Please tell me what you think!

[Payne West]

What do you guys think of these?
I know the resolution is poor, i had to scan these and it didn't go so well, that's life for yah!

[XMegantronX]

the first one looks very cool. just the legs need to be longer and better developed like the middle and the wings, i feel, should have more detail.

the second one lacks over-all detail and has some anatomy issues (right arm too short, feet, etc)

just keep sketching daily and these issues will resolve

[StkNavi]

About 10 years ago my art looked like that. In high school I had these doodles of my OCs which were pretty simple and have about the same proportions, if you look at this

http://shadowednavi.deviantart.com/art/Character-Development-Meme-169019338

you'll see the fingers are just... well jagged lines. But you keep working, keep at it and you'll do fine.

I say, it's great work for early art. Many people who are further down the road will look down and try to discourage you, but time and practice work wonders. I love your skeleton image and the character looks just about fine for an early skill level. I wont lie and say it looks fantastic and wonderful. But it shows potential, and potential is the most important thing.

You have a good grasp on body shape and proportion. In time the edges will be smoothed and you'll be the one encouraging someone at their early stages.

[Payne West]

XMegantronX

the first one looks very cool. just the legs need to be longer and better developed like the middle and the wings, i feel, should have more detail.

the second one lacks over-all detail and has some anatomy issues (right arm too short, feet, etc)

just keep sketching daily and these issues will resolve

Ok, thanks I'll work on that.

[Payne West]

StkNavi

About 10 years ago my art looked like that. In high school I had these doodles of my OCs which were pretty simple and have about the same proportions, if you look at this

http://shadowednavi.deviantart.com/art/Character-Development-Meme-169019338

you'll see the fingers are just... well jagged lines. But you keep working, keep at it and you'll do fine.

I say, it's great work for early art. Many people who are further down the road will look down and try to discourage you, but time and practice work wonders. I love your skeleton image and the character looks just about fine for an early skill level. I wont lie and say it looks fantastic and wonderful. But it shows potential, and potential is the most important thing.

You have a good grasp on body shape and proportion. In time the edges will be smoothed and you'll be the one encouraging someone at their early stages.

Thanks.

[Ghaliont]

The skeleton just gave me inspiration so thankyou biggrin (awesome idea btw)
and the anime girl you sketched looks incredible also!
keep posting biggrin

[XxFoncexX]

I love your skeleton idea. Very interesting and has great detail. Your second drawing has a good bit of potential as well. You need a bit more work, but you will master it in non time ^^ Keep up the great work!

[Alluring Aroma]

I love the design of the first drawing. It screams with uniqueness. biggrin

[Payne West]

Ghaliont

The skeleton just gave me inspiration so thankyou biggrin (awesome idea btw)
and the anime girl you sketched looks incredible also!
keep posting biggrin

Wow, thank you, your welcome and i will keep posting biggrin

[Payne West]

XxFoncexX

I love your skeleton idea. Very interesting and has great detail. Your second drawing has a good bit of potential as well. You need a bit more work, but you will master it in non time ^^ Keep up the great work!

Thank you very much, I promise to work hard! biggrin

[Payne West]

Alluring Aroma

I love the design of the first drawing. It screams with uniqueness. biggrin

Thank you! biggrin

[XxFoncexX]

Payne West

XxFoncexX

I love your skeleton idea. Very interesting and has great detail. Your second drawing has a good bit of potential as well. You need a bit more work, but you will master it in non time ^^ Keep up the great work!

Thank you very much, I promise to work hard! biggrin

Du rein! C'est bon ^^ I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future!