I HEART colours. I do.

[thatpinktee]

Hello!

This is the 2nd page of my doujin.



For some reason, the resolution came out crappy when I uploaded it. Here is the original one.

I am a very harsh critic towards myself, and I am always looking to improve everything. Although the background took a while to colour, I really enjoyed the process. Learned a thing or two about the right texture and light&shadows.

I welcome any constructive criticism surprised Anything that would help me improve even more <3

[Thomatorr Strongpee]

I think you did a great job. 3nodding

[thatpinktee]

Thomatorr Strongpee

I think you did a great job. 3nodding

Thanks biggrin
Anything I could improve on?

[paradoxdish]

I love colours too! biggrin

[ForLaughter]

That is an amazing coloring job. You have got it going on.

[thatpinktee]

ForLaughter

That is an amazing coloring job. You have got it going on.

Thank you smile Always looking to do better!

[V i r]

the perspective in the first panel is good! i'd suggest trying to vary your line weights a bit, that can add more depth and make the lineart pop!

[MonsterPeri]

Your backgrounds look great!

[ForLaughter]

thatpinktee

ForLaughter

That is an amazing coloring job. You have got it going on.

Thank you smile Always looking to do better!

Well, I don't know that you could improve upon the coloring job. As a little bit of constructive criticism, maybe work on the face a little bit? It looks a tad stiff to me.

[xXGateXx]

It looks beautiful, like appetizing candy OUO

[Static Sludge]

very nice job coloring, its very pleasing to the eye. my only beef with it has nothing to do with the coloring, I just think you could give more depth to your person and lines.

[thatpinktee]

Thanks for all the great feedback smile heart

Stiffness of the face and line weight. Duly noted.

[AluraLaVeer]

I loooovveeee the trees in the first panel! Awesome job on those!

[Findingfireflies]

Oh my. The colors in the are so gorgeous... I love your style. I have to say, I'm quite jealous of your gorgeous talent. 3nodding

[thatpinktee]

AluraLaVeer

I loooovveeee the trees in the first panel! Awesome job on those!

Thank youuuu! I had to experiment with loads of brushes to find out what worked, but it was totally worth it smile Rocks were the hardest :c Still not perfect but decent enough!