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What to do on a stormy day? Go outside and take pictures, of course!
I'm not that great at photography. Sorry.
No negativity please! Thanks.

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Softball

Bamboo Flower

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Softball II
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Want me to watermark the 1st, 2nd, 3rd, and 5th?
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1) you're focus isn't all that great here, it's focused on the stem when it should have been on the flower petals. Also the colour is fairly washed out, which i don't understand, unless you have over exposed the image.

2) i like this one, nicely composted and vivid.

3) Not very keen on the framing of this one. The either none of the object should have been cropped off at the bottom, or there should of been a clean crop right across the image so there was no table beneath the object on show in the image.

4) The left hand side is too heavily over exposed. If the focus of this image was supposed to be the boots then it's not worked because the white is washing them out. Also they are not in focus, the viewers eye is drawn towards the building and the grass beside the boots.

5) the whited out background kind of works here, although the focus of the image (the ball) isn't in focus, which is not what you want. Also the image looks washed out again.
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1) you're focus isn't all that great here, it's focused on the stem when it should have been on the flower petals. Also the colour is fairly washed out, which i don't understand, unless you have over exposed the image.

2) i like this one, nicely composted and vivid.

3) Not very keen on the framing of this one. The either none of the object should have been cropped off at the bottom, or there should of been a clean crop right across the image so there was no table beneath the object on show in the image.

4) The left hand side is too heavily over exposed. If the focus of this image was supposed to be the boots then it's not worked because the white is washing them out. Also they are not in focus, the viewers eye is drawn towards the building and the grass beside the boots.

5) the whited out background kind of works here, although the focus of the image (the ball) isn't in focus, which is not what you want. Also the image looks washed out again.


Thank you. I'm only 13 so i'm an amateur photographer I guess. xD Any tips? I really want to improve.
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I agree with Morbid-Manda.
Do keep trying, though. You can get better(:
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I agree with Morbid-Manda.
Do keep trying, though. You can get better(:


Thank you. I really appreciate it(:
Liking the second one, do you have a dslr?
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Liking the second one, do you have a dslr?


I don't think so... I really don't know actually. Sorry.

Lol it's ok p:
A dslr are like these kind of cameras with interchangeable lens
This
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Liking the second one, do you have a dslr?


I do(:
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Liking the second one, do you have a dslr?


I do(:

Sometimes using the rule of thirds makes a picture more interesting p:
I can't explain it well but these people do
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Then i am a dumb a**
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Morbid-Manda
1) you're focus isn't all that great here, it's focused on the stem when it should have been on the flower petals. Also the colour is fairly washed out, which i don't understand, unless you have over exposed the image.

2) i like this one, nicely composted and vivid.

3) Not very keen on the framing of this one. The either none of the object should have been cropped off at the bottom, or there should of been a clean crop right across the image so there was no table beneath the object on show in the image.

4) The left hand side is too heavily over exposed. If the focus of this image was supposed to be the boots then it's not worked because the white is washing them out. Also they are not in focus, the viewers eye is drawn towards the building and the grass beside the boots.

5) the whited out background kind of works here, although the focus of the image (the ball) isn't in focus, which is not what you want. Also the image looks washed out again.


I agree with you on this one .-.
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The second one is the best ofall of them. It looks great.

I'm not a photographer so I got no tips for you.
But keep working and all of your pictures can get up to that standard.
(Or if not all than many, everybody has off-days.)
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Liking the second one, do you have a dslr?


I do(:

Sometimes using the rule of thirds makes a picture more interesting p:
I can't explain it well but these people do
Bam
Looks like this:
Yeah
And if you already knew about it
Then i am a dumb a**
emotion_donotwant


Thank you!(:
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The second one is the best ofall of them. It looks great.

I'm not a photographer so I got no tips for you.
But keep working and all of your pictures can get up to that standard.
(Or if not all than many, everybody has off-days.)


Thank you. I appreciate that(:

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