New style but a lot of thing to learn...==THEHORNYSAVIOUR==

[Iceketch]

This is the first draw with this tec. Is a CG for my manga Horny Saviuor!|
Comments and suggestion are really helpful!!!!!

[Kami Neko]

Firstly: it looks really cool, great job!

Only thing that caught my eye was the shading on the guy with the backpack...it seems a little off to me, only because I can't tell where the light source would be. There are unexplainable highlights (such as in his hair) and shadows (most notably the backpack) I'd say, try to keep the shading consistant with a light source. Or maybe it's just me, who knows @_@ sweatdrop

[Iceketch]

Your not wrong, I use too much light sources, and the rest of the pic haven't this detail work, Damn I think is better to try another time...I spend something like 6 hours on it....

[Inked]

Eh its not too detailed. Keep trying.

[a y a 2 o 2 1]

It looks really cool I like it. But it's just something about the guys hair that seems to bother me. But none the less, i still feel envious of those who cg so well... Y.Y

[Akane_Sasakawa]

I think that's really good despite most of the comments you got. Love the coloring 3nodding

[Ookamimaru]

The coloring of the hair needs one darker shade of blue to keep constistant( is that spelled right?) with the shadowing of the rest of the boy. I reccomend going over the hair in a transparent black, but I'm not sure how that would turn out because I use photostudio and not photo shop.
Also, the platform on which he stands could be more developed...