help wanted

[Rize-chan]

hi i need help with this girls face
somethings just off about it IDK she just doesnt seem natural and i cant put my finger on it

heres my reference for the facial structure

[Spicy Cal]

So, I think it might be the distance of the eyes in my opinion. I've watched a video before where someone explained to me that a good way to make sure your eyes are the correct distance apart is to draw a third eye in the middle and see if they're close enough. Here's what I drew up to see if it might be the case




I tried to also place the eye in that spot to see how that would look




I'm not sure if this was of any help but I hope it is what you were looking for :0 your art is really fantastic so I'm happy if I did help in any way

[Rize-chan]

Calen Arkadys

thank you!!
i edited it a little bit and she looks better now @3@

[Spicy Cal]

That's great! I'm glad I could help (-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥