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It is very cute. although it is hard to critique chibi's XD
I was scanning your other art too and it is very good.
the only constructive criticism i can give you is your perspective of faces are a little off...but other than that your proportions are good.

Try drawing from a model so you can see how a persons face looks...where their mouth is compared to their nose and eyes when they are turned at a 3/4 angle or something.
 
     

!Nyappy!
 
i like the idea you went with and most of the drawing the only thing i would change is the eyes make them a little more cartoony like the rest of the picter
     
Baple_Maconbar
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Honestly your art is ADORABLE!!! whee Would you bewilling to do my avi?
 
     


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Emrulay
Honestly your art is ADORABLE!!! whee Would you bewilling to do my avi?

I have an art shop on gaia HERE!

thank you everyone for the praise :3
I may post some more things that need rating up some time (I'm messing with new styles allot)
if I do one allong the same style as this I will post a link ehre and you can say if I've improved :3
thank you again people ^_^
     
Bombshell93
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and @ emerald.thorn:

your signature makes you look like a sleazy little internet slut but we all know you're probably a fat a** with no friends that sits at the computer all day for a want of something better to do with your life. go eat some pizza lard a**.




wow that is incredibly rude. I'm not going to get upset about it however because this is the internet and I am aware that it's full of rude losers like you who have nothing better to do with their time than to insult people who are just minding their own business.
However drawing IS a skill, and a far more valuable one than knowing how to make people hate you.

PS: I don't think that you can even joke about other people's relationships as it is apprent that you have none and never will rolleyes
 
     
 
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and a devil on my shoulder
a phone in the other
and i cant get a hold of her
what a crush to do?
when he cant get through

I think you need darker shading on the clothes they look flat compared to everything else in the drawing. And since you are going for a chibi style, the eyes could actually be bigger.
 
     

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You can also find more of my art here --> http://animegirlmarron.deviantart.com/

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ps: cute picture of you and your gf too! XD
     
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