Tips? ;;0;;

[Kyarine]

ok so i really need some tips for this piece.
cause i really want to improve, and i can't find anything wrong with it? at least not yet, anyway.
welp
thanks anyway
props to you if you know who it is
sorry if its a WIP but like, i don't really want to start coloring and then realize a mistake :0
lol

[Puddington]

boop
c:

[Kyarine]

Dream Reverie

boop
c:

wow your avatar looks lovely
but hi there

[Puddington]

Kyarine

Dream Reverie

boop
c:

wow your avatar looks lovely
but hi there

Lol hello there friend. Anyway i would like to say, if i may, his waist is a bit thin for a male. Unless he's turned to the side a bit idk. But yea i think it's great other than that. emotion_kirakira

[Static Sludge]

his left fore arm is a tad too short, or at least amp up the perspective on it if you keep the length, thatd probably look more realistic. and his hips seem a bit big( or his waist is too small) unless you want him curvy

idk that ones up to you though XD

nice though, I really like it, if I wasn't looking for flaws I probably wouldn't have noticed ;D

[Ojibun]

Kyarine

ok so i really need some tips for this piece.
cause i really want to improve, and i can't find anything wrong with it? at least not yet, anyway.
welp
thanks anyway
props to you if you know who it is
sorry if its a WIP but like, i don't really want to start coloring and then realize a mistake :0
lol

Omfg, i totally love it, though a wip, its looking good O:

[monsers_inc]

Don't hug his shirt too close to his body, most guys prefers loose t-shirts, especially with the sort of look this guy seems to have

[shutup_jackie]

The forearm is a bit short, as mentioned.
Also, it would be pretty difficult to hold a box like that, to be honest. Is it supposed to be a gift that he's hiding? If it is, you might want to get someone you know to hold a box like they're going to surprise you with it, that way you can get a good look at how their arm should be positioned.
Either way, you might want to play around with that.

Can't wait to see the colored product! c: