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The year was 2028. It has been about 12 years since the "Halo Brücke" Started their attack on the major powers of earth. as a faction, they easily destroyed any obstacle and defense the world has sent against them. And till now, a desperate fight is waged against this brutal enemies and the major world powers have caused infighting for control over resources have not made things any better.

Rewriting a plot on the wtiter's section.

I'm still working on factions but right now I only have Halo Bruke:
Most of their fighters are composed of Super Slyphs

Faction 1(Europe)
Characters
(maim)Dimitri Romolov: At a young age, he enlisted in the military to avenge his fallen uncle from the last war. Dimitri has shown an impressive ability...of being able to survive from being shot down multiple times. He later pilots the prototype "Bruktyafus", a Su-47 Berkut with a learning AI.

Hans Putin: the squad leader of Dimitri's group. He pilots a a commander type Su-27

Fedor Lenin: Hans wingmen. He still claims his a straight guy despite recent rumors of his sexuality. Pilots a regularSu-35

Machalka Sambor: Some guy who is addicted to coffee and naps. Pilots a Su-35
Melnik Sambor: Machalka's sister. She's the only pilot who matches that of Hans. Pilots a Su-35

Faction 2(US)
Characters

Axel Torres: Is Dimitri's childhood friend back before halo first attacked. She joined the military under her Father's orders willingly. Though her goal is to gain better bragging rights than her dad's. One of the 3 ace, she more or less excels at ground attack and pilots a heavily modified A-10 thunderbolt.

Jackson Ross: The second ace in the squad. He was just a poverty stricken man, but he soon proved to be one of this factions best pilots. Hates pretty women, or at least doesn't trust them. His current goal is to pay off 3.8 mil debt his mother left him. Pilots an F-22 raptor

Hikaru Daiz: Is Axel's Bestfriend. He was drafted in the military by mistake and is currently saving 1.5 million to pay off his contract. Like Dimitri, he has uncanny ability to survive being shot down. Pilots an F/A-18 Hornet

Faction 3(Asia)
Characters: Hashim Ahmad: An Arabian Pilot who seeks to make a name out of himself. Filled with passion he soars the air with unorthodx moves. His also very friendly and a hard drinker.Pilots an F-16 Fighting Falcon.

Kenji Fujiwara: The person who tricked Hikaru in being enlisted in the military. Not much known as to why he did it. Pilots an F-20

Hyo Zeng: One Korea's ace pilot. His a very lucky guy who seems to be able to share his luck with fellow pilots, as they usually comeback with little to no casualties. He dislikes gambling however. Pilots a T-50

I really need to improve on this plot, and I'm still working on a few battles. But what did you think?

And if you can give me any obscure planes you really love. Just tell me, and I'll try making a character for it to pilot.
すごいものがたり、あにき。
Alkaide
すごいものがたり、あにき。
Cool story bro?
Currybutt
Alkaide
すごいものがたり、あにき。
Cool story bro?


"Amazing story, big brother"
Apparently so.

Also OP. No F-15? cry
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Not anime related. But I'll give you credit for it not being highschool or superpowered yaoi s**t. And maybe, because I like the thunderbolt...
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Alkaide
すごいものがたり、あにき。
Hoc cor mei metum atrum lacrimat...

I was able to recognize the phrase only because of the context, and the "の (no)" from monogatari (from anime titles such as Suzumiya Haruhi no Yuutsu with the spinning の, and "あ (a)" from aniki (from ...H games redface ).

...atqui animus meus insaniam sanguinat albam.
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Alkaide
すごいものがたり、あにき。
i think i was able to translate that, was that possibly "Cool story bro" ? emotion_kirakira
Berserker Hijack

Also OP. No F-15? cry


That's a great one. Thanks for the suggestion mrgreen
I am actually interested.

This may be on of the best "I'm writing a story" thread ever posted here in the AMC.
Now honestly this is not the correct forum, try the writers forum.
But yeah, count me on board.
Are you drawing this? If so I would love to see some artwork.
Nougami Tork
I am actually interested.

This may be on of the best "I'm writing a story" thread ever posted here in the AMC.
Now honestly this is not the correct forum, try the writers forum.
But yeah, count me on board.
Are you drawing this? If so I would love to see some artwork.


Yep, I'm just finalizing the characters, the uniforms, and the logos
Though, animating the fight scene is...I might need to study more about aircrafts. Especially this.


Oh and thanks for the correction. I'll try my luck on the writers forum. mrgreen
I know original concepts is not anime related. But, this is actually a really good idea you have here Op. I mean its better than the usual my story threads I see at times in this forum.

Also I like your characters, especially the poor dude.
I'd like to read this story, if it ever comes out. The aircraft intrigue me, and the characters increase the interest.
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Alkaide

Currybutt

SunnyXnsanity

Tama_Mantic


So okay. You ignore I'm making an anime threads that are bad and not attempt to derail it with this kind of s**t
And when you're given some something nice on the table. You attempt to derail it with crap

Explain to me this bullshit you ******** faggots? emotion_donotwant

Also OP revise the plot. The base is good, but its feels a little lacking
Nougami Tork
I am actually interested.

This may be on of the best "I'm writing a story" thread ever posted here in the AMC.
Now honestly this is not the correct forum, try the writers forum.
But yeah, count me on board.
Are you drawing this? If so I would love to see some artwork.

The Comic Creators forum would work too...especially since they're full of much less bullshit than the writers forum is.

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