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i REALLY like this...it's disturbingly awesome!

the only thing i would change is the curls. they're kinda all over the place. i'd like to see lines and light source like that of the bangs ^^

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i REALLY like this...it's disturbingly awesome!

the only thing i would change is the curls. they're kinda all over the place. i'd like to see lines and light source like that of the bangs ^^


Thanks, I really appreciate that. I wasn't getting much love on dA, so I came on here. Yea, curls/hair on real people have never really been my thing...

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i REALLY like this...it's disturbingly awesome!

the only thing i would change is the curls. they're kinda all over the place. i'd like to see lines and light source like that of the bangs ^^


Thanks, I really appreciate that. I wasn't getting much love on dA, so I came on here. Yea, curls/hair on real people have never really been my thing...


it's hard to even get noticed on DA. i'm practically invisible there. :/

anyways, looks like she has messy waves and curls...yikes. hard. um, it may help to clump some of them together in ribbons and then highlight them as such with small strands...if that makes sense. hair is a tricky thing.

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i REALLY like this...it's disturbingly awesome!

the only thing i would change is the curls. they're kinda all over the place. i'd like to see lines and light source like that of the bangs ^^


Thanks, I really appreciate that. I wasn't getting much love on dA, so I came on here. Yea, curls/hair on real people have never really been my thing...


it's hard to even get noticed on DA. i'm practically invisible there. :/

anyways, looks like she has messy waves and curls...yikes. hard. um, it may help to clump some of them together in ribbons and then highlight them as such with small strands...if that makes sense. hair is a tricky thing.

"He"... *Cough Cough* Yea, I'm on my way to 2,000 view hehe... I'll take your advice

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i REALLY like this...it's disturbingly awesome!

the only thing i would change is the curls. they're kinda all over the place. i'd like to see lines and light source like that of the bangs ^^


Thanks, I really appreciate that. I wasn't getting much love on dA, so I came on here. Yea, curls/hair on real people have never really been my thing...


it's hard to even get noticed on DA. i'm practically invisible there. :/

anyways, looks like she has messy waves and curls...yikes. hard. um, it may help to clump some of them together in ribbons and then highlight them as such with small strands...if that makes sense. hair is a tricky thing.

"He"... *Cough Cough* Yea, I'm on my way to 2,000 view hehe... I'll take your advice
I have 6,254 views with 97 watchers...but I've been there for 4 years....

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I think you should either make the hands larger or the face smaller.
Also, it would be to your benefit to finish the curls like you did with the bangs. Since you put time into making the bangs look nice but left the curls as squiggly lines, it makes the picture seem rushed.

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I think you should either make the hands larger or the face smaller.
Also, it would be to your benefit to finish the curls like you did with the bangs. Since you put time into making the bangs look nice but left the curls as squiggly lines, it makes the picture seem rushed.

Yea, my proportions aren't all that good... How did you know? Let me tell you this, that's just how I end most drawings... I get impatient and just scribble it... I need to work on that.

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i REALLY like this...it's disturbingly awesome!

the only thing i would change is the curls. they're kinda all over the place. i'd like to see lines and light source like that of the bangs ^^


Thanks, I really appreciate that. I wasn't getting much love on dA, so I came on here. Yea, curls/hair on real people have never really been my thing...


it's hard to even get noticed on DA. i'm practically invisible there. :/

anyways, looks like she has messy waves and curls...yikes. hard. um, it may help to clump some of them together in ribbons and then highlight them as such with small strands...if that makes sense. hair is a tricky thing.

"He"... *Cough Cough* Yea, I'm on my way to 2,000 view hehe... I'll take your advice
I have 6,254 views with 97 watchers...but I've been there for 4 years....

Well you've been on quite a while. I have 1,805 views and 45 watchers, I've been there for 2 years.

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i REALLY like this...it's disturbingly awesome!

the only thing i would change is the curls. they're kinda all over the place. i'd like to see lines and light source like that of the bangs ^^


Thanks, I really appreciate that. I wasn't getting much love on dA, so I came on here. Yea, curls/hair on real people have never really been my thing...


it's hard to even get noticed on DA. i'm practically invisible there. :/

anyways, looks like she has messy waves and curls...yikes. hard. um, it may help to clump some of them together in ribbons and then highlight them as such with small strands...if that makes sense. hair is a tricky thing.

"He"... *Cough Cough* Yea, I'm on my way to 2,000 view hehe... I'll take your advice
I have 6,254 views with 97 watchers...but I've been there for 4 years....

Well you've been on quite a while. I have 1,805 views and 45 watchers, I've been there for 2 years.


yeaaaah....well hopefully we can get noticed more. we deserve it!

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it's hard to even get noticed on DA. i'm practically invisible there. :/

anyways, looks like she has messy waves and curls...yikes. hard. um, it may help to clump some of them together in ribbons and then highlight them as such with small strands...if that makes sense. hair is a tricky thing.

"He"... *Cough Cough* Yea, I'm on my way to 2,000 view hehe... I'll take your advice
I have 6,254 views with 97 watchers...but I've been there for 4 years....

Well you've been on quite a while. I have 1,805 views and 45 watchers, I've been there for 2 years.


yeaaaah....well hopefully we can get noticed more. we deserve it!

Yea *High Five* Hopefully one day.

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One word: beautiful!

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One word: beautiful!

Thank-you very much, I truly appreciate that.
Personally, I'd lose that one strand of hair in the bangs that goes against the grain. I don't know if it's significant to the character/idea expressed in this, but it is mildly distracting.

Other than that, I love the eyes and the contrast. I don't know what else I can say about the piece that hasn't already been pointed out.

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One word: beautiful!

Thank-you very much, I truly appreciate that.


No problem, sweetheart. I'm a hude fan of The Devil's Carnival and it just reminded me of it. It's a fantasitc film and I can imagine it being used as a poster advert for it.

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