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Post: 93305325_1 created on Tue, 22 Jul 2014 23:19:14 +0000
Posted: Tue, 22 Jul 2014 23:19:14 +0000

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Post: 93305325_2 created on Wed, 23 Jul 2014 04:04:49 +0000
Posted: Wed, 23 Jul 2014 04:04:49 +0000

it looks kinda flat
good
but flat
maybe add a bit more shading??

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Post: 93305325_3 created on Wed, 23 Jul 2014 07:48:24 +0000
Posted: Wed, 23 Jul 2014 07:48:24 +0000

yeah I agree it looks flat. not just in terms of shading but also the red is so dark and dull and the black is so weak that nothing really stands out. at all. it all becomes very muddy.

(ps there's no reason to call it shitty.)

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Post: 93305325_4 created on Wed, 23 Jul 2014 10:23:56 +0000
Posted: Wed, 23 Jul 2014 10:23:56 +0000

As everyone said before, its very flat. You should add some highlights, the tag is completely illegible.

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