I Have an Online Manga

[ria-chi]

I have an online manga, I would love to know what you guys think (^w^)
I request you be polite, but criticism is welcome
here is the site
www.flossandchaos.com

[s h a s h a r o o -xx]

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I got kicked off the fast computer so I can't play zomg. I guess I'll read this. Hmm it's not noobish either, looks promising enough.

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[grace de]

Wow! Thats really pretty good! You should color some of it, but then again it looks like you spent alot of time on the illustration area, so i could understand if you didnt want to color. Otherwise, good work! Now, off to actually read it.

[grace de]

Intresting start, i'd like to see where it goes.

[Encourage]

I see good art!
I like good art...

[Black roses are sexy]

It looks very nice. Well done and keep up the good work.

I'll have to actually read it tomorrow. I have to go to bed.

But what I don't understand is, why put it online? Are you going to sell it. Or do you just want to see the responses that you are going to get from it?

[babyl10]

I love the eyes and fashion design!
But... the font of the words is... not manga-like. It's... stiff. I think a font like that one that starts with "comic" or something like that would be better.
It's incomplete so I don't really get the plot yet but... is this summary accurate?:
A person whose name I forget moves to the countryside for some reason relating to their actions in the city where they previously lived. They, being outgoing and energenic, take a walk. While getting frustrated over there being nothing but farms and cows, a creature attacks them.
Mii~

[Les Yeux Noir]

wow, this actually looks...good
gold star for you

[cheesecaake]

Bookmarked.
The art is great, and the story looks like it will be pretty interesting.

[Sebastian At Your Service]

Finally.

A webcomic with some good artwork.

[ria-chi]

wow, thanks everyone (^w^)

@Covered_in_Black_Solitude
I would like to sell this, however, there isnt a market for fledgling artist like me... have you heard of megatokyo? it is an online manga that started out like mine, and its his full time job now. I would like to use this site to gather a fan base, and eventually get published.

@babyl10
thats an intresting comment about the font... I will look at some manga again. also~ thats pretty much it.. so far... I will be updating soon, so keep checking ^w^

[Daveomo]

It looks like it will be pretty epic, best of luck!

[mustnotclick]

Looks good but I'm not sure about the story (because I haven't read it yet sweatdrop ). Just because the artwork is nice doesn't mean the story is... many seem to forget that.

[BlondeManga]

Sayonara mata ne genki de ite ne zutto zutto wasurenai kara

And here I thought we were all going to be tricked into something horrible.
I hope that you are able to publish this one day. I think it'll do well.

Sayonara kitto mata aeru yo ne? Yakusoku dayo! yubikiri genman

[iTsunayoshi Sawada]

[[#1, most obsessive Tsunayoshi Sawada, Giotto, Hayato Gokudera, Spanner, Gabishi, Agito, Yoite, Fran (KHR), and Jack Frost fanwhore in the universe.]]
[[Waifu of Tsunayoshi Sawada, Hayato Gokudera, Giotto, Spanner, and Basil.]]
[[My OTP is, and always will be, 5927. Hayato belongs with Tsuna and no other.]]

A/M/C's most rabid, obsessive, and possessive Tsunayoshi Sawada fantard.

Looks promising. I like your art style.
*bookmarks*

Kit has claimed Tsunayoshi Sawada. Kit literally loves Tsunayoshi. Hands off, bitches.
My claims on Hayato, Giotto, and Spanner are still in effect. Yeah, that's right. They're still mine.

[[#1 Anti-Yamamoto Fantard in the universe. I want him dead.]]
[[#1 Anti-8059 Fantard in the universe. I will kill you if you mention it to me.]]
[[I've claimed Fran and his Froggie Hat~]]