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Nice start. The shadows are consistent. The pose is nice. I would get rid of the under arm line on her left arm. I dont think it's needed. And maybe pull in her waist a little bit because it looks like she's wearing a corset. And give her an eyebrow smile

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Dapper Noob

If this was my drawing, I'd make her a bit thinner. But I do like this drawing, good colouring in her hair, the light sources are shown very well, nice work. One thing you missed was to give her eye-brows.

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It's really nice but personally I wouln't have made the cleavage come up so high

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Shiroi Torikago
If this was my drawing, I'd make her a bit thinner. But I do like this drawing, good colouring in her hair, the light sources are shown very well, nice work. One thing you missed was to give her eye-brows.
The character actually doesn't have eyebrows at all. sweatdrop

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Shiroi Torikago
If this was my drawing, I'd make her a bit thinner. But I do like this drawing, good colouring in her hair, the light sources are shown very well, nice work. One thing you missed was to give her eye-brows.
The character actually doesn't have eyebrows at all. sweatdrop

Then disregard my comments.

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