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Tipsy Phantom

omg a butt (ish)

These are super cute shhhhh omg.

The only thing is that the police one, if her leg were to straighten out, it would be so much longer than the one that's straight.

otHER THAN THAT
wicked cute and I love your coloring.
The character to the left, I'm a bit weirded out by the thin strip of shadow on her right (our left) hip and leg, and inner arm.
Also, there's some weird white cutout at her neck and across the stick item she's holding -- I'm guessing she's got a sorta glass bubble to her space suit. Instead of white (since your background there is white), maybe try a light blue outline instead or so.

Other than that, they are pretty super adorable, very clean!

Feral Phantom

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very nice work, i love how clean your art is and how much it pops ;D my only suggestions have already been pointed out, the character on the left her shine on her skirt doesn't contour with the crease you gave

and the one on the right her left leg is too long, but even those, that's cause we're looking for things to critique!

Hygienic Shopper

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Something is off with the character on the right, bit I can't really pinpoint what it is exactly. I really love the characters, they are so adorbs,

Not bad at all wink

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