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This is a WIP, only the eyes and nose are done. But is something off about the anatomy or something? Red lines or commentary would be appreciated!
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This is nice, especially the eyes, but I know you want a critique. There will also be a redline link for you at the end. smile Also, I am sorry if this comes off as categorical and dry. I am typing as I redline. smile
When you are doing digital always flip your canvas horizontally. When I flipped the image, there were obviously some errors in the position of the character’s body. She comes off being rather stiff, especially in the torso area. Never start detail in one area, you’ll end up burning yourself out, and generally there rest of the image won’t be as detailed, so try moving around and keeping everything at the same finishing. The top half of the head is a bit too large in relation to the rest of the face. One of the shoulders is wider. The neck needs to be elongated. When a person smiles their eyes also smile which means the bottom lid actually curves upwards, and the cheeks also move to accommodate a smile which makes the cheek/mouth lines, I don’t know what they are really called…Portraying emotions on a face can be hard make sure you have a few references when you do. You also need to make sure that the material flows with the individuals body shape, especially in the bust area which can be rather hard. :S
Again I apologize if this comes off as cold, I just suck at writing things up. :S
The redline:
Well i hope that this will help you. I wish you good luck!! ^_^
When you are doing digital always flip your canvas horizontally. When I flipped the image, there were obviously some errors in the position of the character’s body. She comes off being rather stiff, especially in the torso area. Never start detail in one area, you’ll end up burning yourself out, and generally there rest of the image won’t be as detailed, so try moving around and keeping everything at the same finishing. The top half of the head is a bit too large in relation to the rest of the face. One of the shoulders is wider. The neck needs to be elongated. When a person smiles their eyes also smile which means the bottom lid actually curves upwards, and the cheeks also move to accommodate a smile which makes the cheek/mouth lines, I don’t know what they are really called…Portraying emotions on a face can be hard make sure you have a few references when you do. You also need to make sure that the material flows with the individuals body shape, especially in the bust area which can be rather hard. :S
Again I apologize if this comes off as cold, I just suck at writing things up. :S
The redline:
Well i hope that this will help you. I wish you good luck!! ^_^
China Glaze
Eeddey
This is nice, especially the eyes, but I know you want a critique. There will also be a redline link for you at the end. smile Also, I am sorry if this comes off as categorical and dry. I am typing as I redline. smile
When you are doing digital always flip your canvas horizontally. When I flipped the image, there were obviously some errors in the position of the character’s body. She comes off being rather stiff, especially in the torso area. Never start detail in one area, you’ll end up burning yourself out, and generally there rest of the image won’t be as detailed, so try moving around and keeping everything at the same finishing. The top half of the head is a bit too large in relation to the rest of the face. One of the shoulders is wider. The neck needs to be elongated. When a person smiles their eyes also smile which means the bottom lid actually curves upwards, and the cheeks also move to accommodate a smile which makes the cheek/mouth lines, I don’t know what they are really called…Portraying emotions on a face can be hard make sure you have a few references when you do. You also need to make sure that the material flows with the individuals body shape, especially in the bust area which can be rather hard. :S
Again I apologize if this comes off as cold, I just suck at writing things up. :S
The redline:
Well i hope that this will help you. I wish you good luck!! ^_^
When you are doing digital always flip your canvas horizontally. When I flipped the image, there were obviously some errors in the position of the character’s body. She comes off being rather stiff, especially in the torso area. Never start detail in one area, you’ll end up burning yourself out, and generally there rest of the image won’t be as detailed, so try moving around and keeping everything at the same finishing. The top half of the head is a bit too large in relation to the rest of the face. One of the shoulders is wider. The neck needs to be elongated. When a person smiles their eyes also smile which means the bottom lid actually curves upwards, and the cheeks also move to accommodate a smile which makes the cheek/mouth lines, I don’t know what they are really called…Portraying emotions on a face can be hard make sure you have a few references when you do. You also need to make sure that the material flows with the individuals body shape, especially in the bust area which can be rather hard. :S
Again I apologize if this comes off as cold, I just suck at writing things up. :S
The redline:
Well i hope that this will help you. I wish you good luck!! ^_^
Thank you, that was very helpful!
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