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I like the part where he argues with the landlord. I was never certain about how he would lose his job either.
The scarecrow was so he could spy and figure out where the tower was and learn how to sneak in during the day. To observe and spy on the people. Corn is actually really hard to see through. A tower might be hard to miss, but it's not supposed to be as close as it was/it was ridiculous and supposed to be comical. You can walk after being stabbed. Self defense classes teach you this. He fell after blood lost. Not because of the pain. The blood was asorbed by the hay at first and believe it or not, bleeding is nothing like in the movies. It's a lot slower and a lot less gushy. Blood is also really hard to express in black and white.
You don't see any corn around the tower- indicating that it's a good ways off.
The stupid tower font comes from "working with what you've got." It was the only thing with the most "grungey, angry, yelling" effect photobucket had. (Before it upgraded). Fonts are very expressive, but free sites keep them limited.
Honestly, the chastity belt was the only part where I felt like I was writing. I like writing comedy. I love to make people laugh. I started off with the wrong tone and finally found where I could make it mellow. I plan on making it more of a comedy later.
You did point out a few things I need to look back on and I say thank you for that.
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I also forgot to mention that the stabbing plays an important role in expressing the Prince's personality! So, non it was not just for the sake of the scarecrow..
I did notice he was about to cauterize the wound. A little candle might not to the trick for such a big knife. A small fireplace maybe?
But we still don't see any blood whatsoever. Even when we see just a close up of his wound. I'm not saying it needs to gush, I'm saying it needs to exist.
The panels where he is crawling out of the corn are right next to the when we first see the tower. So, even if there is no corn in the picture with the tower, there is no time between him coming out of the corn and coming up on the tower.
Space is time. Give that big tower it's own page.
The font might work better if you draw it yourself. Use a ruler to stencil out the letters and work around them. Or use the bubble.
Most of these things you had to explain to me, I should be able to mostly understand just from reading it. His purpose in dressing up as a scarecrow to figure out how to get to the prince. His collapsing from blood loss rather than not being able to walk. The distance of the corn field to the tower.
More spaced paneling can help with some. Longer scenes may help with others.