In the name of the moon I shall punish you!c/c

[buggsie blue]

Some things I am aware of: Yaoi hands, dieing blue markers, most likely poor composition, eyes too far apart. Used alcohol based markers: Prismacolor, Shinhan, Pantone Tria, Letraset Tria, Promarker. On regular copy paper, sorry, ran out of marker paper!
Any comments or critique welcomed. Thanks!

[lipinski]

Well you pretty much nailed your mistakes so you need to focus on correcting them

[buggsie blue]

Bumpeth