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- Posted: Tue, 03 Aug 2004 07:09:59 +0000
I posted this a while ago, but only the original version (left picture), and I finally made some changes to it (right picture). Sorry about the size.
She is not a character from Gaia!!! The people of Gaia are not the creators of wings on the head and black demon tails!
<img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v340/vu-ja-de/wings.jpg">
Some of the changes are kind of obvious, but for those that can't tell:
1. Added folds into the clothing
2. Fixed the wings on her head
3. Completed her left arm (your right)
4. Changed the pendant on the necklace
5. Altered her hips a little
6. Made her crotch look like she had less of a bulge
7. Gave the ruffles more detail
8. Gave her a ring and fixed the space between her pinky and ring-finger (I still need to fix that middle finger though) stare
Then, there are the obvious things that I added, like the tail and the girl on the tail. I know the little girl has kind of a lengthy torso and neck....but hey, we're not all perfect.....look at Paris Hilton for example. xd
As for C&C, it's appreciated, but I don't want to be told anything about shadowing and highlights, this is just the sketch........the white lines in the outfit are not the complete version, they're just there to show that she's going to be wearing a pin-striped outfit and I will fix that and make it look better when I get to inking. I know the hips are still fairly large, I have them that way on purpose. I'm tired of seeing these little petite girls that have pvc piping for legs..... xp
That should be pretty much it....oh, I'll also accept ideas as to what to do with the background. (I always have trouble with backgrounds) whee
And I'm being serious, if you don't have anything helpful or nice to say, then please don't say anything at all.
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Then, there is this girl. My sister was playing American McGee's: Alice, recently, while I was working on this picture...I got stuck and decided to make the girl into my own rendering of Alice......it's very far from done. Also, I know it's not very original, but I really got stuck with what I was originally trying to do with it. I won't say what the original concept was though, because I might still try to do it in the future......I don't need people stealing my ideas...... sweatdrop
I have many, many, more other things that I plan on adding to this.....I just like it so much that I want to show it off. I know the perspective on her legs is kind of......weird....but I'll fix that soon.
I think I'm going to try using the good old traditional style of coloring on these pictures instead of CGing. biggrin
Anyway, here's the Alice picture:
<img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v340/vu-ja-de/alice.jpg">
She is not a character from Gaia!!! The people of Gaia are not the creators of wings on the head and black demon tails!
<img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v340/vu-ja-de/wings.jpg">
Some of the changes are kind of obvious, but for those that can't tell:
1. Added folds into the clothing
2. Fixed the wings on her head
3. Completed her left arm (your right)
4. Changed the pendant on the necklace
5. Altered her hips a little
6. Made her crotch look like she had less of a bulge
7. Gave the ruffles more detail
8. Gave her a ring and fixed the space between her pinky and ring-finger (I still need to fix that middle finger though) stare
Then, there are the obvious things that I added, like the tail and the girl on the tail. I know the little girl has kind of a lengthy torso and neck....but hey, we're not all perfect.....look at Paris Hilton for example. xd
As for C&C, it's appreciated, but I don't want to be told anything about shadowing and highlights, this is just the sketch........the white lines in the outfit are not the complete version, they're just there to show that she's going to be wearing a pin-striped outfit and I will fix that and make it look better when I get to inking. I know the hips are still fairly large, I have them that way on purpose. I'm tired of seeing these little petite girls that have pvc piping for legs..... xp
That should be pretty much it....oh, I'll also accept ideas as to what to do with the background. (I always have trouble with backgrounds) whee
And I'm being serious, if you don't have anything helpful or nice to say, then please don't say anything at all.
::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
Then, there is this girl. My sister was playing American McGee's: Alice, recently, while I was working on this picture...I got stuck and decided to make the girl into my own rendering of Alice......it's very far from done. Also, I know it's not very original, but I really got stuck with what I was originally trying to do with it. I won't say what the original concept was though, because I might still try to do it in the future......I don't need people stealing my ideas...... sweatdrop
I have many, many, more other things that I plan on adding to this.....I just like it so much that I want to show it off. I know the perspective on her legs is kind of......weird....but I'll fix that soon.
I think I'm going to try using the good old traditional style of coloring on these pictures instead of CGing. biggrin
Anyway, here's the Alice picture:
<img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v340/vu-ja-de/alice.jpg">
