Traditional Art critiques

[Mama Sheep]

I was hoping I could get some feedback on this.
It only took me a few minutes to draw but I wanted to know
what could be improved.
Digital art is out of the question atm so this I'm only asking for
help with traditional art

[Log_Me_Off]

If you're going for anatomical correctness then I would suggest using a reference picture to get a better idea of the flow of the body.

Other than that, it looks alright.

[glithch]

PixelChunks

I was hoping I could get some feedback on this.
It only took me a few minutes to draw but I wanted to know
what could be improved.
Digital art is out of the question atm so this I'm only asking for
help with traditional art

dude ypu coud have had at least flipped it for us. i feel like you need the regural dose of anatomy training. check out the pizelovely site. and you def need to train drawing clothing folds because that skirt is just bad. drawing from real life would be the best. maybe photos. not other artwork. other than that theres not much to say it really is a quick sketch

[I Like Cakez]

As the last two people have said, anatomy.

Her head looks squished and the rest of her body isn't lined up with her head.
When you draw, do you add the clothes on while you are drawing her body or after you draw the rest of the body?

Also, would you like me to red line your drawing to help you show what I mean by a squished head and unaligned body?