Comic Book Angel (c&c Needed!!) - picture updated

[Sleepy Time]

A local comic book shop is having a mascot contest, and I'm thinking she'll be my entry. The final will be in colour, this was just slapped on to give an idea of shading and stuff. Suggestions are very welcome, since I'd really like to win!



edit: Foot fixed (hopefully), shirt cropped, sleeves added under t-shirt sleeves, right hand changed.

[Kin Kee]

Saiera

A local comic book shop is having a mascot contest, and I'm thinking she'll be my entry. The final will be in colour, this was just slapped on to give an idea of shading and stuff. Suggestions are very welcome, since I'd really like to win!

Well since I haven't seen the competition, I'm not sure. I really think you have a great chance of winning. It looks absolutely great. whee very nice job. =D

[Sleepy Time]

belldandy44

Saiera

A local comic book shop is having a mascot contest, and I'm thinking she'll be my entry. The final will be in colour, this was just slapped on to give an idea of shading and stuff. Suggestions are very welcome, since I'd really like to win!

Well since I haven't seen the competition, I'm not sure. I really think you have a great chance of winning. It looks absolutely great. whee very nice job. =D

Thank you ^_^

[pi3.14]

I think its a wonderful drawing. I really do. But.... a comic book store? I think that it would be too girly (not that I have a problem with that) but whoever is judging it might. sweatdrop Im not trying to be mean. Just something without wings on her head? Maybe? And on her back. Just suggesting. Maybe even a guy? I dunno, my comic book store only had guys there.

[Sleepy Time]

pi3.14

I think its a wonderful drawing. I really do. But.... a comic book store? I think that it would be too girly (not that I have a problem with that) but whoever is judging it might. sweatdrop Im not trying to be mean. Just something without wings on her head? Maybe? And on her back. Just suggesting. Maybe even a guy? I dunno, my comic book store only had guys there.

Yeah, I thought that might be a problem... I guess I'll try to guy it up (??) a little more before submitting it.

[jneb]

yea I kinda have to agree with pi3.14 - the drawing is really nice, but when I think of a comic book mascot, I don't think of a girl with wings sweatdrop usually..
but, hey, we're not the ones deciding who the winner will be, so best of luck whee domokun
erm, anyways.. some c&c
her right foot.. seems a little odd.. mishapenly bent? lol.. seems to me.. like it is..
and her right hand.. where the pinky and the edge of her hand is.. seems a little odd to me.. might be the angle/position of the pinky
umm.. other than that, it's good.. with a good pose 3nodding

[Alice B Dawson]

i like the "wash" look to it... cool cool

[AsWaNgiloilo]

It's a very nice drawing. Good luck xd

[Sleepy Time]

benj-O

yea I kinda have to agree with pi3.14 - the drawing is really nice, but when I think of a comic book mascot, I don't think of a girl with wings sweatdrop usually..
but, hey, we're not the ones deciding who the winner will be, so best of luck whee domokun
erm, anyways.. some c&c
her right foot.. seems a little odd.. mishapenly bent? lol.. seems to me.. like it is..
and her right hand.. where the pinky and the edge of her hand is.. seems a little odd to me.. might be the angle/position of the pinky
umm.. other than that, it's good.. with a good pose 3nodding

Thankyou for letting me know bout the weird bits! 3nodding I'll try to fix them up.

[pi3.14]

Saiera

pi3.14

I think its a wonderful drawing. I really do. But.... a comic book store? I think that it would be too girly (not that I have a problem with that) but whoever is judging it might. sweatdrop Im not trying to be mean. Just something without wings on her head? Maybe? And on her back. Just suggesting. Maybe even a guy? I dunno, my comic book store only had guys there.

Yeah, I thought that might be a problem... I guess I'll try to guy it up (??) a little more before submitting it.

hehe... Good Luck! But its your own decision, Im just making a suggestion.

[JazzKatt]

that looks really good! But her arms are a little bit too long...

and if you target audience is going to be comic book shop guys, you might want to make her more sexy than cute...

^_^ just some suggestions