I submitted the first page to one of my favorite comics that my boyfriend has drawn...
You can see it here-->Art Arena

Tell me what you think of it?
entriguing enough beginning?
Also have first page in color if you wanna see it colored will post it in this thread.

I love to hear people's opinions on this stuff... always wondering if I love it because it's my boyfriend's or if it's just really that good. ^_^