Could these edits sell?

[RaSpBeRrYmOcHaChInOhEaRt]

I did the aura and weapons on this.

Heres one without the aura.

Heres the stuff I did for myself. (Don't mind the last because I was too lazy to take it out. blaugh )
Please give me some advice on how to better these and future works I do please.

[KalsamR]

Less pink, and more shading needed. 3nodding

[[Kyoko Yumenaka]]

I would say a bit more shading....I love the Sailor Jupiter one <33