New Tie, Flame, Listen~

[ThePossessedPuppet]

Puppet's Art Page
Hello All!

I got a few more things for you to look at!
Listen
I dont know what to think about this. It is a good idea, but I dont think I executed it well.

Flame
It was going to be a larger picture, but I gave up and just uploaded this little part of it.

New Tie
I think i'll be working on this later for a different school project.

Thoughts? Critiques?
Anything?

[RIP Nervy Pinja]

I really like your figures lol
I'm serious, esp. w/ the colors you used, I remember like this mural that I used to pass by every day from school
so it has that nostalgic feel for me.

Marksmaking? Crap.
Your figures work really well, I'm loving that there is humour and movement, but the stippling for tie is :barf:
Experiment more with mark making, don't confine yourself to hatch/crosshatch/stipple/scumble

Flame is good

Love the pose on listen, hate the caligraphic work/the gray backkground.

[ThePossessedPuppet]

Nervy Pinja

I really like your figures lol
I'm serious, esp. w/ the colors you used, I remember like this mural that I used to pass by every day from school
so it has that nostalgic feel for me.

Marksmaking? Crap.
Your figures work really well, I'm loving that there is humour and movement, but the stippling for tie is :barf:
Experiment more with mark making, don't confine yourself to hatch/crosshatch/stipple/scumble

Flame is good

Love the pose on listen, hate the caligraphic work/the gray backkground.

I really wasnt quite sure what to do with the background of Listen
D:

I agree, i'll keep working on stippling and crosshaching!
Thanks for your critiques!

[RIP Nervy Pinja]

ThePossessedPuppet

Nervy Pinja

I really like your figures lol
I'm serious, esp. w/ the colors you used, I remember like this mural that I used to pass by every day from school
so it has that nostalgic feel for me.

Marksmaking? Crap.
Your figures work really well, I'm loving that there is humour and movement, but the stippling for tie is :barf:
Experiment more with mark making, don't confine yourself to hatch/crosshatch/stipple/scumble

Flame is good

Love the pose on listen, hate the caligraphic work/the gray backkground.

I really wasnt quite sure what to do with the background of Listen
D:

I agree, i'll keep working on stippling and crosshaching!
Thanks for your critiques!

fixed
no matter what you do
stippling will always look like a 7th grade art project.