Black and white photos (critique!)

[sawkpuppet]

I apologize for the size:










(Taken with a Canon T3)

[sawkpuppet]

several hours later and no critique. tsk tsk.

[xmetalynxx]

i like them a lot! especially the 2nd one of the structure ^^ very neat!

[it means no worries]

wow, great pictures!
very good composition!

[Milk Meat]

they are good you really have an eye for finding natural compositions. i would suggest always being aware of the lighting when you take photos of naturally found objects because the last and first photographs are a bit too dark so i'm not entirely sure about what's happening in them but it's all chance you know emotion_yatta

[sawkpuppet]

Dolly ICU

they are good you really have an eye for finding natural compositions. i would suggest always being aware of the lighting when you take photos of naturally found objects because the last and first photographs are a bit too dark so i'm not entirely sure about what's happening in them but it's all chance you know emotion_yatta

Thanks! Yeah, I agree they are a bit darker than normal. in the first one, I wasn't exposing as long as I wanted it to be due to cars driving on the bridge, causing the bridge to vibrate and blur my pictures. Tis a shame.

[Morbid-Manda]

only problem i have really is the one of the child. It's really hard to work with children i understand that, the face isn't in great focus, which is disapointing. Something i was thought was always focus on the eyes.

[XxFoncexX]

These are all very impressive 3nodding keep up the awesome work! I am also slightly jealous that you have a canon... I will still <3 your forum and forgive you for the size :p

[Frozen Poptart Sprinkles]

I like the 2nd one a lot, and the last image. #2 has a very nice composition and strong focus. I would try to bring out some stronger small white highlights, like zones IX/X, especially in the last one. And the child image has some dust that's very distracting, as well as a lack of sharpness on her face.