Critique please? C:

[Skuzzi]

Hey guys,

I am currently working on a reconstruction of my very first OC (I was 12, lol). I started to really like this figure but now that I look at it, it's kind of odd. I don't know why so I thought a critique would be really helpful. You can be casual, too, I don't necessarily need the best literary response. Just be polite, please!

Censored bc of the little bitties on gaia 4laugh

[Nakuya-chan]

Well first of all I think she looks absolutely stunning! She's got a really pretty face and a really nice form to her.

The thing for me that I feel makes her look "off" is she is very elongated. Her whole body seems longer than it needs to be. I think you could for lack of better word, "smoosh" her torso some as well as shorten her neck up a bit. Its always a little hard to tell, because sometimes you want a nice tall character but they look a little stretched. You could also make her head slightly larger.

[kirekae]

body is too long, everything below the boobs is pretty much broken

[Skuzzi]

Nakuya-chan

Well first of all I think she looks absolutely stunning! She's got a really pretty face and a really nice form to her.

The thing for me that I feel makes her look "off" is she is very elongated. Her whole body seems longer than it needs to be. I think you could for lack of better word, "smoosh" her torso some as well as shorten her neck up a bit. Its always a little hard to tell, because sometimes you want a nice tall character but they look a little stretched. You could also make her head slightly larger.

Ty heart

[zheida]

if you'd like i can help with a red line? I have a little easier time doing that than explaining! Its a really good start though!!