Critique please! --esp perspective because it needs work

[Dodii]

◯◡◯ Here's a drawing i'd like critique on. the perspective looks off to me so I'd really appreciate help with that
any other critique is also greatly appreciated bc i tend to not see things well in my own art haha

thank you!

[Asteriale]

Omg *A* This is.... not to sound strange, but the big critter is adorable. Ahem.

Perspective: Look at the legs of your big guy. The limb in the foreground should be larger and thicker then the limb receding into the background.

[[ RenRen ]]

I love this! I can't really help because I suck at perspective, but I think it looks great.

[Dodii]

Asteriale

Omg *A* This is.... not to sound strange, but the big critter is adorable. Ahem.

Perspective: Look at the legs of your big guy. The limb in the foreground should be larger and thicker then the limb receding into the background.

◯◡◯ Ahh thank you so much~! That helps : D

[Asteriale]

Dodii

Asteriale

Omg *A* This is.... not to sound strange, but the big critter is adorable. Ahem.

Perspective: Look at the legs of your big guy. The limb in the foreground should be larger and thicker then the limb receding into the background.

◯◡◯ Ahh thank you so much~! That helps : D

You're most welcome wink whee Happy drawing!

[Master Resonance]

You forshortened the vertical aspects of the limbs but not the horizontal. The vertical foreshortening might be a bit too extreme, if you kept that ratio and matched the rest of the image you should be getting a fisheye effect.
A simpler solution would be to lengthen the legs away from the viewer and try to use single point pers. guide lines to do so accurately.