Oh OK! Yeah, right now she doesn't look too surprised. When it comes to facial expressions, one artist I almost always refer to is Glen Keane! Some of his
Tangled work is something I always immediately go to. He makes it look easy, very simple and easy to read rightaway!
Rendered painting is looking pretty good so far. But yeah, we should see some of her feet still, popping out right below her other leg's kneecap probably; it's not really apparent in the line art it's being obscured by his leg.
Minor thing, but maybe I'd suggest taking out the nail polish from the thumb only. It looked short before because there was no real compression in the bed where her thumb was, but you put a line in the painting now to really clarify that. Taking the polish out just makes the compression into the bed a lil' deeper, I think that'd look a lil' better personally.
Keep it going!
