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Post: 2919186_1 created on Tue, 06 Jul 2004 00:47:58 +0000
Posted: Tue, 06 Jul 2004 00:47:58 +0000

Yea... Um... not that good... but please no flaming... sweatdrop

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Post: 2919186_2 created on Tue, 06 Jul 2004 00:50:19 +0000
Posted: Tue, 06 Jul 2004 00:50:19 +0000

I've never like the corner of the eye coming out of the hair style. Also the cloud looks like a rock... Other than that I really like the pic. "peek-a-boo!"

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Post: 2919186_3 created on Tue, 06 Jul 2004 00:52:05 +0000
Posted: Tue, 06 Jul 2004 00:52:05 +0000

Weasel29

I've never like the corner of the eye coming out of the hair style. Also the cloud looks like a rock... Other than that I really like the pic. "peek-a-boo!"

Yea... I messed up with the cloud... but thanks!

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Post: 2919186_4 created on Tue, 06 Jul 2004 00:53:13 +0000
Posted: Tue, 06 Jul 2004 00:53:13 +0000

Besides the kiddish effects its great.

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Post: 2919186_5 created on Tue, 06 Jul 2004 00:54:08 +0000
Posted: Tue, 06 Jul 2004 00:54:08 +0000

I mostly like it. But it could use some shading and a fix of the hand. It seems a little flat-ish and indefined.

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Post: 2919186_6 created on Tue, 06 Jul 2004 00:54:24 +0000
Posted: Tue, 06 Jul 2004 00:54:24 +0000

DemonAngel

Besides the kiddish effects its great.

Kiddish? I would have done more detail but I only had an hour... lol

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Post: 2919186_7 created on Tue, 06 Jul 2004 00:56:13 +0000
Posted: Tue, 06 Jul 2004 00:56:13 +0000

Devornine

DemonAngel

Besides the kiddish effects its great.

Kiddish? I would have done more detail but I only had an hour... lol

ya some of the things look like a jkid drew them but its good anyways.
Dont ever ruh becuase of time unless its some sort of contest and you'll be late.

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Post: 2919186_8 created on Tue, 06 Jul 2004 00:56:20 +0000
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Vincent Alik Trunemor

I mostly like it. But it could use some shading and a fix of the hand. It seems a little flat-ish and indefined.

Most of the shading got eaten away when I scanned it... damn scanner... crap... Oh well... yea... I suck at hands that is the best you are gonna get.

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Post: 2919186_9 created on Tue, 06 Jul 2004 00:57:25 +0000
Posted: Tue, 06 Jul 2004 00:57:25 +0000

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Besides the kiddish effects its great.

Kiddish? I would have done more detail but I only had an hour... lol

ya some of the things look like a jkid drew them but its good anyways.
Dont ever ruh becuase of time unless its some sort of contest and you'll be late.

It was for a class... so I really had to rush sweatdrop

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Post: 2919186_10 created on Tue, 06 Jul 2004 01:01:28 +0000
Posted: Tue, 06 Jul 2004 01:01:28 +0000

fear the floating rock!

i like it ~ the eye is nice and sort of works as a focal point... colour it in?

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Post: 2919186_11 created on Tue, 06 Jul 2004 01:09:13 +0000
Posted: Tue, 06 Jul 2004 01:09:13 +0000

he hood seems a little poofed. Gravity should be pulling it down more.

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Post: 2919186_12 created on Tue, 06 Jul 2004 01:10:11 +0000
Posted: Tue, 06 Jul 2004 01:10:11 +0000

it's a nice pic, especially the feathers xD feathers r kewl 3nodding

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Post: 2919186_13 created on Tue, 06 Jul 2004 01:23:02 +0000
Posted: Tue, 06 Jul 2004 01:23:02 +0000

^^ The hand needs a little fixing and the cloak and dress? Folds need to be redone. The hood looks a little strange and the cloud is also funky, but! I like it and it's nicely done. Good job 3nodding

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Post: 2919186_14 created on Tue, 06 Jul 2004 01:24:35 +0000
Posted: Tue, 06 Jul 2004 01:24:35 +0000

i like it but i think you need to work on folds in the clothing and the mask...

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Post: 2919186_15 created on Tue, 06 Jul 2004 02:33:32 +0000
Posted: Tue, 06 Jul 2004 02:33:32 +0000

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