Please critique my art. <3 I'll return the favor

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[xXMizuki-ArsenusXx]

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Hello, my name is Mizuki Arsenus.
Some of this art will be traditional style art, some will be avatar art. <3

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There are eight examples.
Please tell me what you think. <3

[xXMizuki-ArsenusXx]

b u m p

[xXMizuki-ArsenusXx]

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[xXMizuki-ArsenusXx]

b u m p i t y b u m p ; ;

[Leloush77]

Your art looks very good biggrin

[xXMizuki-ArsenusXx]

b u m p <3

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b u m p b u m p b u m p

[SailorVera]

I appreciate that you're trying lots of different poses, but everything looks very stiff and lifeless.
you would benefit heavily from doing quick gesture drawings. It would help pump life into your lines as well as boost up your anatomy, as it's hurting overall.

[xXMizuki-ArsenusXx]

SailorVera

I appreciate that you're trying lots of different poses, but everything looks very stiff and lifeless.
you would benefit heavily from doing quick gesture drawings. It would help pump life into your lines as well as boost up your anatomy, as it's hurting overall.

Quick gesture? Sorry. I am lame I know.

[SailorVera]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xmiwGm32dXU

[Lady Vizsla]

I like it very much especially the sacrifice one. Looks like you could make a manga or anime out of those characters. Good job! Here's mine.