic is a lot better but I think the face is too much of a straight line. Grabbed the first pic I could of google but if you look here you can see that the forehead is further back than the mouth/nose section. If you prefer a more anime-oriented reference, look here - in anime, the forwardness of the lower half of the face is more pronounced.

I think if you lengthen the nose and extend the bottom half of the face, it will improve tenfold ^^ That said, it's a nice design already. I love elongated ears X3 *nibble*

[pieisgood]

the good part is missing

[xoxbrokenxox]

pieisgood

the good part is missing

Aren't you constructive?

[supermanskivies]

theres something wrong with the hairline and the lips could be more defined, the eye placement has something just a little bit off [if your going for a more realistic style] the chin might be a tinsey bit pointy and her torso seems smaller than it should be, but i think it rocks and that you should defenatly shade and color however you may... heart

[xoxbrokenxox]

supermanskivies

theres something wrong with the hairline and the lips could be more defined, the eye placement has something just a little bit off [if your going for a more realistic style] the chin might be a tinsey bit pointy and her torso seems smaller than it should be, but i think it rocks and that you should defenatly shade and color however you may... heart

I thought to too..I'm going to redo the hair a little and give her more bangs I might just cut out the chest/shoulder because its fiving me problems stare